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Truly childish and wish fulfillment story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
you write as if everyone already knows what happened in the avengers and i hate it, and its all very childish, therefore i give you this review. i prefer super detailed fanfics.
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the development is good and some minor mistakes can be fixed and overall its the best and hope you update more chapters 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
This fanfic is similar to a fever dream of an 8 year old child i'm pretty sure it would be nice for the child but doesn't make it a very good story
Truly childish and wish fulfillment story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
you write as if everyone already knows what happened in the avengers and i hate it, and its all very childish, therefore i give you this review. i prefer super detailed fanfics.
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the development is good and some minor mistakes can be fixed and overall its the best and hope you update more chapters 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
This fanfic is similar to a fever dream of an 8 year old child i'm pretty sure it would be nice for the child but doesn't make it a very good story