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Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl.
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome that's all I can say after reading it...............................................................
The MC is so unlikable it's hard to even read and his personality is weak AF, only gets pushed around by main cast and immediately bends over backwards.
I might be slightly late to reading this as I stopped using WebNovel for a while but I wanted to give this fic a try because I enjoyed steel waste, So far I’m over 200 chapters in and the writing quality is excellent and the book is finished so that speaks for the updating frequency, the storylines where interesting but standard for the cyberpunk setting but it seems like some characters only exist for the purpose of perpetuating misery the sister being alive for instance has no real relevance to any plot points, they all could have be done if she was dead she only seems to be alive to be a source of pain and misery or to get rid of another unnecessary character being max’s daughter as she provided little to no real motivation that moved the plot forward or even develop a side plot. There are many plot points with the aforementioned characters that annoy me but I have enjoyed the overall story so far.
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Real good through out the whole thing.Keept up the cyberpunk feel throughout the whole book.My main gripe would be the ending. not because the mc turns into a world ending nanite gray goo scenario. But rather because he doesn't.He becomes a gray goo that destroys night city but instead of spreading underneat the world for securities sake and gaining more processing power he destroys the blackwall and lets rogue ai take over the world and by extension lets the people who escaped night city and were close to him die.He could easily take over the old net beyond the black wall when he finds out that anything beyond his utopia is the only non infected place on earth.He could easily save his friends like judy or stop the eventual demise of his utopia. But instead he doesn't.which will eventually end him and let the rogue ai take over his nanites after some time.
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just a waste of time, author even justified r@p€ so why would i give it a higher stars.......................................................................................................................... btw what will you do if someone r@p€d your sister or other family members, fall in love with that said r@p¡$t, and that r@p¡$t want to start a family with her?
Story was pretty good, the only thing i really hated was the nanites and how they had sentience, but other than that it was good...................................
very good reading experience. it was like playing the game and watching anime together but with zombies perspective
i'lls top review when this fic get at least 4 stars. I refuse to have one of my favorite stories be anything less than that
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This is definitely the best cyberpunk fanfic out there, but i cant bring myself to give this more than 3 stars. The author suddenly decided to ruin his novel in the last arc, the most mindblowinly unnecessary way i've seen a novel get ruined.The ending arc felt rushed, but still was going in a pretty good direction, but halfway through it author decided to destroy all the worldbuilding he did in a single scene, i really cant see this as anything other than self sabotage on his part that i will never understand, dude literally broke his own world, idk what kind of drugs he was on when he wrote that "twist" at the end, man i wish he had dropped this instead of doing that. This couldve easily ended up as one of the best fanfics here on WN if had just kept the natural course of events, but author had other plans i guess...
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This is literally worth nothing, it's creation serves no purpose, so I'm just going to give this one star for the one dollar Yun Che personality.
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Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl. Rebecca is Best Girl.
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome that's all I can say after reading it...............................................................
The MC is so unlikable it's hard to even read and his personality is weak AF, only gets pushed around by main cast and immediately bends over backwards.
I might be slightly late to reading this as I stopped using WebNovel for a while but I wanted to give this fic a try because I enjoyed steel waste, So far I’m over 200 chapters in and the writing quality is excellent and the book is finished so that speaks for the updating frequency, the storylines where interesting but standard for the cyberpunk setting but it seems like some characters only exist for the purpose of perpetuating misery the sister being alive for instance has no real relevance to any plot points, they all could have be done if she was dead she only seems to be alive to be a source of pain and misery or to get rid of another unnecessary character being max’s daughter as she provided little to no real motivation that moved the plot forward or even develop a side plot. There are many plot points with the aforementioned characters that annoy me but I have enjoyed the overall story so far.
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ネタバレを明かす Real good through out the whole thing.Keept up the cyberpunk feel throughout the whole book.My main gripe would be the ending. not because the mc turns into a world ending nanite gray goo scenario. But rather because he doesn't.He becomes a gray goo that destroys night city but instead of spreading underneat the world for securities sake and gaining more processing power he destroys the blackwall and lets rogue ai take over the world and by extension lets the people who escaped night city and were close to him die.He could easily take over the old net beyond the black wall when he finds out that anything beyond his utopia is the only non infected place on earth.He could easily save his friends like judy or stop the eventual demise of his utopia. But instead he doesn't.which will eventually end him and let the rogue ai take over his nanites after some time.
ネタバレを明かす just a waste of time, author even justified r@p€ so why would i give it a higher stars.......................................................................................................................... btw what will you do if someone r@p€d your sister or other family members, fall in love with that said r@p¡$t, and that r@p¡$t want to start a family with her?
Story was pretty good, the only thing i really hated was the nanites and how they had sentience, but other than that it was good...................................
very good reading experience. it was like playing the game and watching anime together but with zombies perspective
i'lls top review when this fic get at least 4 stars. I refuse to have one of my favorite stories be anything less than that
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This is definitely the best cyberpunk fanfic out there, but i cant bring myself to give this more than 3 stars. The author suddenly decided to ruin his novel in the last arc, the most mindblowinly unnecessary way i've seen a novel get ruined.The ending arc felt rushed, but still was going in a pretty good direction, but halfway through it author decided to destroy all the worldbuilding he did in a single scene, i really cant see this as anything other than self sabotage on his part that i will never understand, dude literally broke his own world, idk what kind of drugs he was on when he wrote that "twist" at the end, man i wish he had dropped this instead of doing that. This couldve easily ended up as one of the best fanfics here on WN if had just kept the natural course of events, but author had other plans i guess...
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This is literally worth nothing, it's creation serves no purpose, so I'm just going to give this one star for the one dollar Yun Che personality.
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