Feedback ~ Mistakes
𝐃𝐨𝐧'𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐮𝐧𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐬 𝐲𝐨𝐮'𝐯𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐛𝐨𝐨𝐤 ( 𝐓𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐦𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐛𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐬𝐩𝐨𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐫𝐬 )
Hello...
This is me 'the author'. I have read through the comments from readers and have decided to re-edit and rewrite some of the early chapters.
L to those reading this book on pirated websites, as they may not receive the updated chapters.
After this chapter is released, I will also be creating an auxiliary chapter where readers can provide feedback on mistakes, plot holes, and any issues they may have with the story.
I plan to re-edit 1-5 chapters a day, depending on my availability. However, please note that I will not be adding any new content but instead focusing on polishing the existing material to improve the reading experience.
The daily release schedule will not be affected by this editing process, but don't expect any major changes to the story, such as Leo becoming a dragon god or the game merging with reality.
No foreshadowing intended...
1️⃣ Plot Holes:
~ Chapters 1-20
~ Chapters 20-40
~ Chapters 40-60
~ Chapters 60-80
~ Chapters 80-100
~ Chapters 100-120
~ Chapters 120-140
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2️⃣ Questionable decisions I've made while writing the book
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3️⃣ Issues with the general story
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AN: Thank you for the feedback!
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