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the way characters interact with each other is not good...very awkward ! the Mc supposed to be Bjorn but he is very arrogant ..and he is gonna be a vassal for the starks but his plan is yo be kong of the whole North so we have a arrogant Mc who is oathbreaker ! the author doesn't even explain how lyarra stark is alive when she supposed to die when benjen is born...yea anyway this work need much work but the author has not experience !
The story has potential.I personally think that becoming vassal of the starks would kill the mood.Although odin telling him to take the crown when ready gives me hope. Also when odin tells that there are vikings in GOT I thought it would be ironborn or wildling. I would have liked to see mc start as a wildling and make his way up.
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A Wonderful Work of Art This Is. Expect More We Do. Keep Up The Wonderful Work You Should. Thank You.
the way characters interact with each other is not good...very awkward ! the Mc supposed to be Bjorn but he is very arrogant ..and he is gonna be a vassal for the starks but his plan is yo be kong of the whole North so we have a arrogant Mc who is oathbreaker ! the author doesn't even explain how lyarra stark is alive when she supposed to die when benjen is born...yea anyway this work need much work but the author has not experience !
The story has potential.I personally think that becoming vassal of the starks would kill the mood.Although odin telling him to take the crown when ready gives me hope. Also when odin tells that there are vikings in GOT I thought it would be ironborn or wildling. I would have liked to see mc start as a wildling and make his way up.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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A Wonderful Work of Art This Is. Expect More We Do. Keep Up The Wonderful Work You Should. Thank You.