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I approve, The houses you chose while overpowered luckily you didn't add pendraon, gryffindor, ravenclaw, or a bunch of other random houses, tho you could get away with adding gryffindor, so far the plot is progressing nicely. If you want some added filler flavor text would help a lot with bulking up the word count and stuff, along with slowing down the progress of the story a little since it seems like your rushing a little by leaving out some useless details that are normally in novels and fanfics. Overall looking good and i'm excited to see how it continues.
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I really like the concept of the story. I've read the first two chapters and now I'm hooked. I just can't wait for more. keep up with the really great work and please don't drop the story.
I approve, The houses you chose while overpowered luckily you didn't add pendraon, gryffindor, ravenclaw, or a bunch of other random houses, tho you could get away with adding gryffindor, so far the plot is progressing nicely. If you want some added filler flavor text would help a lot with bulking up the word count and stuff, along with slowing down the progress of the story a little since it seems like your rushing a little by leaving out some useless details that are normally in novels and fanfics. Overall looking good and i'm excited to see how it continues.
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I really like the concept of the story. I've read the first two chapters and now I'm hooked. I just can't wait for more. keep up with the really great work and please don't drop the story.