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Interesting spin on Spider-man but with a black MC It also passed the GEN test: - Good grammar - Entertaining - No harem Defo recommend
Há uma grande diferença entre criar um personagem "héroi" e criar um idiota, nessa fic claramente o mc é idiota. Há uma grande diferença entre criar um personagem "héroi" e criar um idiota, nessa fic claramente o mc é idiota.
an incredible story filled with action, love, passion, and tragedy. I have read several spiderman fanfics and each are unique, but this one is one of the few that keeps spider's core ideals while including personal traits and identity. While it feels a little rushed I can see past that. like the Mc said it's about taking a risk or not and which choice we make.
I read it in one day and I loved it. I mostly never write reviews. Author you have my respect.
Um lixo! Sem criatividade nenhuma! O autor não sabe o que está escrevendo fica inventando um monte de merda e acha que sua história é boa, não sabe respeitar a linha do tempo ou cronologia da história, fica fazendo um monte de controvérsias e não faz pesquisa para ver se as informações combinam... Um lixo uma perda de tempo total!!!!!!!🤮🤮🤮🤮🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻
I just love this Story!! It's not trying to please anyone but just wants to convey the message of what it means being a hero is. Thank you so much for this amazing ride.
unfortunately I have to rate this a... 100/1 YES THIS STORY IS AMAZING, although (SPOILER ALERT) I don't like stories with sad endings I can make an exception for this
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Chapter 14: honestly it could totally be in a film it's magnificent I even shed a tear. I'm not kidding, I really shed a tear, well done and thank you. PS: don't do harem 2 it's not a harem so silk and Black cat are good 😈
such an amazing story! the ending was sad but nonetheless amazing since it's unexpected. Author was able to pour his heart out in the chapters. Aw man I love this and I'm sure you'll love it too
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Muy triste la Cerda muy triste me entristece tanto me hizo llorar mucho me hizo plantearme de otro modo la vida de apreciar a la gente que está cerca de ti de valorar esos pequeños como grandes momentos de seguir adelante y vivir con las decisiones que tomas y aprender de ellas mirando hacia el futuro de verdad me da mucha agonía y un vacío esta historia preguntándome estará el Erén Parker de esta historia cuidando las otras líneas del tiempo como absoluta Godspeed de la devastación de la pérdida de la culpa y tristeza de perder a tus seres queridos amigos familia a la gente por la que luchan? De verdad muchas gracias por todo tu esfuerzo tu empeño y tus luchas por crear algo tan bueno tan realista algo tan para cada acción hay una reacción la verdad muchas gracias por esta historia. Soy hombre pero te digo te amo como de verdad lo aprecio de admiración por tan bien trabajo. Aunque me perturbo un poco el cap de flash comiéndose a Gwen y una duda porque no revivieron a todos los demás con las gemas del infinito jejeje solo mi pregunta inocente y pura
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Ahhh no se porque se me hace tan difícil relacionar a un spiderman con traje rojo y azul, con una persona negra. 😨😨😨............................ . ..... ... ...........
I like the Hero thing going on. Keep up the good work Arthur you make good fanfics 🫵🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾😌
One of, if not, the best written fan-fic I've ever read on this platform. Incredibly well written, with a perfect ending. Probably the only novel that almost made me cry. This NEEDS to get an official comic version, MARVEL where are you? Keep up the great work author-san, I'm waiting to read more stuff from you!
Overall story is amazing the characters are flesh out am little sad about the ending but the story turned out great I’ll love to see a part two with this story.
One of the best marvel Spider-Man oc fanstorys I read in a while just the character arcs each one go is good this a must read.
a excellent spider man fanfic a must read for marvel lovers. I really love the authors writing.Appreciate your hard work.
There too much spiderman fanfiction in this web already . Author, how about you make your fanfiction main world crossover with into the spider-verse movie and travel dimension while sightseeing into their world? Just an idea. I'm bored seeing so many generics spiderman fanfic that their author doesn't even take seriously.
