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Why is the explanation more than the plot. you have half a chapter of plot and interaction and the next one and half chapter of author just explaining things. just move on with the plot. there is no need to explain everything as we all already know of the things you explain. just keep it to one or two paragraphs.
For any one wondering the MTL should be “Alien Dragon of Douluo” in Uukanshu.com. The more you know as they say.
I have read it upto 1159 chaps can say the story is average, but quite good for reading ....................................................
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ネタバレを明かす Why is the explanation more than the plot. you have half a chapter of plot and interaction and the next one and half chapter of author just explaining things. just move on with the plot. there is no need to explain everything as we all already know of the things you explain. just keep it to one or two paragraphs.
For any one wondering the MTL should be “Alien Dragon of Douluo” in Uukanshu.com. The more you know as they say.
I have read it upto 1159 chaps can say the story is average, but quite good for reading ....................................................
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