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For me, this story is a disappointment. I felt cheated, this story should be about getting revenge with the help of the system but the MC was just flirting here and there collecting women like Pokemons 🙄. I also dislike the personalities of the girls (tsundere).
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If you like a novel with no logic even a bit leave system even story development and side characters are the worst you can find in the whole world. Side characters are so rigid that even diamond will feel that it's jelly in front of them.I don't know why this content was on the event page.
its Harem or not??? i just want to know who is female lead?? who end up with him??
This was a good story, a bit repetitive in the way the action and drama goes. You can see a bit of word padding, but not too much. Overall it was worth the read.
I thought this book was going to be bad, but I was pleasantly surprised. I started reading during the free even and got hooked on it. I was entertained throughout the entire novel.
I have read a lot of books and this book was really worth it. Webnovel has the most entertaining characters and variety of books. I highly recommend Webnovel to everyone.
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Overall, it’s pretty bad. Went through some other reviews of people who read further than me and all I can say is don’t waste your time on this ‘payed to fame’ trash. 1 dimensional characters Lame villians that are pretty much identical cardboard cutouts of each other Skills that are used only once MC who’s stupid MC who a thirty year old pervert, pedophila too MC who waste his time on women instead of revenge MC who doesn’t act his age even though he’s been in prison Repeats of the same sentence when something doesn’t go his way — Probably another list of other things that make this utter garbage of a novel not worth your f*cling time but can’t think of it. - Anyway don’t read this
It is one of the worst novels I've read, a complete waste of time and coins. I hate it that the new novels in this cite keep getting worse and worse, almost everything is just copy and pasted junk, no originality at all. If you are reading this, please respect yourself, and don't waste your time on this novel.
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In my opinion, this story is suitable for reading on a chilly day because it's so quite a slow lifestyle but can't stop reading. Moreover, not only the language style is satisfying, but the story progression is also good. But there's something to be excited about in every chapter.
As far as I read, it's quite a perfect plot, I extremely recommend this novel to anyone who especially likes this kind of system and wanna read only for enjoyment. It explains the plot clearly, and the pleasing language style is so easy to understand. All in all, This story is now my fav, and it is a good one to read for killing the time.
I greatly recommend this novel to anyone who has no idea what to read. At first, I saw this on the chart so I decided to read it for fun. Surprisingly, it came out very well! In this story, the hero turns back time to fix the mistake in his life, and the magical system is the one that helps and assigns him the missions. The lead, who is actually 30 years old, get a chance to return to his 18-year-old life again to solve things he had done wrong. There're much more things in this story than this, come read and get addicted together. Hahaha
Now I pay a lot for this novel, I'm so addicted and I want the writer to upload 10 chapters a day! In the story, the male lead really has guts, and Wang's family is extremely annoying so I want the lead to return what they have done to him. Overall, the writing is very nice!
a story that started well but ends up in the same direction as every other forced urban system novels. plot is all forced. the title should be "harem building system" if you love mindless harem building this novel is for you! otherwise don't bother. the really sad thing is the translation is really good quality compared to most others on this platform why do trash novels get good translation yet alot of good novels get very poor translation =/
Aside from people noticing buying it's way to fame, there's nothing special about this story other than a promising start. It rapidly fell flat with a lot of bs, a rich guy pretending to be a homeless, the hardened vengeful MC having his heart flutter because of a young girl, and this rich girl hating the MC for stealing her food in the kindergarten to the point of following him to a poor man school, then suddenly felling in love with him for apologizing. The system missions are ridiculously easy, and finally the author keep bulking his already short chapters with the same system information again and again.
goes stale after 100th chapter, illogical in places, boring and annoying in others
Story overall has no consistancy. Nothing is explained or makes sense. Author uses Plot armor in just about every single chapter. Its a low quality Chinese cultivation novel, waste of coins for sure.
