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it would be a higher rating but the book has a lot of grammer mistakes that made me drop it at chapter 3. if the author is willing to go back and edit all the grammer mistakes ill reread it but for now my head hurts trying to read threw it
trashy writing because it always change's the names of some character like green moth to blue moth can you make some sense? well overall plot is good
I like how author is allowing the MC to have a genuine head start but now I would like it if he can maintain the gender of all the characters. please 🙏
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Noa Is a boy, i was repair my grammar, enjoy my novel and wait for the next chapter , gift my account if u enjoy my novel ^^ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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it would be a higher rating but the book has a lot of grammer mistakes that made me drop it at chapter 3. if the author is willing to go back and edit all the grammer mistakes ill reread it but for now my head hurts trying to read threw it
trashy writing because it always change's the names of some character like green moth to blue moth can you make some sense? well overall plot is good
I like how author is allowing the MC to have a genuine head start but now I would like it if he can maintain the gender of all the characters. please 🙏
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Noa Is a boy, i was repair my grammar, enjoy my novel and wait for the next chapter , gift my account if u enjoy my novel ^^ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]