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Being completely honest I like the writing a lot, I like where the story is going and it's pretty cool that it's not the typical I'm a saiyan and therefore I'm instantly the strongest, but I think the author applied a nerf as I find it unlikely that someone who has been trapped all his life in a coliseum wouldn't know any fighting techniques especially coming from a saiyan in which even their lower class warriors are noted to be extremely prodigious in martial arts (e.g. goku that we go over was a lower class warrior and could instantly learn the kamekameha) but that would be all: goku we remember was a low class warrior and could almost instantly learn the kamekameha) but that would be all for the rest good story.
I freaking love this idea and book. most books like this rush through the characters development to reach certain timelines in the story. please keep writing this book.
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me gusto la historia es consistente los personajes están bien aunque es difícil dar una reseña a una historia con pocos capitulos pero tengo esperanzas
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Good fic --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It has potential, not exactly going in a direction I like but I think it’ll be fine. Going off that I hope he doesn’t actually join the teen titans because honestly he’s way too op, but I can see it happening. Using the other version of the teen titans is a nice change though from what is normally in fan fics. I do indeed like it so far, don’t take my words as criticism it’s just personal preference. If the author reads this, I don’t dislike your book at all, love it actually, so keep it up!
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It's always difficult to do a review of a novel with so few chapters, there's no way to know if the author will develop some cognitive problems and screw everything up in the next chapter (which happened many times), but some novels are so well done, interesting and with so much potential that it's hard not to get excited and review it, this novel is one of those cases. The DC universe is one of my favorite themes for fanfics and the MC is a fking Saiyan, that alone got me interested ngl, but the fact that the crossover element isn't as aggressive as we see in many other novels makes it even more fun to read, it's all done naturally and smoothly. The MC's personality is very well done especially when compared to other works I've read, come on, we've all read some novels where the characters' personalities don't match the life experiences they've faced, I've read novels where the MC have MILLIONS of years and acts like an ordinary child... Here we have a character with his traumas and who acts accordingly, it's pretty much like the journey of a man who has known only conflict and death since birth, an outsider no matter where he goes, I can't wait for his future development. The way the author uses the flashbacks is (in my opinion) amazing, it's an excellent way to approach the MC's past without just dumping a bunch of information in the first chapter or just ignoring it as many do... The scene transitions and the flashbacks are so well done and so smooth that sometimes I wish they were bigger, but in the end, they are perfect as they are. His relationships with other characters haven't been covered much yet (5 chapters only), what I can say from the little I've read is that it's very well done too, the author is faithful to the past and the Saiyan heritage of the MC and that's the same to other characters of the DC universe (only 5 chapters guys, don't know the future lol). Yes, I didn't say anything bad about this fic, yes, I'm in love after only 5 chapters, yes, the chance that the level drops or the author just goes into some store to buy some milk and leaves us (me!!) is pretty big (please no!!), but as I said at the beginning of my review: there are few chapters to go deeper into the story, all I can say is: Give it a chance, you won't regret it. PS: If you drop this novel my friend has some words for you:
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Ehhh que genial son tus fics porfa continuarlo , jajajaja insiste la referencia a Broly de super pero más salvaje a la hora de atacar, una pregunta el Saiyan del MC es un Saiyan legendario?
Só li 1 capítulo, mas eu realmente gostei. Esperando que o autor não desista no meio do caminho.,.............................................................
Being completely honest I like the writing a lot, I like where the story is going and it's pretty cool that it's not the typical I'm a saiyan and therefore I'm instantly the strongest, but I think the author applied a nerf as I find it unlikely that someone who has been trapped all his life in a coliseum wouldn't know any fighting techniques especially coming from a saiyan in which even their lower class warriors are noted to be extremely prodigious in martial arts (e.g. goku that we go over was a lower class warrior and could instantly learn the kamekameha) but that would be all: goku we remember was a low class warrior and could almost instantly learn the kamekameha) but that would be all for the rest good story.
I freaking love this idea and book. most books like this rush through the characters development to reach certain timelines in the story. please keep writing this book.
I love it Jdjejhfyrdkn khfdjgfdmjhcjfkhayredkhgfjhffkjgfuitguyrfiytfuyrfnhgxhjgrdhjfkhgfiyrfkjhfkhrfljhckhfdjtfgjkxuhrfkjgfturfkjgcjhvljhvjvjhfuyhnhcjgglgfiyflfmj
me gusto la historia es consistente los personajes están bien aunque es difícil dar una reseña a una historia con pocos capitulos pero tengo esperanzas
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Good fic --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It has potential, not exactly going in a direction I like but I think it’ll be fine. Going off that I hope he doesn’t actually join the teen titans because honestly he’s way too op, but I can see it happening. Using the other version of the teen titans is a nice change though from what is normally in fan fics. I do indeed like it so far, don’t take my words as criticism it’s just personal preference. If the author reads this, I don’t dislike your book at all, love it actually, so keep it up!
ネタバレを明かす It's always difficult to do a review of a novel with so few chapters, there's no way to know if the author will develop some cognitive problems and screw everything up in the next chapter (which happened many times), but some novels are so well done, interesting and with so much potential that it's hard not to get excited and review it, this novel is one of those cases. The DC universe is one of my favorite themes for fanfics and the MC is a fking Saiyan, that alone got me interested ngl, but the fact that the crossover element isn't as aggressive as we see in many other novels makes it even more fun to read, it's all done naturally and smoothly. The MC's personality is very well done especially when compared to other works I've read, come on, we've all read some novels where the characters' personalities don't match the life experiences they've faced, I've read novels where the MC have MILLIONS of years and acts like an ordinary child... Here we have a character with his traumas and who acts accordingly, it's pretty much like the journey of a man who has known only conflict and death since birth, an outsider no matter where he goes, I can't wait for his future development. The way the author uses the flashbacks is (in my opinion) amazing, it's an excellent way to approach the MC's past without just dumping a bunch of information in the first chapter or just ignoring it as many do... The scene transitions and the flashbacks are so well done and so smooth that sometimes I wish they were bigger, but in the end, they are perfect as they are. His relationships with other characters haven't been covered much yet (5 chapters only), what I can say from the little I've read is that it's very well done too, the author is faithful to the past and the Saiyan heritage of the MC and that's the same to other characters of the DC universe (only 5 chapters guys, don't know the future lol). Yes, I didn't say anything bad about this fic, yes, I'm in love after only 5 chapters, yes, the chance that the level drops or the author just goes into some store to buy some milk and leaves us (me!!) is pretty big (please no!!), but as I said at the beginning of my review: there are few chapters to go deeper into the story, all I can say is: Give it a chance, you won't regret it. PS: If you drop this novel my friend has some words for you:
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Ehhh que genial son tus fics porfa continuarlo , jajajaja insiste la referencia a Broly de super pero más salvaje a la hora de atacar, una pregunta el Saiyan del MC es un Saiyan legendario?
Só li 1 capítulo, mas eu realmente gostei. Esperando que o autor não desista no meio do caminho.,.............................................................
Sir i need more chapters if this stor it’s straight gas.