Honestly it started of decent and while there were a lot of annoying moments, you could ignore them. But I’m currently 145 chapters in and the stupidity of the MC is just blatantly smashed into my face, I can’t ignore it anymore and my reading experience has just gone downhill. Not to mention he acts like a child when he has a 30 year old soul due to his previous life. Let me give an example: this girl he likes invites him to a party, but when he called her to let him in she says she will send someone to fetch him inside. Guess what our MC does? He goes through a monologue tantrum and suddenly feels depressed thinking she doesn’t like him….when the girl was just busy welcoming people. He tells her he’s feeling ill and is leaving. Let me mention another example of his stupidity. He has finished his quests and decides to not check his new quests because….because…because why? I don’t know. The author gave some nonsense reason that he may as well have not said anything. Let me say that the time by then was not even night time, what if he got a quest that requires him to do that night? Oh right I forgot to mention that he will check his new quests tomorrow morning, why not before he goes to bed? No idea. Let me now mention why I’ve finally decided to quit reading. Firstly there’s 2 reasons why I am dropping this. 1- the villains are the most 1 dimensional characters you will ever see, literally you offend them, he now hates you and wants you dead. They have no brain and behave the same. If they didn’t have different names I’d have thought they were the same person. But anyways 1 of these villains who has a son who’s the one that started their ‘fight’ due to a girl he likes, they hire a gang leader to kill the MC. Guess what, villain kid wants to personally see the MC die and asks his father if they can tag along with the gang leader. So he agrees and they tag along. The gang leader has a gun and forced the MC to get inside the car so they can drive to a remote area. Now it’s fine that the MC who has a storage ring that has a ton of guns to not shoot and kill them to get inside the car, since it would cause quite big of a commotion and people might see him. But the thing is, when he gets out of the car at the location, he willingly listens to the gang leader and walks a few metres away. It was mentioned that the gang leader wasn’t even pointing the gun at him, since in the MC’s monologue, he literally thinks ‘When he points the gun at me I’ll make my move’. Where the f is the logic in that? The villain kid wants to personally beat him up so he moves forward to punch him, guess what? Our ‘smart’ MC punches him and knocks him flying- flying to where? Well certainly not towards to guy with the gun to block his line of sight. The gang leader quickly aims his gun at the MC and shoots, luckily the MC dodges the bullet and runs forward to knock him out, what happened to the guns in the MC’s storage ring? Idk I guess they just magically disappeared. There’s tons of infuriating scenes like this where the MC just doesn’t have a brain. If you don’t mind all I’ve mentioned above then feel free to read this novel, you will probably like it as there’s no other glaring problems like grammar etc.
I find the tactics employed to deceive others and unjustly raise the rankings of this novel disgusting. I implore others not to read/support this novel on moral grounds.
The story progresses fast and well, and the author is doing quite well. However, I've just been reading this genre so I didn't quite understand at first, but after some time it turns addictive. BTW, I look forward to reading the author's works, please update more!!
I really like this kind of system style so so much!!! Anyone who's bored but I'm not :) It's like taking my life into a game but it's actually real life, especially the protagonist, he's so cool and smart >< 100% recommend.
the book started quite good, but it just started get annoying, mc get involved with girls then get disrespected, looked down on, envied or threatened then he handles the situatio. The novel is just the usual blablabla. but it can't be read for fun though.
For me, this story is a disappointment. I felt cheated, this story should be about getting revenge with the help of the system but the MC was just flirting here and there collecting women like Pokemons 🙄. I also dislike the personalities of the girls (tsundere).
ネタバレを明かす If you like a novel with no logic even a bit leave system even story development and side characters are the worst you can find in the whole world. Side characters are so rigid that even diamond will feel that it's jelly in front of them.I don't know why this content was on the event page.
its Harem or not??? i just want to know who is female lead?? who end up with him??
This was a good story, a bit repetitive in the way the action and drama goes. You can see a bit of word padding, but not too much. Overall it was worth the read.
I thought this book was going to be bad, but I was pleasantly surprised. I started reading during the free even and got hooked on it. I was entertained throughout the entire novel.
I have read a lot of books and this book was really worth it. Webnovel has the most entertaining characters and variety of books. I highly recommend Webnovel to everyone.
ネタバレを明かす Overall, it’s pretty bad. Went through some other reviews of people who read further than me and all I can say is don’t waste your time on this ‘payed to fame’ trash. 1 dimensional characters Lame villians that are pretty much identical cardboard cutouts of each other Skills that are used only once MC who’s stupid MC who a thirty year old pervert, pedophila too MC who waste his time on women instead of revenge MC who doesn’t act his age even though he’s been in prison Repeats of the same sentence when something doesn’t go his way — Probably another list of other things that make this utter garbage of a novel not worth your f*cling time but can’t think of it. - Anyway don’t read this
It is one of the worst novels I've read, a complete waste of time and coins. I hate it that the new novels in this cite keep getting worse and worse, almost everything is just copy and pasted junk, no originality at all. If you are reading this, please respect yourself, and don't waste your time on this novel.
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In my opinion, this story is suitable for reading on a chilly day because it's so quite a slow lifestyle but can't stop reading. Moreover, not only the language style is satisfying, but the story progression is also good. But there's something to be excited about in every chapter.
As far as I read, it's quite a perfect plot, I extremely recommend this novel to anyone who especially likes this kind of system and wanna read only for enjoyment. It explains the plot clearly, and the pleasing language style is so easy to understand. All in all, This story is now my fav, and it is a good one to read for killing the time.
