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Not my type of story the author just glosses over things does a lot of time skips don't feel any real connection to the MC dropped on the 9th chap to be honest a huge reason that I'm dropping this is because I hate Sakura with a huge Passion but overall this fanfic does have a lot of issues the writing is subpar and soulless couldn't bring myself to fill any form of excitement whilst reading this, good premise just a bad execution
Good start, it has a lot of potential to be a good fan fic. I hope you continue writing and not drop this in 30 chapters like others i saw. Keep up the good work.
I like what you are doing so far. It’s a nice concept for a fanfic. Good luck with writing. Thiugh I would ask for longer chapters, I think this fanfic is in a comfortable position.
Мне понравилось оригинальность персонажа, а именно он будет мечником , поэтому я в предвкушении какой путь будет у Юдзи ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
Not my type of story the author just glosses over things does a lot of time skips don't feel any real connection to the MC dropped on the 9th chap to be honest a huge reason that I'm dropping this is because I hate Sakura with a huge Passion but overall this fanfic does have a lot of issues the writing is subpar and soulless couldn't bring myself to fill any form of excitement whilst reading this, good premise just a bad execution
Good start, it has a lot of potential to be a good fan fic. I hope you continue writing and not drop this in 30 chapters like others i saw. Keep up the good work.
I like what you are doing so far. It’s a nice concept for a fanfic. Good luck with writing. Thiugh I would ask for longer chapters, I think this fanfic is in a comfortable position.
Мне понравилось оригинальность персонажа, а именно он будет мечником , поэтому я в предвкушении какой путь будет у Юдзи ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