I don’t really do reviews but since it’s another black guy I’ll bite. I actually find it interesting, especially with the powers but I’m going to have to stop here. I just don’t find the characters that appealing. What it boils down to it’s just not my cup of tea. Eren is very complex but I personally find him boring. It’s noting against you but if I don’t care for the mc or any other character I read I’ll drop the series just like I did Darling in the Franx and AOT( mainly for I didn’t like Eren). I have to get emotionally attached to at least one character for me to enjoy it. I feel like he would start off like Nior while gradually turning more like 616 Spider-man. So from what I’ve read, this can be a great story but not the type I’m looking for right now.
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! !
Hello, Deadpool here! The author has done it again, creating a great Spider-Man story. There is one difference though, this time, the story is TEN TIMES better. You can tell that the author is more experienced in writing this time and actually took the advice (the good advice at least) from people who commented and reviewed the last version. The only part that kinda sucks is that I've been reduced to nothing more than a cameo rather than an actual character in the story as of now... Anywho, he gets five stars from me.
Love the story. Lot of interesting plot twists. Especially the one about MC's heritage. Keep up the good work! 😁 The start was a bit meh but author's writing visibly improved as time went on. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
Breath of fresh air in the weary genre of fanfic. I'm usually very critical but I genuinely can't find a single flaw, the only reason you'd dislike this is simply if it isn't your style, because writing-wise, it's absolutely flawless. The MC is so beautifully written, he isn't some perfect being who does no wrong, he can actually FAIL. The dynamic of balancing his hero life and civilian life is soooooooooooo interesting! Everything in this is interesting! This isn't some random, power fantasy, self-insert fanfic with awful grammar that you'll find everywhere else on this site, this is an honest to God properly edited STORY. There is so much love and effort put into this story that rather than feeling like a fanfic, the level of quality feels like something you might straight up find in official comics! 10/10 would recommend, this story is liquid gold. It's barely even a fanfic and more like an original story with how separate and unique it is from known storylines. I don't like giving 5/5's so I'm trying to think of some reason to mark it down in some regard, but I genuinely can't. I'd even go on to say that this has ruined my experience with other fics (especially Marvel stories) because I just can't find anything of this quality and it hurts, everything seems so dull and stale now. Read. It.
Interesting spin on Spider-man but with a black MC It also passed the GEN test: - Good grammar - Entertaining - No harem Defo recommend
Há uma grande diferença entre criar um personagem "héroi" e criar um idiota, nessa fic claramente o mc é idiota. Há uma grande diferença entre criar um personagem "héroi" e criar um idiota, nessa fic claramente o mc é idiota.
an incredible story filled with action, love, passion, and tragedy. I have read several spiderman fanfics and each are unique, but this one is one of the few that keeps spider's core ideals while including personal traits and identity. While it feels a little rushed I can see past that. like the Mc said it's about taking a risk or not and which choice we make.
I read it in one day and I loved it. I mostly never write reviews. Author you have my respect.
Um lixo! Sem criatividade nenhuma! O autor não sabe o que está escrevendo fica inventando um monte de merda e acha que sua história é boa, não sabe respeitar a linha do tempo ou cronologia da história, fica fazendo um monte de controvérsias e não faz pesquisa para ver se as informações combinam... Um lixo uma perda de tempo total!!!!!!!🤮🤮🤮🤮🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻🖕🏻
I just love this Story!! It's not trying to please anyone but just wants to convey the message of what it means being a hero is. Thank you so much for this amazing ride.
