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レビューを書くUna buena historia, lastima que la hayas dejado. Me gustó mucho el pasado y el contexto que le diste al MC y el desarrollo de la historia en su mundo. En cuanto al chat, hasta ahora fue casi inútil y solo agregaste a miembros que no hablan para nada. También me gustó el harem hasta ahora y los mundos que integraste a su mundo original
ネタバレを明かすThe MC’s personality is easiy to grasp and consistent, Love the many worlds shown throughout the series with 1-2 chapter mini-arcs and interactions with characters from slice-of life stories. The mission system and character development are also great, my only gripe with this story is that the MC becomes too op really early in the story (considering that the setting is to develop a journey in 1000 different worlds), removing all tention from the story. That really killed all the tention from the story and made all of mc’s actions then onwards look like lazy, compleatly contrasting his character from all previous chapters.
too messy. author always intruduce new animes and charachters in the main world without thinking and it goes nowhere.
well story is good, but i am not gonna read it cause you're not planning to add Rin in the harem, she was really good. I can see you don't like in* est but yeah I am just weird like this smh.... gotta give only three-star.
2/5 at best for me. Writing was decent but i just cant get behind some of the forced decisions.
Great story author please keep up the work. and I have heard that you have another account with different books, is that true? if yes please tell me the name.
I haven't read anything yet, I just want to know what works are in this novel, I can't read without knowing this ...............................................
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ネタバレを明かすLololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo. 4,8 really!?
This really is a fantastic read Author! I really enjoy the character development not to mention you’ve written and fleshed out a lot background characters/ side characters really well. Just overall I can’t wait to see where this story takes us and hopefully it’s gonna be a long one. Keep up the amazing work I look forward to future chapters!!!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Não é a melhor fanfic que li é esta um pouco longe disso mas recomendo que leiam PS: espero que o autor volte a postar ...................................................
The MC is insecure, nervous, cowardly, pessimistic, denies his personality and according to how he is different each chapter possibly suffers from multiple personality disorder. Personally, I don't like the story and although the author diminished these flaws as in chapter 60 (I think) it was a bit forced because it was just a talk with his father (with whom he shows almost no emotional bond) and it's already a bit more passable. Also, for those possibly coming in from the cover, Hayasaka only appears until chapter 50 and so far where I'm going (chapter 67) there is no progression emotionally (although I agree that relationships are best to take some time to write it well). So even though some people may like this story I find it a bit boring, this is my personal thought but I also know someone else may have a different opinion and I respect that. Anyway, author, I wish you the best and that you can continue writing the story as you have done so far without getting discouraged because some people don't like it as much (as in my case), knowing how difficult it is to write a story. Happy day 👍🏽 (translator)
Really have been enjoying this story so far, I can’t wait for future chapters I hope the author never drops its a story I genuinely enjoy reading alot. Keep up the fantastic work author I highly appreciate and love you’re content
Muy bueno............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!?!!?!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡........................................................
ネタバレを明かすGood story. It's a mishmash of many different anime worlds, hence the name of the story. Some things are a little odd and not explained enough, but other than that the story flows nicely and the characters introduced are likeable. As of writing this review (chapter 53), the Group Chat function hasn't really been used much, but in all honesty, I prefer it this way. It's a nice slice-of-life story with sides of action and intrigue. If you don't mind world-hopping and a very basic "system" (if one could even call it that), then give it a read. Thank you for your hard work, author.
My god I love this author I like the fact that you're actually like a normal human. The world background character design everything is brilliant.
Chaoter 100 // Read the entire thing in basically one setting It’s really good! The MC is interesting and the background that is being unravelled or whatnot is fun. The character interactions are the best part of this. One thing that is slightly weird about this is MC’s lack of desire to pursue a relationship if that is how I would word it. It seems that in the ch90s there is some more thought out into it from MC’s end. 100 chapters in and the chat group does not have much substance in the novel yet. author’s integrated the different worlds well I think. Anyways final thoughts: it’s very good and will be one of my daily reads!
Definitivamente passei raiva lendo isso, tanto com os erros de gramática quanto com a personalidade do Mc................................................
well, i have been keeping up for a while now and its really great. but author, why do you create so many fanfics and drop them? and will you drop this one too? i really hope you finish this so keep it up!
You're doing a fairly good job bro! Those negative comments, y'know there is a whole lot of stupid people in web novel or just they comment without thinking! You fic has it flaws but it is good compared to others out there that qre "top"... u has to realize that people here aren't that good critics., if you pay attention re-reading your fic and a few comments I had read, you can improve your writtings skills a level further! Remember, everyone has their tastes, for example, mine is Amou... She's just a great character hahahs and female lead, if you make a fic of her and mc being power couple traversing multiverse like " reincarnation paradise" it has a looooot potential
You know what, I am just at chapter 1, i usually don't review nor give rating to fanfics, but just the "busou shoujo machiavellianism" fan fic, YOU deserve it! It's just great, thank you for this fan fic! Hope you can continue it
The author has experience with writing, so its enjoyable to read. The pace of the story is perfect and the mc is interesting with flaws that dont annoy you, but still with room for character develop(e?)ment. Author updates every day, unless smth important comes up, so no problems there. The home world is interesting unlike many chat groups, and the character interactions are some of the best I've read in fanfics. Now onto the highlight, HAYASAKA IS FINALLY GETTING SOME LOVE
Una buena historia, lastima que la hayas dejado. Me gustó mucho el pasado y el contexto que le diste al MC y el desarrollo de la historia en su mundo. En cuanto al chat, hasta ahora fue casi inútil y solo agregaste a miembros que no hablan para nada. También me gustó el harem hasta ahora y los mundos que integraste a su mundo original
ネタバレを明かすThe MC’s personality is easiy to grasp and consistent, Love the many worlds shown throughout the series with 1-2 chapter mini-arcs and interactions with characters from slice-of life stories. The mission system and character development are also great, my only gripe with this story is that the MC becomes too op really early in the story (considering that the setting is to develop a journey in 1000 different worlds), removing all tention from the story. That really killed all the tention from the story and made all of mc’s actions then onwards look like lazy, compleatly contrasting his character from all previous chapters.
