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well the author just write what he want even though he didn't know what he's writing🤧
Update please 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
there is nothing good here just the braindead MC {spam} [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Bro, I like the story. Just don't rush it, and before adding more skills or power up, make him train with what the Mc has, but overall is a good story.
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La trama de DXD es una de las más fáciles de explotar, tiene un mc pésimo y una trama muy fácil. ¿Cómo pueden arruinar un fic como este? La trama de DXD es una de las más fáciles de explotar, tiene un mc pésimo y una trama muy fácil. ¿Cómo pueden arruinar un fic como este?
Kenapa harus rias. Kenapa harus rias. Setiap fanfic dxd mesti berpacaran dengan rias. Sungguh fanfic yg monoton. Tapi lanjut [img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am disappointed. There may be a spoiler in there, so be careful. I more or less knew what to expect from this story by tags, description and picture. I don't really mind changes from canon (mainly that characters are out of characters and few more like genderbending characters). I may not like some them, but I don'r mind them. My problem with this story is mainly characterdesign and quality of writing, if we go by webnovel's style of rating. I don't feel much when I read it, except maybe a bit of annoyance. MC says one thing, and then does another (like with whole "hiding his powers to find true nakama" ). Sometimes behaves like he has canon knowledge and sometimes like he does not. I don't even try to characterize MC, because it makes no sense. I can't grasp his motivation. I can't find anything holding my attention to the story. It's average, bit confusing, and basically pokemon type harem from the looks of it. No interesting story, as for now it looks like cannon with few addtions that won't change anything, no character development to speak of, nothing that really making me want to continue reading it, even if I will probably give it another chance when I find some time. For now I would give this 5, maybe 5.5 out of 10 points.
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Autor-San não desanime estarei lendo até o final! Estou torcendo por você então faça o seu melhor! Espero que lance novos capítulos logo! A propósito se você achar uma boa ideia não deixa o mc só no mundo de DXD tem outros mundos que podem fazer você ter uma inspiração maior e pode melhorar o enredo! Pelo fato do mc ser muito forte os outros mundos teriam que ser muito op recomendo fate, god slayer e death march!
One of the most trashiest fanfic I ever read. I am convinced That the author is trying to make one of the worst fanfics, in existence.
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hello Author ,first of all I want to say thankyou for the fanfic to you and second to tell you,you are doing a great job and keep going on with your writing I have read many Fan-Fics and your is one of the better ones with less mistakes and proper character I know it has many flaws but that can still be fixed given time and also thankyou for not making this another 'Issei' styled fiction, I am genuinely annoyed by that and that was the main reason why I dropped the anime but still you are doing great with the romance and character development dont'tbe discouraged by other negative reviews and keep writing and please finish it I haven't read anything beyond what the anime produced because genuinely I am not a big fan of harem if given proper romantic & emotional development than its alright for me I am more into romance rather than collecting girls to Make harem but thats my personal opinion & taste but you are geniuenly introducing and developing the characters well which even the author of the main novel didn't do until later voulmes so I give you a five star for that and I genuinely request you to complete it if in future incase you decide to drop it just spoil me in the reply what you had planned in mind for and till the end,Thankyou
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it's very good 👍 if somebody dislike it then don't read it but in my opinion its good only updating is the problem 😃
Even though there are a lot of plot holes, it's fun, so I give it 3 stars. Especially on the weird plot, and the strength of the characters. But yeah, it's fun
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
If you want to start reading this, go read the wiki of tensura and DxD, it's much more entertaining. The wiki, aside for the list of skills, it also has some details. This doesn't
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well the author just write what he want even though he didn't know what he's writing🤧
Update please 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
there is nothing good here just the braindead MC {spam} [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Bro, I like the story. Just don't rush it, and before adding more skills or power up, make him train with what the Mc has, but overall is a good story.
Like it but please update more //////////////////////////////////////////////////////// ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
La trama de DXD es una de las más fáciles de explotar, tiene un mc pésimo y una trama muy fácil. ¿Cómo pueden arruinar un fic como este? La trama de DXD es una de las más fáciles de explotar, tiene un mc pésimo y una trama muy fácil. ¿Cómo pueden arruinar un fic como este?
Kenapa harus rias. Kenapa harus rias. Setiap fanfic dxd mesti berpacaran dengan rias. Sungguh fanfic yg monoton. Tapi lanjut [img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am disappointed. There may be a spoiler in there, so be careful. I more or less knew what to expect from this story by tags, description and picture. I don't really mind changes from canon (mainly that characters are out of characters and few more like genderbending characters). I may not like some them, but I don'r mind them. My problem with this story is mainly characterdesign and quality of writing, if we go by webnovel's style of rating. I don't feel much when I read it, except maybe a bit of annoyance. MC says one thing, and then does another (like with whole "hiding his powers to find true nakama" ). Sometimes behaves like he has canon knowledge and sometimes like he does not. I don't even try to characterize MC, because it makes no sense. I can't grasp his motivation. I can't find anything holding my attention to the story. It's average, bit confusing, and basically pokemon type harem from the looks of it. No interesting story, as for now it looks like cannon with few addtions that won't change anything, no character development to speak of, nothing that really making me want to continue reading it, even if I will probably give it another chance when I find some time. For now I would give this 5, maybe 5.5 out of 10 points.
ネタバレを明かす Autor-San não desanime estarei lendo até o final! Estou torcendo por você então faça o seu melhor! Espero que lance novos capítulos logo! A propósito se você achar uma boa ideia não deixa o mc só no mundo de DXD tem outros mundos que podem fazer você ter uma inspiração maior e pode melhorar o enredo! Pelo fato do mc ser muito forte os outros mundos teriam que ser muito op recomendo fate, god slayer e death march!
One of the most trashiest fanfic I ever read. I am convinced That the author is trying to make one of the worst fanfics, in existence.
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hello Author ,first of all I want to say thankyou for the fanfic to you and second to tell you,you are doing a great job and keep going on with your writing I have read many Fan-Fics and your is one of the better ones with less mistakes and proper character I know it has many flaws but that can still be fixed given time and also thankyou for not making this another 'Issei' styled fiction, I am genuinely annoyed by that and that was the main reason why I dropped the anime but still you are doing great with the romance and character development dont'tbe discouraged by other negative reviews and keep writing and please finish it I haven't read anything beyond what the anime produced because genuinely I am not a big fan of harem if given proper romantic & emotional development than its alright for me I am more into romance rather than collecting girls to Make harem but thats my personal opinion & taste but you are geniuenly introducing and developing the characters well which even the author of the main novel didn't do until later voulmes so I give you a five star for that and I genuinely request you to complete it if in future incase you decide to drop it just spoil me in the reply what you had planned in mind for and till the end,Thankyou
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it's very good 👍 if somebody dislike it then don't read it but in my opinion its good only updating is the problem 😃
Even though there are a lot of plot holes, it's fun, so I give it 3 stars. Especially on the weird plot, and the strength of the characters. But yeah, it's fun
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
If you want to start reading this, go read the wiki of tensura and DxD, it's much more entertaining. The wiki, aside for the list of skills, it also has some details. This doesn't
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