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I'll try to keep it short😅.... first fair warning; it's a slow survival at first, but soon they go to a "town" where things unfold in several directions (which doesn't hurt after all they have a bigger mission). second; the mc has no memory, so he has to deal with this and other situations that are really heavy (emotional and psychological). third; the game system has significant impacts on simple things but it's not such a big limiting factor so it can go unnoticed sometimes. fourth; read aware that EVERYONE, including the natives, has their own background, difficulties and anxieties and this affects their personality and actions...that's it. I really like the story, i was expecting a standard isekay but to my happy surprise it's more than that. The world has elements that are original and that's great, the characters make mistakes and at least try to improve, the natives are not just npcs, they are discovering the system which, by the way, is not the standard blue screen👍. I'm at the beginning now and I hope it contains more about world history, culture and legends. finally, there are many parts that seem to ask for comment but readers seem shy😳🤣🤣. I'm giving full marks because it's exactly THE story I wanted to read.
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Great start but power creep starting to show and the novel takes really weird turns. Examples at times the mc fails to decide if he wants a harem or not, but to make matters worse he seems very inconsistent sometimes he appears to have zero sexual desires than he banging Rina. He also appears to have zero concern 2 party members never returned Helena and Anna.. I am hoping some character development will solve this but seems more like a writing issue. A journey that was suppose to take a week drag on for over a month and later 2 months and barely any mention of them. In fact the same thing happened with sera and he just shrugs it off. The other concern is power creep, he appears to recent kill a rank b monster almost by himself saving a village. He went from weak guy barely able to kill a goblin to slaying a rank c adventure to slaying a rank b beast in less than 9 chapters. Let’ not forget it was mentioned beast took a party of sme rank to kill. Great novel but worried if it has the depth to last 1000’s of chapters with how the journey progressing…
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TBH I was expecting something ordinary but I finally found something that I like. The first few chapters are confusing as if we are missing some chaps and it is slow at the start. After that, the story starts to pickup and It has a mystery about the world. So, Nice job Ig Got to catch up with the latest chap ig again. kekw
This is a shameless review from the author :P Thank you for chosing this novel, hope it brings you as much joy and fun as it does for me. Writing quality, not native in english, please bear that in mind when reading. I will be adjusting and editing past chapters to make it more readable. Stability of updates: I write daily and usually prepare some chapters beforehand. Up to chapter 80 there was a small three day break. Story development: Its all abouot showing fantasy worlds in a more realistic manner, facing difficulties and misteries in a refreshing manner. Character design: they eat, feel, grow and are coherent with their personalities. World background: Lots of misteries and different creatures to show a wonderful world! About the first chapters, they are mainly focused on the survival aspect and it can be considered a prologue, you may skip the first five chapters but you will be losing some aspects of the main character. I'll keep doing my best to provide you a good reading experience!
What i liked most is character development, i been missing this in a lot of ln. Its a bit slow for my taste but it gets better, totally worth reading. Mc is smart but too careful tho
first chapter i read was sloooow, but later i found that its useful to character progression. im intrigued by what's going to happen Next, and its ambience is sometines scary and at other times funny. i also like that chapters come daily. is easy to read even if you dont read english and is well writen, more chapters please!
Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
I'll try to keep it short😅.... first fair warning; it's a slow survival at first, but soon they go to a "town" where things unfold in several directions (which doesn't hurt after all they have a bigger mission). second; the mc has no memory, so he has to deal with this and other situations that are really heavy (emotional and psychological). third; the game system has significant impacts on simple things but it's not such a big limiting factor so it can go unnoticed sometimes. fourth; read aware that EVERYONE, including the natives, has their own background, difficulties and anxieties and this affects their personality and actions...that's it. I really like the story, i was expecting a standard isekay but to my happy surprise it's more than that. The world has elements that are original and that's great, the characters make mistakes and at least try to improve, the natives are not just npcs, they are discovering the system which, by the way, is not the standard blue screen👍. I'm at the beginning now and I hope it contains more about world history, culture and legends. finally, there are many parts that seem to ask for comment but readers seem shy😳🤣🤣. I'm giving full marks because it's exactly THE story I wanted to read.
ネタバレを明かす Great start but power creep starting to show and the novel takes really weird turns. Examples at times the mc fails to decide if he wants a harem or not, but to make matters worse he seems very inconsistent sometimes he appears to have zero sexual desires than he banging Rina. He also appears to have zero concern 2 party members never returned Helena and Anna.. I am hoping some character development will solve this but seems more like a writing issue. A journey that was suppose to take a week drag on for over a month and later 2 months and barely any mention of them. In fact the same thing happened with sera and he just shrugs it off. The other concern is power creep, he appears to recent kill a rank b monster almost by himself saving a village. He went from weak guy barely able to kill a goblin to slaying a rank c adventure to slaying a rank b beast in less than 9 chapters. Let’ not forget it was mentioned beast took a party of sme rank to kill. Great novel but worried if it has the depth to last 1000’s of chapters with how the journey progressing…
ネタバレを明かす TBH I was expecting something ordinary but I finally found something that I like. The first few chapters are confusing as if we are missing some chaps and it is slow at the start. After that, the story starts to pickup and It has a mystery about the world. So, Nice job Ig Got to catch up with the latest chap ig again. kekw
This is a shameless review from the author :P Thank you for chosing this novel, hope it brings you as much joy and fun as it does for me. Writing quality, not native in english, please bear that in mind when reading. I will be adjusting and editing past chapters to make it more readable. Stability of updates: I write daily and usually prepare some chapters beforehand. Up to chapter 80 there was a small three day break. Story development: Its all abouot showing fantasy worlds in a more realistic manner, facing difficulties and misteries in a refreshing manner. Character design: they eat, feel, grow and are coherent with their personalities. World background: Lots of misteries and different creatures to show a wonderful world! About the first chapters, they are mainly focused on the survival aspect and it can be considered a prologue, you may skip the first five chapters but you will be losing some aspects of the main character. I'll keep doing my best to provide you a good reading experience!
What i liked most is character development, i been missing this in a lot of ln. Its a bit slow for my taste but it gets better, totally worth reading. Mc is smart but too careful tho
first chapter i read was sloooow, but later i found that its useful to character progression. im intrigued by what's going to happen Next, and its ambience is sometines scary and at other times funny. i also like that chapters come daily. is easy to read even if you dont read english and is well writen, more chapters please!
Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!