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Story is fine, but it’s hard to read as an American reader. The story feels like it was translated by the writer. The meaning of everything comes through, but almost every other sentence has extra words or is so inefficiently written I needed to reread it. Unfortunately, every sentence is technically grammatically correct so I can’t justify below 3 on the writing quality. And it’s still easier to read than Ralph Waldo Emerson. Stopped at 16. Tried to pick it up again and quit again.
Honestly, I very much enjoy the story. I also have no problem with harem, But as the recent reviews says, having another person transmigrated is just not my cup of tea.
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in the middle of the story the author simply made ANOTHER transmigrator take over Sanji's body
i previously gave 5 stars for this...but now i deleted that 5 star and giving this 1 star. like for real bruh you just destroyed this story by having xianxia soul takeover sanji's body...not cool man. so like 2 transmigrator and other one is evil...hayysss
It's not good. Just Usopp being the MC instead of all strawhats. It just got dull when all interactions feels like characters from Xianxias, and everything is just rehash. Nothing new explored, aside from the female characters body.
the story was pleasantly good, until another person from our world entered Sanji's body. Stories with two transmigrators are boring and very tiring. But my rating for the story is still 5 stars, despite having to abandon it. It was an excellent read.
Whyyyyyy?! why transmigrate someone from earth into the body of Sanji, and then have him get Vivi??? you sir author are a cuck.
I haven't read it yet but this idea seem novel.Ngl i always thought instead of those swordman/fruit user and boxer why not a sniper/marksman or archer.i always want a ff like that but it rare.
Well the basic plot is the original timeline, the mc transmigrates into Usopp's body and wants to create a harem and be the strongest, there are also small changes but it's like a small curve in the same direction.
This story is basically just usssop with a worst personality., bland character ,plot that only works for ussop, with same canno story just with little bit exta stuff
Si possible j'aimerais plus d'avancer dans l'histoire. Pour les personnages un plus grand développement si possible mais c'est juste mon avis.
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If this fanfic continues, I think it could be one of the best one-piece fics out there. It's unique and refreshing. Don't you dare drop this one author.
Finally! If there is a character I abhor, it is Usopp. The man honestly does not deserve to be part of that crew. Robin and Nami show more bravery, improvement , and strength of character than him. This fanfic fixes that, finally, a man worth the title of the marksman of the pirate King. If I'd complain about anything is the upload rate. We need more of this Usopp
Fanfic yang unik........ Bagus Good .................. Dont drop it ................... ................... ................... ...................
I tried my best to read through this, as I was interested in seeing a story from the POV of Usopp. However, the writing quality, and character interactions via others or self, are too much to try and push through. I would recommend using Grammarly to help you with this.
Gran historia, un poco lento el desarrollo, pero muy entretenida. Espero que las actualizaciones sigan siendo diarias, pero no me importa mucho.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Harem please.
That fool, how could he believe someone like Usopp was a weakling, does he not realize that the true strength behind the Straw Hats is God Usopp. All jokes aside, he should possess some innate talent with him being the son of someone worthy of being a Yonko's crew Officer. Anyways hopefully with some experience he can work his way into unlocking Observation Haki early what with his sniping talents, maybe before the Arabasta Arc, I mean he has a decent amount of time before then and it would not be too out there if he got it around Whisky Peak or Little Garden. Going to give it a 4.5 which may change later on.
good luck and don't give up please i hope it will go far...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
A good start is quite interesting. In fact, his nose should be smaller, because his father's nose is normal and his mother's is a little more than normal or Yasopp is not his father hmm. What if his nose gets smaller because he stopped lying hmm.
Story is fine, but it’s hard to read as an American reader. The story feels like it was translated by the writer. The meaning of everything comes through, but almost every other sentence has extra words or is so inefficiently written I needed to reread it. Unfortunately, every sentence is technically grammatically correct so I can’t justify below 3 on the writing quality. And it’s still easier to read than Ralph Waldo Emerson. Stopped at 16. Tried to pick it up again and quit again.
Honestly, I very much enjoy the story. I also have no problem with harem, But as the recent reviews says, having another person transmigrated is just not my cup of tea.
ネタバレを明かす in the middle of the story the author simply made ANOTHER transmigrator take over Sanji's body
i previously gave 5 stars for this...but now i deleted that 5 star and giving this 1 star. like for real bruh you just destroyed this story by having xianxia soul takeover sanji's body...not cool man. so like 2 transmigrator and other one is evil...hayysss
It's not good. Just Usopp being the MC instead of all strawhats. It just got dull when all interactions feels like characters from Xianxias, and everything is just rehash. Nothing new explored, aside from the female characters body.
the story was pleasantly good, until another person from our world entered Sanji's body. Stories with two transmigrators are boring and very tiring. But my rating for the story is still 5 stars, despite having to abandon it. It was an excellent read.
Whyyyyyy?! why transmigrate someone from earth into the body of Sanji, and then have him get Vivi??? you sir author are a cuck.
I haven't read it yet but this idea seem novel.Ngl i always thought instead of those swordman/fruit user and boxer why not a sniper/marksman or archer.i always want a ff like that but it rare.
Well the basic plot is the original timeline, the mc transmigrates into Usopp's body and wants to create a harem and be the strongest, there are also small changes but it's like a small curve in the same direction.
This story is basically just usssop with a worst personality., bland character ,plot that only works for ussop, with same canno story just with little bit exta stuff
Si possible j'aimerais plus d'avancer dans l'histoire. Pour les personnages un plus grand développement si possible mais c'est juste mon avis.
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If this fanfic continues, I think it could be one of the best one-piece fics out there. It's unique and refreshing. Don't you dare drop this one author.
Finally! If there is a character I abhor, it is Usopp. The man honestly does not deserve to be part of that crew. Robin and Nami show more bravery, improvement , and strength of character than him. This fanfic fixes that, finally, a man worth the title of the marksman of the pirate King. If I'd complain about anything is the upload rate. We need more of this Usopp
Fanfic yang unik........ Bagus Good .................. Dont drop it ................... ................... ................... ...................
I tried my best to read through this, as I was interested in seeing a story from the POV of Usopp. However, the writing quality, and character interactions via others or self, are too much to try and push through. I would recommend using Grammarly to help you with this.
Gran historia, un poco lento el desarrollo, pero muy entretenida. Espero que las actualizaciones sigan siendo diarias, pero no me importa mucho.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Harem please.
That fool, how could he believe someone like Usopp was a weakling, does he not realize that the true strength behind the Straw Hats is God Usopp. All jokes aside, he should possess some innate talent with him being the son of someone worthy of being a Yonko's crew Officer. Anyways hopefully with some experience he can work his way into unlocking Observation Haki early what with his sniping talents, maybe before the Arabasta Arc, I mean he has a decent amount of time before then and it would not be too out there if he got it around Whisky Peak or Little Garden. Going to give it a 4.5 which may change later on.
good luck and don't give up please i hope it will go far...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
A good start is quite interesting. In fact, his nose should be smaller, because his father's nose is normal and his mother's is a little more than normal or Yasopp is not his father hmm. What if his nose gets smaller because he stopped lying hmm.
Adicionar outro transmigador no Sanji e esquecer totalmente do ussop que é inclusive o título da fanfic, estragou todo o sentido da história, se quisesse o Sanji de transmigador era só começar uma fanfic com ele de protagonista.
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