unfortunately I have to rate this a... 100/1 YES THIS STORY IS AMAZING, although (SPOILER ALERT) I don't like stories with sad endings I can make an exception for this
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Chapter 14: honestly it could totally be in a film it's magnificent I even shed a tear. I'm not kidding, I really shed a tear, well done and thank you. PS: don't do harem 2 it's not a harem so silk and Black cat are good 😈
such an amazing story! the ending was sad but nonetheless amazing since it's unexpected. Author was able to pour his heart out in the chapters. Aw man I love this and I'm sure you'll love it too
ネタバレを明かす Muy triste la Cerda muy triste me entristece tanto me hizo llorar mucho me hizo plantearme de otro modo la vida de apreciar a la gente que está cerca de ti de valorar esos pequeños como grandes momentos de seguir adelante y vivir con las decisiones que tomas y aprender de ellas mirando hacia el futuro de verdad me da mucha agonía y un vacío esta historia preguntándome estará el Erén Parker de esta historia cuidando las otras líneas del tiempo como absoluta Godspeed de la devastación de la pérdida de la culpa y tristeza de perder a tus seres queridos amigos familia a la gente por la que luchan? De verdad muchas gracias por todo tu esfuerzo tu empeño y tus luchas por crear algo tan bueno tan realista algo tan para cada acción hay una reacción la verdad muchas gracias por esta historia. Soy hombre pero te digo te amo como de verdad lo aprecio de admiración por tan bien trabajo. Aunque me perturbo un poco el cap de flash comiéndose a Gwen y una duda porque no revivieron a todos los demás con las gemas del infinito jejeje solo mi pregunta inocente y pura
ネタバレを明かす Ahhh no se porque se me hace tan difícil relacionar a un spiderman con traje rojo y azul, con una persona negra. 😨😨😨............................ . ..... ... ...........
I like the Hero thing going on. Keep up the good work Arthur you make good fanfics 🫵🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾😌
One of, if not, the best written fan-fic I've ever read on this platform. Incredibly well written, with a perfect ending. Probably the only novel that almost made me cry. This NEEDS to get an official comic version, MARVEL where are you? Keep up the great work author-san, I'm waiting to read more stuff from you!
Overall story is amazing the characters are flesh out am little sad about the ending but the story turned out great I’ll love to see a part two with this story.
One of the best marvel Spider-Man oc fanstorys I read in a while just the character arcs each one go is good this a must read.
a excellent spider man fanfic a must read for marvel lovers. I really love the authors writing.Appreciate your hard work.
There too much spiderman fanfiction in this web already . Author, how about you make your fanfiction main world crossover with into the spider-verse movie and travel dimension while sightseeing into their world? Just an idea. I'm bored seeing so many generics spiderman fanfic that their author doesn't even take seriously.
I don’t really do reviews but since it’s another black guy I’ll bite. I actually find it interesting, especially with the powers but I’m going to have to stop here. I just don’t find the characters that appealing. What it boils down to it’s just not my cup of tea. Eren is very complex but I personally find him boring. It’s noting against you but if I don’t care for the mc or any other character I read I’ll drop the series just like I did Darling in the Franx and AOT( mainly for I didn’t like Eren). I have to get emotionally attached to at least one character for me to enjoy it. I feel like he would start off like Nior while gradually turning more like 616 Spider-man. So from what I’ve read, this can be a great story but not the type I’m looking for right now.
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! !
Hello, Deadpool here! The author has done it again, creating a great Spider-Man story. There is one difference though, this time, the story is TEN TIMES better. You can tell that the author is more experienced in writing this time and actually took the advice (the good advice at least) from people who commented and reviewed the last version. The only part that kinda sucks is that I've been reduced to nothing more than a cameo rather than an actual character in the story as of now... Anywho, he gets five stars from me.
Love the story. Lot of interesting plot twists. Especially the one about MC's heritage. Keep up the good work! 😁 The start was a bit meh but author's writing visibly improved as time went on. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
Breath of fresh air in the weary genre of fanfic. I'm usually very critical but I genuinely can't find a single flaw, the only reason you'd dislike this is simply if it isn't your style, because writing-wise, it's absolutely flawless. The MC is so beautifully written, he isn't some perfect being who does no wrong, he can actually FAIL. The dynamic of balancing his hero life and civilian life is soooooooooooo interesting! Everything in this is interesting! This isn't some random, power fantasy, self-insert fanfic with awful grammar that you'll find everywhere else on this site, this is an honest to God properly edited STORY. There is so much love and effort put into this story that rather than feeling like a fanfic, the level of quality feels like something you might straight up find in official comics! 10/10 would recommend, this story is liquid gold. It's barely even a fanfic and more like an original story with how separate and unique it is from known storylines. I don't like giving 5/5's so I'm trying to think of some reason to mark it down in some regard, but I genuinely can't. I'd even go on to say that this has ruined my experience with other fics (especially Marvel stories) because I just can't find anything of this quality and it hurts, everything seems so dull and stale now. Read. It.