I greatly recommend this novel to anyone who has no idea what to read. At first, I saw this on the chart so I decided to read it for fun. Surprisingly, it came out very well! In this story, the hero turns back time to fix the mistake in his life, and the magical system is the one that helps and assigns him the missions. The lead, who is actually 30 years old, get a chance to return to his 18-year-old life again to solve things he had done wrong. There're much more things in this story than this, come read and get addicted together. Hahaha
Now I pay a lot for this novel, I'm so addicted and I want the writer to upload 10 chapters a day! In the story, the male lead really has guts, and Wang's family is extremely annoying so I want the lead to return what they have done to him. Overall, the writing is very nice!
a story that started well but ends up in the same direction as every other forced urban system novels. plot is all forced. the title should be "harem building system" if you love mindless harem building this novel is for you! otherwise don't bother. the really sad thing is the translation is really good quality compared to most others on this platform why do trash novels get good translation yet alot of good novels get very poor translation =/
Aside from people noticing buying it's way to fame, there's nothing special about this story other than a promising start. It rapidly fell flat with a lot of bs, a rich guy pretending to be a homeless, the hardened vengeful MC having his heart flutter because of a young girl, and this rich girl hating the MC for stealing her food in the kindergarten to the point of following him to a poor man school, then suddenly felling in love with him for apologizing. The system missions are ridiculously easy, and finally the author keep bulking his already short chapters with the same system information again and again.
goes stale after 100th chapter, illogical in places, boring and annoying in others
Story overall has no consistancy. Nothing is explained or makes sense. Author uses Plot armor in just about every single chapter. Its a low quality Chinese cultivation novel, waste of coins for sure.
Honestly it started of decent and while there were a lot of annoying moments, you could ignore them. But I’m currently 145 chapters in and the stupidity of the MC is just blatantly smashed into my face, I can’t ignore it anymore and my reading experience has just gone downhill. Not to mention he acts like a child when he has a 30 year old soul due to his previous life. Let me give an example: this girl he likes invites him to a party, but when he called her to let him in she says she will send someone to fetch him inside. Guess what our MC does? He goes through a monologue tantrum and suddenly feels depressed thinking she doesn’t like him….when the girl was just busy welcoming people. He tells her he’s feeling ill and is leaving. Let me mention another example of his stupidity. He has finished his quests and decides to not check his new quests because….because…because why? I don’t know. The author gave some nonsense reason that he may as well have not said anything. Let me say that the time by then was not even night time, what if he got a quest that requires him to do that night? Oh right I forgot to mention that he will check his new quests tomorrow morning, why not before he goes to bed? No idea. Let me now mention why I’ve finally decided to quit reading. Firstly there’s 2 reasons why I am dropping this. 1- the villains are the most 1 dimensional characters you will ever see, literally you offend them, he now hates you and wants you dead. They have no brain and behave the same. If they didn’t have different names I’d have thought they were the same person. But anyways 1 of these villains who has a son who’s the one that started their ‘fight’ due to a girl he likes, they hire a gang leader to kill the MC. Guess what, villain kid wants to personally see the MC die and asks his father if they can tag along with the gang leader. So he agrees and they tag along. The gang leader has a gun and forced the MC to get inside the car so they can drive to a remote area. Now it’s fine that the MC who has a storage ring that has a ton of guns to not shoot and kill them to get inside the car, since it would cause quite big of a commotion and people might see him. But the thing is, when he gets out of the car at the location, he willingly listens to the gang leader and walks a few metres away. It was mentioned that the gang leader wasn’t even pointing the gun at him, since in the MC’s monologue, he literally thinks ‘When he points the gun at me I’ll make my move’. Where the f is the logic in that? The villain kid wants to personally beat him up so he moves forward to punch him, guess what? Our ‘smart’ MC punches him and knocks him flying- flying to where? Well certainly not towards to guy with the gun to block his line of sight. The gang leader quickly aims his gun at the MC and shoots, luckily the MC dodges the bullet and runs forward to knock him out, what happened to the guns in the MC’s storage ring? Idk I guess they just magically disappeared. There’s tons of infuriating scenes like this where the MC just doesn’t have a brain. If you don’t mind all I’ve mentioned above then feel free to read this novel, you will probably like it as there’s no other glaring problems like grammar etc.
I find the tactics employed to deceive others and unjustly raise the rankings of this novel disgusting. I implore others not to read/support this novel on moral grounds.
The story progresses fast and well, and the author is doing quite well. However, I've just been reading this genre so I didn't quite understand at first, but after some time it turns addictive. BTW, I look forward to reading the author's works, please update more!!
I really like this kind of system style so so much!!! Anyone who's bored but I'm not :) It's like taking my life into a game but it's actually real life, especially the protagonist, he's so cool and smart >< 100% recommend.
the book started quite good, but it just started get annoying, mc get involved with girls then get disrespected, looked down on, envied or threatened then he handles the situatio. The novel is just the usual blablabla. but it can't be read for fun though.
mc is a sucker for girls...never seen this level of sucker