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Its good but there are some grammar mistakes. The character type is kinda overused sometimes but the personality is pretty accurate to someone who learned cqc
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I don't really have an objective review star wise, but since you seem to know what you're doing, I'll give you 5 stars. Call me biased, but on top of displaying proper grammar and a unique System, this is also a non-harem story with Ganyu being the main love interest? I think you've made a really good first impression on me so far with these first two chapters (at this point of you writing your story), so keep it up. I look forward to seeing what you put out next. I do have to ask though, Pokemon Violet is a thing, so obviously he's from 2022, so is this an 'AU' Earth where Genshin isn't a thing or does he just not know about Genshin Impact, so he wouldn't know about Teyvat at all?
Its good but there are some grammar mistakes. The character type is kinda overused sometimes but the personality is pretty accurate to someone who learned cqc
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I don't really have an objective review star wise, but since you seem to know what you're doing, I'll give you 5 stars. Call me biased, but on top of displaying proper grammar and a unique System, this is also a non-harem story with Ganyu being the main love interest? I think you've made a really good first impression on me so far with these first two chapters (at this point of you writing your story), so keep it up. I look forward to seeing what you put out next. I do have to ask though, Pokemon Violet is a thing, so obviously he's from 2022, so is this an 'AU' Earth where Genshin isn't a thing or does he just not know about Genshin Impact, so he wouldn't know about Teyvat at all?
looks interesting. ... .... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️