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The story is good overall and it is better to read it fully to understand. But I am still kinda ticked by the way it end. I feel that it should have ended when they all met.
I stopped at chapter 11. The story line... Eh... I didn't really like it. I felt like it was a bit draggy and the whole hateful abusive nature in the supposed good characters were too much. Like it was just pure hatred coming from adults to a child. It really threw off my mood when reading. My blood pressure cannot take it. I was saying off with their heads 😒😤🤬🌡️ overall give it a go if you want to try and see if this story line is something you like in a book. To me it just wasn't working.✌🏻
Not happy with this book. The plot is stupidly made. The author just decided to write the female lead to suffer everything, and "oh let us make the male lead love her immediately without any explanation but hating her when they first meet so there so there is a love story involve" type of writing. Also, "oh let us make the counterpart so favored by everyone that she needs to be seen as the most important character. Let all the characters hate this female lead instead and make all the misfortunes befall her" type of plot. Not recommendable.
welp was a good run got to chapter 40 and the rest of the chapters are locked lol great novel sadly I won't be able to continue this journey 😔
This a gem! I came here to read YURI but heyya the emotions here is shocking and impressive! I love how the author portray everything! I love it!
A pretty solid book all throughout although it is not my cup of tea. Grammar and punctuation are on point, I didn't notice any mistakes there and the pacing is overall decent. It was a nice read! Good job author, I can tell that this novel will blow up soon!
The girl's meditation surprises and her divergence in terms of her powers makes her very special. In view of: I'm selling you to the highest bidder to save this place. And I saw how they treated you: But that's not important! So that: The greed of others is the greed of a lover. matched or not? It is a subtle, funny and shocking way of showing the contradictions on both sides. The worlds of two children managed by adults. They must be confronted by themselves. Discipline has a limit: between love and hate. But here, it is a suspicion and children: tantrums!
Hello Author! To be frank, I've never read such a clear and interesting synopsis. I find your plot fun and catchy. It would be more fun to explore how the FL might escape from her fate. I love your writing style and the world background. I would highly recommend your plot to my friends. Keep it up Author. Best of luck.
I initially came here for yuri but the story is what keeps me here. It's an interesting dynamic for sure and a somewhat new approach in the FL
What can I say? I like the story and overall concept. I also like that there was no instant 'falling in love' but a build-up over the story.
The more I read it, the more I feel like these characters need therapy. They've been through a lot and I do feel sorry for them. it's nice to see the dynamic being established from the start
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Now then, what are you waiting for?! This is certainly a piece to pick up, seeing how the characters are already moulded in their youth gives insight to their potential futures! Author has written quite well, and especially shows the contemptuous attitudes of the retainer and the facades of the priest! quite an engaging read right from the beginning so give it a shot!
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This is an interesting approach to a FL story. I like how it starts since it is not that cliche as the other ones I've read before. I do hope to see how you develop it more and what direction it takes.
I would like a happy ending to this story but man do I love all the things the MC is going through. I feel sorry for her but I also like her a lot. I hope she gets better soon.
The story is really fast pace and the circumstances really hooked me on to the ongoing plot. There is a hint of mystery behind everything which I cannot wait to get behind.
This story makes me so angry at the start. But in a good way so I am happy to keep on enjoying this story more and more. I really like the main caste
I've read a lot of cliche stories on this one but this one looks really unique to me. Mainly because the FL is interesting and so are the side characters.
Only 4-5 chapters in but the premise interests me. I am excited to see how the story develops. It really is an I interesting concept over all.
Time for the author's review. Let me say that- The MC is tying her best here alright? Cut her some slack. Yes, you can hate on the side characters and get angry at them for what happened. Also, it's a FFM pairing so it will have both straight romance as well as Yuri. So don't come at me with it later on.
The story is good overall and it is better to read it fully to understand. But I am still kinda ticked by the way it end. I feel that it should have ended when they all met.
I stopped at chapter 11. The story line... Eh... I didn't really like it. I felt like it was a bit draggy and the whole hateful abusive nature in the supposed good characters were too much. Like it was just pure hatred coming from adults to a child. It really threw off my mood when reading. My blood pressure cannot take it. I was saying off with their heads 😒😤🤬🌡️ overall give it a go if you want to try and see if this story line is something you like in a book. To me it just wasn't working.✌🏻
Not happy with this book. The plot is stupidly made. The author just decided to write the female lead to suffer everything, and "oh let us make the male lead love her immediately without any explanation but hating her when they first meet so there so there is a love story involve" type of writing. Also, "oh let us make the counterpart so favored by everyone that she needs to be seen as the most important character. Let all the characters hate this female lead instead and make all the misfortunes befall her" type of plot. Not recommendable.
welp was a good run got to chapter 40 and the rest of the chapters are locked lol great novel sadly I won't be able to continue this journey 😔
This a gem! I came here to read YURI but heyya the emotions here is shocking and impressive! I love how the author portray everything! I love it!
A pretty solid book all throughout although it is not my cup of tea. Grammar and punctuation are on point, I didn't notice any mistakes there and the pacing is overall decent. It was a nice read! Good job author, I can tell that this novel will blow up soon!
The girl's meditation surprises and her divergence in terms of her powers makes her very special. In view of: I'm selling you to the highest bidder to save this place. And I saw how they treated you: But that's not important! So that: The greed of others is the greed of a lover. matched or not? It is a subtle, funny and shocking way of showing the contradictions on both sides. The worlds of two children managed by adults. They must be confronted by themselves. Discipline has a limit: between love and hate. But here, it is a suspicion and children: tantrums!
Hello Author! To be frank, I've never read such a clear and interesting synopsis. I find your plot fun and catchy. It would be more fun to explore how the FL might escape from her fate. I love your writing style and the world background. I would highly recommend your plot to my friends. Keep it up Author. Best of luck.
I initially came here for yuri but the story is what keeps me here. It's an interesting dynamic for sure and a somewhat new approach in the FL
What can I say? I like the story and overall concept. I also like that there was no instant 'falling in love' but a build-up over the story.
The more I read it, the more I feel like these characters need therapy. They've been through a lot and I do feel sorry for them. it's nice to see the dynamic being established from the start
ネタバレを明かす Now then, what are you waiting for?! This is certainly a piece to pick up, seeing how the characters are already moulded in their youth gives insight to their potential futures! Author has written quite well, and especially shows the contemptuous attitudes of the retainer and the facades of the priest! quite an engaging read right from the beginning so give it a shot!
ネタバレを明かす This is an interesting approach to a FL story. I like how it starts since it is not that cliche as the other ones I've read before. I do hope to see how you develop it more and what direction it takes.
I would like a happy ending to this story but man do I love all the things the MC is going through. I feel sorry for her but I also like her a lot. I hope she gets better soon.
The story is really fast pace and the circumstances really hooked me on to the ongoing plot. There is a hint of mystery behind everything which I cannot wait to get behind.
This story makes me so angry at the start. But in a good way so I am happy to keep on enjoying this story more and more. I really like the main caste
I've read a lot of cliche stories on this one but this one looks really unique to me. Mainly because the FL is interesting and so are the side characters.
Only 4-5 chapters in but the premise interests me. I am excited to see how the story develops. It really is an I interesting concept over all.
Time for the author's review. Let me say that- The MC is tying her best here alright? Cut her some slack. Yes, you can hate on the side characters and get angry at them for what happened. Also, it's a FFM pairing so it will have both straight romance as well as Yuri. So don't come at me with it later on.