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its actully good you know but way too many china names[img=recommend] ................................ you scrolded for more info caught you
In the first work, the author's story died due to a critical error, which he was not even going to correct. In the second work, the author's pen has changed, it looks more like a swamp and a routine, a lot of unnecessary information in which you drown, not understanding why you are reading this. In the third work, he becomes Chinese, if you are at least a little familiar with Chinese works, literally from the first chapter and passages you can understand where this will lead. I want to note that Chinese authors are extremely hardworking and creative. However, this cannot overshadow their main shortcomings. Nationalism, which does not seem to be in this work. But 100%, there will be a lot of water here. I also want to say that the Chinese have not been able to create an OP character for 500 chapters. They have a mania for limiting the growth of their characters through various shenanigans. In the previous 2 works, the author limited the growth of MK, even despite all the cheats that were in MK. I strongly doubt that the author will be able to raise this story, with his passion to limit the speed of ms and write 5 chapters of dubious information, instead of an adequate and understandable 1 chapter. I wish this story good luck, perseverance and more intelligence.
You my friend have always made engaging works and honestly I expect the trend to continue. I’ve loved your two previous story’s, sorry fanfics, and are excited to see what you’ll do with an original. Raiting 5 stars ❤️
im not to good at writing reviews but so far so good. . . and my offer on the snake obsession still stands[img=update]
Please bring this back..I have been following your fanfics a lot..the way you described the plays the in kuroko no Basuke fanfic , the pacing and originality of the Harry Potter fanfic and now the amazing realism and world development of the Naruto fanfic… it this original novel(mostly read on royal road) deserves to be completed.. even if it’s only one chapter a month…please continue it.
its actully good you know but way too many china names[img=recommend] ................................ you scrolded for more info caught you
In the first work, the author's story died due to a critical error, which he was not even going to correct. In the second work, the author's pen has changed, it looks more like a swamp and a routine, a lot of unnecessary information in which you drown, not understanding why you are reading this. In the third work, he becomes Chinese, if you are at least a little familiar with Chinese works, literally from the first chapter and passages you can understand where this will lead. I want to note that Chinese authors are extremely hardworking and creative. However, this cannot overshadow their main shortcomings. Nationalism, which does not seem to be in this work. But 100%, there will be a lot of water here. I also want to say that the Chinese have not been able to create an OP character for 500 chapters. They have a mania for limiting the growth of their characters through various shenanigans. In the previous 2 works, the author limited the growth of MK, even despite all the cheats that were in MK. I strongly doubt that the author will be able to raise this story, with his passion to limit the speed of ms and write 5 chapters of dubious information, instead of an adequate and understandable 1 chapter. I wish this story good luck, perseverance and more intelligence.
You my friend have always made engaging works and honestly I expect the trend to continue. I’ve loved your two previous story’s, sorry fanfics, and are excited to see what you’ll do with an original. Raiting 5 stars ❤️
im not to good at writing reviews but so far so good. . . and my offer on the snake obsession still stands[img=update]
Please bring this back..I have been following your fanfics a lot..the way you described the plays the in kuroko no Basuke fanfic , the pacing and originality of the Harry Potter fanfic and now the amazing realism and world development of the Naruto fanfic… it this original novel(mostly read on royal road) deserves to be completed.. even if it’s only one chapter a month…please continue it.