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Unlike the other fantasy novels on this platform, your one seems a bit unique I'd say. I would've rated a 4.8 or 4.6 but since this story isn't complete yet, I shouldn't be judging it too poorly. Here's a 5.0 from me, mate. Use it well!
People like you don't deserve to live. Get lost from Webnovel! This is a platform for professional writers NOT amatuers or hobbyists! Hope this lesson serves you right. 🕛
I'd say everything about this novel is OK. Just OK. Not too good nor too bad. Needs more effort in attracting new readers. Don't get too excited just because you see thousands of views on your stories. Not everyone is destined to be writer. Remember that.
Needs more work on designing characters properly. Half of them described so far seem like edgy anime side characters. The world seems overcomplicated. Good luck trying to impress more than a 100 people with this. It's good, but not good enough.
I'd say, I'm looking forward to the anime adaptation of this novel in the forseeable future. So I'll be happy to provide every ounce of support! Cheers.
Your writing is perfect. Updating schedule SUCKS! Story, characters and world seem OK. Anyways continue adding more chapters for freaking God's sake!
Good story, good character concepts, good fantasy world with deep trivia and lore. I guess the "stability of updates" would be the only issue here. So there's where you lose 0.2 stars. Sorry. 🥲
LOVED every aspect about this tale, bruv. Already at the edge of my seat for wanting to know what happens next! I love the idea that you're planning to turn this into an anime adaptation. Would be cool, I bet.
Excellent! I'll take back what I said previously about the lack of updates. 😅 Keep it up, Dewan Mukto! 👍 Waiting for this chapter's ending plus the next!
Interesting introduction. Quite an appealing fantasy world. Seems deeply rich with lore. Can't wait for more.... and that's the downfall! 🙁 Not frequently updated, bruh. 😒😠
I love the Alkynes! (I have read the early manuscripts of this book on the Mux Anime websites) Great to see that the author has now published the story on Webnovel! All the best.
Unlike the other fantasy novels on this platform, your one seems a bit unique I'd say. I would've rated a 4.8 or 4.6 but since this story isn't complete yet, I shouldn't be judging it too poorly. Here's a 5.0 from me, mate. Use it well!
People like you don't deserve to live. Get lost from Webnovel! This is a platform for professional writers NOT amatuers or hobbyists! Hope this lesson serves you right. 🕛
I'd say everything about this novel is OK. Just OK. Not too good nor too bad. Needs more effort in attracting new readers. Don't get too excited just because you see thousands of views on your stories. Not everyone is destined to be writer. Remember that.
Needs more work on designing characters properly. Half of them described so far seem like edgy anime side characters. The world seems overcomplicated. Good luck trying to impress more than a 100 people with this. It's good, but not good enough.
I'd say, I'm looking forward to the anime adaptation of this novel in the forseeable future. So I'll be happy to provide every ounce of support! Cheers.
Your writing is perfect. Updating schedule SUCKS! Story, characters and world seem OK. Anyways continue adding more chapters for freaking God's sake!
Good story, good character concepts, good fantasy world with deep trivia and lore. I guess the "stability of updates" would be the only issue here. So there's where you lose 0.2 stars. Sorry. 🥲
LOVED every aspect about this tale, bruv. Already at the edge of my seat for wanting to know what happens next! I love the idea that you're planning to turn this into an anime adaptation. Would be cool, I bet.
Excellent! I'll take back what I said previously about the lack of updates. 😅 Keep it up, Dewan Mukto! 👍 Waiting for this chapter's ending plus the next!
Interesting introduction. Quite an appealing fantasy world. Seems deeply rich with lore. Can't wait for more.... and that's the downfall! 🙁 Not frequently updated, bruh. 😒😠
I love the Alkynes! (I have read the early manuscripts of this book on the Mux Anime websites) Great to see that the author has now published the story on Webnovel! All the best.