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this has alot of potential as an fanfiction I hope the author did not really drop it
#harem came later. It didn't exist at first. I thought this series was a valuable series. but when #harem is added to it, I quit the series. I do not recommend reading it.
It's horrendous, the high rating is for no reason other than the fact it's 'The Boys'. The novel is so unbelievably bad in every way, from the grammar, relationship building and plot in general. Reading this made me want to rip out my eyes.
writing quality: 4 story development: 4 character design: 5 update stability: 2 world background: 4 I know the review is a little harsh but that's how I am. my main problem is update stability. its all over the place.
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I like the premise of the story but the gramemar and spelling are so bad it hurt. I can ignore some spellingg errors but its like every sentence words are wrong or misssing. Please get someone to spell check or download Grammarly
Kinda dope to see AFO but this IS a world without quirks so I'm curious how the author tackles this .......................................
So far it's been very good for me, I'm enjoying it a lot, I'm dying to see him punching billy I hope it happens, keep up the good work you're doing author 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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amazing just want more chapters!!! .....................................................................................................................
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Such a great story I can't wait for more. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
me gusta los cambios sutiles en la mentalidad del mc, es por eso que decidí darle una reseña, también es difícil encontrar un buen fanfic de the boys. Buen trabajo autor, espero mas actualizaciones.----------- I like the subtle changes in the mentality of the mc, that's why I decided to give him a review, it's also hard to find a good fanfic of the boys. Good job author, I look forward to more updates
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thanks! can't wait for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great start author keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
not many the boys fanfics, can't wait for more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The hero is kind of cool because he has the ultimate superpower, no flaws and almost from birth excellent control over it. As a character, he is average and below, nothing good, nothing particularly bad. Where are the hero's limitations, at least some? What is the point, the conflict is still a mystery. There is plot armor, since stupidity sometimes goes unpunished. Instant relationships for the sake of instant drama. Some tension, conventionality of the plot. The hero is kind of "smart", but it seems that this is achieved at the cost of reducing the intelligence of those around him. The good chapters are voluminous. The hero is essentially a character with the powers of "All for One" who took Homelander's place in The Boys and seems to be better than him (if not all). But in fact, a cartoonishly ugly overkill / excess, without any advantages. But I've only read 10 chapters, it probably gets better from here on out. - Isn't that right, optimists?
ネタバレを明かす this has alot of potential as an fanfiction I hope the author did not really drop it
#harem came later. It didn't exist at first. I thought this series was a valuable series. but when #harem is added to it, I quit the series. I do not recommend reading it.
It's horrendous, the high rating is for no reason other than the fact it's 'The Boys'. The novel is so unbelievably bad in every way, from the grammar, relationship building and plot in general. Reading this made me want to rip out my eyes.
writing quality: 4 story development: 4 character design: 5 update stability: 2 world background: 4 I know the review is a little harsh but that's how I am. my main problem is update stability. its all over the place.
C nul c juste un h9melander en plus [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
Loving it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the premise of the story but the gramemar and spelling are so bad it hurt. I can ignore some spellingg errors but its like every sentence words are wrong or misssing. Please get someone to spell check or download Grammarly
Kinda dope to see AFO but this IS a world without quirks so I'm curious how the author tackles this .......................................
So far it's been very good for me, I'm enjoying it a lot, I'm dying to see him punching billy I hope it happens, keep up the good work you're doing author 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
more I want more,more I want more,more I want more,more I want more,more I want more,more I want more,more I want more,more I want more,more I want more
amazing just want more chapters!!! .....................................................................................................................
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Such a great story I can't wait for more. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
me gusta los cambios sutiles en la mentalidad del mc, es por eso que decidí darle una reseña, también es difícil encontrar un buen fanfic de the boys. Buen trabajo autor, espero mas actualizaciones.----------- I like the subtle changes in the mentality of the mc, that's why I decided to give him a review, it's also hard to find a good fanfic of the boys. Good job author, I look forward to more updates
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Great start author keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
not many the boys fanfics, can't wait for more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The hero is kind of cool because he has the ultimate superpower, no flaws and almost from birth excellent control over it. As a character, he is average and below, nothing good, nothing particularly bad. Where are the hero's limitations, at least some? What is the point, the conflict is still a mystery. There is plot armor, since stupidity sometimes goes unpunished. Instant relationships for the sake of instant drama. Some tension, conventionality of the plot. The hero is kind of "smart", but it seems that this is achieved at the cost of reducing the intelligence of those around him. The good chapters are voluminous. The hero is essentially a character with the powers of "All for One" who took Homelander's place in The Boys and seems to be better than him (if not all). But in fact, a cartoonishly ugly overkill / excess, without any advantages. But I've only read 10 chapters, it probably gets better from here on out. - Isn't that right, optimists?
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