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I don't quite like these kinds of stories since it's not my cup of tea but this one is pretty nice. It has good story development, nice characters and a great plot.
I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try. So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader. The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action. The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way. The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive. Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any. Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room). As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed. I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
This was an amazing read! I love how the world (setting) was slowly brought into the picture, along with the technology, the crystals, etc. Although I don’t typically read this genre, this was incredibly written. Though there are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, it doesn’t decrease the quality of the writing whatsoever. Keep it up!
I like how he started explaining the book and he did it in a brief way. The chapters end in ways that make you want to read the next chapter. This book has a bright future.
I really love how the author describes whats happening in the story, it's not too long or to short. I also like how the author doesn't take his time to get to the point, The story makes it worthy for me to read more chapters.
I have caught up to the latest chapter, and so far, so good. This book is dope, legit lit. it has the modern fantasy and sci-fi vibe in it, and also, the story is very descriptive. Long story short, I want more.
Finally the hours has come, chapter 1 grabbed me and now I wanna know what those crystal will be used for once they are found. Anyways who wrote this book, I feel like throwing a magic castle and a million power stones at him.
4.8 stars Everything is amazing with the novel. I like this genre, so the plot feels interesting, and refreshing I like the characters and the world background It is just that there are a few grammatical errors which pulls you out of the story for a bit. Yt, it is not enough to stop you from understanding everything. Really liked the novel
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The author has a unique approach on the story as he switches perspective between engaging with the readers and strorytelling. In fact, it was rather immersive— that is until cut scenes of information jump into the picture and leaves one lamenting the sudden disruption! Some people might think, I don’t like info dumb, and straight up quit from reading… Well, don’t quit just yet! The story has got potential in it (coming from someone who read a very populare novel with a similar theme.)
if you can correct your typos and, have this on par with blood warlock and a better werewolf story than MWS then i do my best to support this novel
good story and all but why is it called the beast system I mean if he is only going to be a wolf then it should be call the warewolf system or something if its supposed to be called the beast system then it should have more than 1 beast
Yet another amazing book by the author 😌 The book is extremely amazing I don't wanna stop reading Although I don't really read ML books, i love this one☺️
Lovely piece of work. I love Chapter two. It was a sparked up my curiosity. Well let’s see how it goes. I’ll leave another review later after reading more
Wow wow just wow, this book is truly amazing 😍🤩🤩🤩 I love it . Though it's still in it's early phase so I can't say much all I can say is that I am loving it. Can't wait for more chapters so don't disappoint me Mr author jt3.
Other than writing quality and world back ground which are both a 4.. everything else is subpar.. I was reading this book around 6:30 pm while I am at work and I kid you not I felt so bored that I almost slept… this is the most boring and weakest werewolf story ever… I digress… a shame really I liked the world background the vibe was there.. I read to 30 chapters I skip about 10 and I still felt like I didn’t miss much.. all and all just a boring book..
I don't quite like these kinds of stories since it's not my cup of tea but this one is pretty nice. It has good story development, nice characters and a great plot.
I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try. So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader. The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action. The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way. The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive. Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any. Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room). As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed. I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
This was an amazing read! I love how the world (setting) was slowly brought into the picture, along with the technology, the crystals, etc. Although I don’t typically read this genre, this was incredibly written. Though there are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, it doesn’t decrease the quality of the writing whatsoever. Keep it up!
I like how he started explaining the book and he did it in a brief way. The chapters end in ways that make you want to read the next chapter. This book has a bright future.
I really love how the author describes whats happening in the story, it's not too long or to short. I also like how the author doesn't take his time to get to the point, The story makes it worthy for me to read more chapters.
I have caught up to the latest chapter, and so far, so good. This book is dope, legit lit. it has the modern fantasy and sci-fi vibe in it, and also, the story is very descriptive. Long story short, I want more.
Finally the hours has come, chapter 1 grabbed me and now I wanna know what those crystal will be used for once they are found. Anyways who wrote this book, I feel like throwing a magic castle and a million power stones at him.
4.8 stars Everything is amazing with the novel. I like this genre, so the plot feels interesting, and refreshing I like the characters and the world background It is just that there are a few grammatical errors which pulls you out of the story for a bit. Yt, it is not enough to stop you from understanding everything. Really liked the novel
ネタバレを明かす The author has a unique approach on the story as he switches perspective between engaging with the readers and strorytelling. In fact, it was rather immersive— that is until cut scenes of information jump into the picture and leaves one lamenting the sudden disruption! Some people might think, I don’t like info dumb, and straight up quit from reading… Well, don’t quit just yet! The story has got potential in it (coming from someone who read a very populare novel with a similar theme.)
if you can correct your typos and, have this on par with blood warlock and a better werewolf story than MWS then i do my best to support this novel
good story and all but why is it called the beast system I mean if he is only going to be a wolf then it should be call the warewolf system or something if its supposed to be called the beast system then it should have more than 1 beast
Yet another amazing book by the author 😌 The book is extremely amazing I don't wanna stop reading Although I don't really read ML books, i love this one☺️
Lovely piece of work. I love Chapter two. It was a sparked up my curiosity. Well let’s see how it goes. I’ll leave another review later after reading more
Wow wow just wow, this book is truly amazing 😍🤩🤩🤩 I love it . Though it's still in it's early phase so I can't say much all I can say is that I am loving it. Can't wait for more chapters so don't disappoint me Mr author jt3.
Other than writing quality and world back ground which are both a 4.. everything else is subpar.. I was reading this book around 6:30 pm while I am at work and I kid you not I felt so bored that I almost slept… this is the most boring and weakest werewolf story ever… I digress… a shame really I liked the world background the vibe was there.. I read to 30 chapters I skip about 10 and I still felt like I didn’t miss much.. all and all just a boring book..