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I only read the free chaoters so I’ll only be talking about the beginning chaoters . To be honest this story feels so jumpy if that makes sense like it’ not smooth at all. I feel like there’s a lot of information between each of things he does like one second he was talking the next second he’s stopping a meteor . Not enough info on his powers and the power scaling is unclear .
What a stupid prota, he isn't aware of what's going on around him, he thinks he's smart but he's an idiot, and it doesn't help that everything happens so fast.
Liked the way how smoothly the conversation flows. And even more liked the way how you portrayed the MC. So far so good. Will definitely look forward to more from you.🦋
This was a good read, I liked the way you handled the story's progression and pacing. The characters are good and they don't feel robotic. Highly recommended to those who like this genre.
Great story it defently separate yourself from other harems and your MC is so intriging Loki I'm trying to get like him fr your defently next up and Ong one day I'll be up next too
is this book similar to esper harem in apocalypse? like died and reborn in parallel world with powers
A perfect book Author. I like the series itself and hope to see more of this in the further chapters. Xander is like my favorite character on Webnovel, He keeps transforming like a Super Saiyan!
I don't even know what I'm reading, to be honest the author's idea is good, but this story needs to be developed and the plots more understandable. In addition, the dialogues could have been more sincere and rational. Not bad for a final and beginning writer.
What to expect in Volume 3 Of Super Harem In the Parallel Dimension, For starters, Expect some huge power-ups made by Xander, Also expect the return of the Ghost King and the Super Boss fight for Kate. I recommend readers of this book stay tuned, Thanks. -Kris Tylers.
U know i feel like the character design and the plot is all copied from the novel " Esper harem in the apocalypse". It just feels the same just with less details.
Loving it so far keep it up author /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
An extremely powerful story. I absolutely plan to stick with this series as I enjoyed the world-building, loved the Ireland setting, and was intrigued by all of the secondary characters.
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I only read the free chaoters so I’ll only be talking about the beginning chaoters . To be honest this story feels so jumpy if that makes sense like it’ not smooth at all. I feel like there’s a lot of information between each of things he does like one second he was talking the next second he’s stopping a meteor . Not enough info on his powers and the power scaling is unclear .
What a stupid prota, he isn't aware of what's going on around him, he thinks he's smart but he's an idiot, and it doesn't help that everything happens so fast.
Liked the way how smoothly the conversation flows. And even more liked the way how you portrayed the MC. So far so good. Will definitely look forward to more from you.🦋
This was a good read, I liked the way you handled the story's progression and pacing. The characters are good and they don't feel robotic. Highly recommended to those who like this genre.
Great story it defently separate yourself from other harems and your MC is so intriging Loki I'm trying to get like him fr your defently next up and Ong one day I'll be up next too
is this book similar to esper harem in apocalypse? like died and reborn in parallel world with powers
A perfect book Author. I like the series itself and hope to see more of this in the further chapters. Xander is like my favorite character on Webnovel, He keeps transforming like a Super Saiyan!
I don't even know what I'm reading, to be honest the author's idea is good, but this story needs to be developed and the plots more understandable. In addition, the dialogues could have been more sincere and rational. Not bad for a final and beginning writer.
What to expect in Volume 3 Of Super Harem In the Parallel Dimension, For starters, Expect some huge power-ups made by Xander, Also expect the return of the Ghost King and the Super Boss fight for Kate. I recommend readers of this book stay tuned, Thanks. -Kris Tylers.
U know i feel like the character design and the plot is all copied from the novel " Esper harem in the apocalypse". It just feels the same just with less details.
Loving it so far keep it up author /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
An extremely powerful story. I absolutely plan to stick with this series as I enjoyed the world-building, loved the Ireland setting, and was intrigued by all of the secondary characters.