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Muito bom, geralmente as ff de HSDXD são todas apenas sexo... essa é realmente boa, pena que acabou , , , ,, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
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hmm,,,a good novel but mc became overpowered... overpowered mc in only one universe will like slice of life,with just romance....It will be more better if he do some work for the for power,without struggling ,he look like a rich father son..good luck with novel bro...thanks for update..
i would like say thank u and keep up the good work i would like u don't drop it. i will speend all my stones on u just for u keeping going and making the book more awesome.
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I don't think you can like this if you are not an NPC Everything is as expected -Meets ROB -reincarnated where the women are -gets op literally a second after being in the reality -cheesy lines to pick-up women Bro it's obvious the only female interaction you saw was from anime and it's just not pleasant to read the same harem fanfics over and over again
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Please don't drop I like this novel Unfortunately many good novels have fallen so I'm afraid (Google translator) Please don't drop I like this novel Unfortunately many good novels have fallen so I'm afraid (Google translator)
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More Chapters Every Day Brother Thanks For Novel And Hopefully No Dropped In Novel Brother And God Bless You Brother And Keep Spirit Brother And Nice Novel Brother [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Shameless Author here, I'll only say this please give this story a try before you decide to drop reading. I am new to all this writing stuff but I promise to improve over time, all I hope is to bring some smiles to your faces.
I'll give it a 3 as you did say you were new to writing so no one can really blame you because everyone improves over time eventually and I'm trying to write my own fanfic but I'm just stuck on how to start. But good fanfic it was intriguing it could be better but you did at least warn people that you were new to writing so if they want to give bad reviews it's on them. But for your next work I suggest if you want it to be a harem fic spice up the scenes more and get better quality interaction between the protagonist and the girls he plans on dating. But if you want it to be more than that I'd say add more fight scenes or more adventure whilst exploring more in depth on where your clones went when they traversed to get the blood of all the being s you wanted and maybe not make the MC so overpowered right off the bat unless you said something about that which I missed but still good try on the story.
Muito bom, geralmente as ff de HSDXD são todas apenas sexo... essa é realmente boa, pena que acabou , , , ,, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
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hmm,,,a good novel but mc became overpowered... overpowered mc in only one universe will like slice of life,with just romance....It will be more better if he do some work for the for power,without struggling ,he look like a rich father son..good luck with novel bro...thanks for update..
i would like say thank u and keep up the good work i would like u don't drop it. i will speend all my stones on u just for u keeping going and making the book more awesome.
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I don't think you can like this if you are not an NPC Everything is as expected -Meets ROB -reincarnated where the women are -gets op literally a second after being in the reality -cheesy lines to pick-up women Bro it's obvious the only female interaction you saw was from anime and it's just not pleasant to read the same harem fanfics over and over again
pokemon type dxd series🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶
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Please don't drop I like this novel Unfortunately many good novels have fallen so I'm afraid (Google translator) Please don't drop I like this novel Unfortunately many good novels have fallen so I'm afraid (Google translator)
Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж Кринж
More Chapters Every Day Brother Thanks For Novel And Hopefully No Dropped In Novel Brother And God Bless You Brother And Keep Spirit Brother And Nice Novel Brother [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMOoooooooomomomomomomommoooooommmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Shameless Author here, I'll only say this please give this story a try before you decide to drop reading. I am new to all this writing stuff but I promise to improve over time, all I hope is to bring some smiles to your faces.
I'll give it a 3 as you did say you were new to writing so no one can really blame you because everyone improves over time eventually and I'm trying to write my own fanfic but I'm just stuck on how to start. But good fanfic it was intriguing it could be better but you did at least warn people that you were new to writing so if they want to give bad reviews it's on them. But for your next work I suggest if you want it to be a harem fic spice up the scenes more and get better quality interaction between the protagonist and the girls he plans on dating. But if you want it to be more than that I'd say add more fight scenes or more adventure whilst exploring more in depth on where your clones went when they traversed to get the blood of all the being s you wanted and maybe not make the MC so overpowered right off the bat unless you said something about that which I missed but still good try on the story.