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the system is efficient, not overpowered which is good... I would have preferred Harry to have an affinity with lightning or water but the choice of author is satisfactory I would like to see it updated again
Lol I actually like the story, but since you've abandoned it, you don't need a good review. too many of you on here start stories and stop them before any level of real substance and since you aren't writing you won't mind 1-star
Bland, dry, boring. also it feels like im just reading the plot lines and the summary of the story , Less character interactions, the only interactions i remember is when he's trying to flirt or highlighting his 8 pac abs, his height, his now chad face and with ginny just that actually, maybe i forgot most Interactions and dialogues bc it's just that bland.
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Overall I'm really enjoying the story so far While not perfect it's an enjoyable read Though I would remove the Failure punishments personally as they make quest not worth Accepting it's far safer to Reject the Quests at this time
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It is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction on this platform. Just hope that ghe author doesn't drop this midway like many other fan-fics. Keep up the good work...
The pace is good and so is the premise. If you can keep it up then it would be one of the better Harry Potter fanfictions. The writing quality is also good as well all in all a good fanfic with a great future.
If this can keep the trajectory it's on. It's on pace to be quite the read. The way the system is handled is what draws me in. Simple yet efficient, no unnecessary candor. I'll definitely recommend this to friends. I'm looking forward to see how this is 30 chapters in. Hopefully it can hold up.
As the author of this fic, I will be shameless and give myself 5 stars. Please review and comment about story. Any positive criticism will be appreciated. Also, forgive me for any grammatical error as English is not my first language. Writing quality for the first few chapters may not be satisfactory but I will try and improve as much as possible. HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY THIS . [img=recommend]
the system is efficient, not overpowered which is good... I would have preferred Harry to have an affinity with lightning or water but the choice of author is satisfactory I would like to see it updated again
Lol I actually like the story, but since you've abandoned it, you don't need a good review. too many of you on here start stories and stop them before any level of real substance and since you aren't writing you won't mind 1-star
Bland, dry, boring. also it feels like im just reading the plot lines and the summary of the story , Less character interactions, the only interactions i remember is when he's trying to flirt or highlighting his 8 pac abs, his height, his now chad face and with ginny just that actually, maybe i forgot most Interactions and dialogues bc it's just that bland.
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Overall I'm really enjoying the story so far While not perfect it's an enjoyable read Though I would remove the Failure punishments personally as they make quest not worth Accepting it's far safer to Reject the Quests at this time
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It is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction on this platform. Just hope that ghe author doesn't drop this midway like many other fan-fics. Keep up the good work...
The pace is good and so is the premise. If you can keep it up then it would be one of the better Harry Potter fanfictions. The writing quality is also good as well all in all a good fanfic with a great future.
If this can keep the trajectory it's on. It's on pace to be quite the read. The way the system is handled is what draws me in. Simple yet efficient, no unnecessary candor. I'll definitely recommend this to friends. I'm looking forward to see how this is 30 chapters in. Hopefully it can hold up.
As the author of this fic, I will be shameless and give myself 5 stars. Please review and comment about story. Any positive criticism will be appreciated. Also, forgive me for any grammatical error as English is not my first language. Writing quality for the first few chapters may not be satisfactory but I will try and improve as much as possible. HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY THIS . [img=recommend]