too messy. author always intruduce new animes and charachters in the main world without thinking and it goes nowhere.
well story is good, but i am not gonna read it cause you're not planning to add Rin in the harem, she was really good. I can see you don't like in* est but yeah I am just weird like this smh.... gotta give only three-star.
2/5 at best for me. Writing was decent but i just cant get behind some of the forced decisions.
Great story author please keep up the work. and I have heard that you have another account with different books, is that true? if yes please tell me the name.
I haven't read anything yet, I just want to know what works are in this novel, I can't read without knowing this ...............................................
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don't drop it ............................... ............................................
ネタバレを明かすLololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo. 4,8 really!?
This really is a fantastic read Author! I really enjoy the character development not to mention you’ve written and fleshed out a lot background characters/ side characters really well. Just overall I can’t wait to see where this story takes us and hopefully it’s gonna be a long one. Keep up the amazing work I look forward to future chapters!!!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Não é a melhor fanfic que li é esta um pouco longe disso mas recomendo que leiam PS: espero que o autor volte a postar ...................................................
The MC is insecure, nervous, cowardly, pessimistic, denies his personality and according to how he is different each chapter possibly suffers from multiple personality disorder. Personally, I don't like the story and although the author diminished these flaws as in chapter 60 (I think) it was a bit forced because it was just a talk with his father (with whom he shows almost no emotional bond) and it's already a bit more passable. Also, for those possibly coming in from the cover, Hayasaka only appears until chapter 50 and so far where I'm going (chapter 67) there is no progression emotionally (although I agree that relationships are best to take some time to write it well). So even though some people may like this story I find it a bit boring, this is my personal thought but I also know someone else may have a different opinion and I respect that. Anyway, author, I wish you the best and that you can continue writing the story as you have done so far without getting discouraged because some people don't like it as much (as in my case), knowing how difficult it is to write a story. Happy day 👍🏽 (translator)
Really have been enjoying this story so far, I can’t wait for future chapters I hope the author never drops its a story I genuinely enjoy reading alot. Keep up the fantastic work author I highly appreciate and love you’re content
Muy bueno............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!?!!?!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡........................................................
ネタバレを明かすGood story. It's a mishmash of many different anime worlds, hence the name of the story. Some things are a little odd and not explained enough, but other than that the story flows nicely and the characters introduced are likeable. As of writing this review (chapter 53), the Group Chat function hasn't really been used much, but in all honesty, I prefer it this way. It's a nice slice-of-life story with sides of action and intrigue. If you don't mind world-hopping and a very basic "system" (if one could even call it that), then give it a read. Thank you for your hard work, author.
My god I love this author I like the fact that you're actually like a normal human. The world background character design everything is brilliant.
Chaoter 100 // Read the entire thing in basically one setting It’s really good! The MC is interesting and the background that is being unravelled or whatnot is fun. The character interactions are the best part of this. One thing that is slightly weird about this is MC’s lack of desire to pursue a relationship if that is how I would word it. It seems that in the ch90s there is some more thought out into it from MC’s end. 100 chapters in and the chat group does not have much substance in the novel yet. author’s integrated the different worlds well I think. Anyways final thoughts: it’s very good and will be one of my daily reads!
Definitivamente passei raiva lendo isso, tanto com os erros de gramática quanto com a personalidade do Mc................................................
well, i have been keeping up for a while now and its really great. but author, why do you create so many fanfics and drop them? and will you drop this one too? i really hope you finish this so keep it up!
You're doing a fairly good job bro! Those negative comments, y'know there is a whole lot of stupid people in web novel or just they comment without thinking! You fic has it flaws but it is good compared to others out there that qre "top"... u has to realize that people here aren't that good critics., if you pay attention re-reading your fic and a few comments I had read, you can improve your writtings skills a level further! Remember, everyone has their tastes, for example, mine is Amou... She's just a great character hahahs and female lead, if you make a fic of her and mc being power couple traversing multiverse like " reincarnation paradise" it has a looooot potential
You know what, I am just at chapter 1, i usually don't review nor give rating to fanfics, but just the "busou shoujo machiavellianism" fan fic, YOU deserve it! It's just great, thank you for this fan fic! Hope you can continue it
The author has experience with writing, so its enjoyable to read. The pace of the story is perfect and the mc is interesting with flaws that dont annoy you, but still with room for character develop(e?)ment. Author updates every day, unless smth important comes up, so no problems there. The home world is interesting unlike many chat groups, and the character interactions are some of the best I've read in fanfics. Now onto the highlight, HAYASAKA IS FINALLY GETTING SOME LOVE