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Fucking good novel there is no other novel more good than this one the best kingdom fan fin that i ever read. I u looking for a kingdom type read fanfic then this one is the best one give it a chance!!!.
Me encanta la historia Estoy esperando impaciente más capitulos ✌️ Súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper
Absolute banger, i love kingdom and this fan fic gives a new cool spin to an already great story.
Great start to the story I love where it's going. I hope you keep going and complete the story it's going well. This is one of my favorite books on the site.
Best story I've read to date from all types of novel/fanfic I've seen so far. Keep up the fantastic work you've done so far.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
min updatee min udah jam 1 subuhh, updtae 2 chapterrr hahahaha, panjanginn bab nya minn, gasabarr, dari tadii teruss nge check blm updatee...................................................
I waltlng someting like this story.. I hope the author doesn't spoil the story or get bogged down in it. I give five star because I want to encourage the author so that s/he can continue her/his story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
one of the ones with the greatest potential that is being released in this bimester congratulations author san, please don't drop this novel, great congratulations on all
This fanfic is good pls don't drop it 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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This is about the only kingdom fanfic that I actually like or it might just be the only one left, seriously man don’ t stop this is really good.
lanjut author, menurutku ini bagus, malah langka, sekarang tidak ada banyak novel fanfiction kingdom ini, jangan dengarkan orang yang menulis ulasan buruk, masih banyak orang yang menyukai ceritamu min. oh dan juga min untuk saran saya, hadiah jenderal panggilan boleh nggak berkurang, soalnya makin banyak karakter jenderal yg gasesuai dengan era qin di sebagian negara lainnya, tapi kalau cuman hadiah pasukannya boleh juga min. misalkan hadiah 5000 pasukan, abistu karena si mc bingung siapa yg bisa memegang komando 5000 pasukannya ini, maka mc memilih yg paling mumpuni diantara 5000 pasukan yg dipanggil untuk memegang komandonya, kalau begitu buat oc aja yg memegang komando nya min, dan juga cepetinn min buat si mc untuk terus berperang atau berlatih dengan senjata utama (glaive) atau halberd, tp senjata sekunder nya jg seringin dilatih seperti busur. itu aja saran saya min semoga bisa membantu. dichapter2 slnjtunya timeskip aja min, ceritain dia gimana berlatih, pergi berperang, membangun kotanya, dan tambahkan dia juga pensiun didepan umum bagaimana tanggapannya, sehabis itu dia jg berbicafa tatap muka dngn ei sei. biar cepat sampe di plot nya hehehe. dan juga min selama dia berperang, dia itu musuhnya harusnya jenderal jenderal yng dipanggil oleh sistem aja min, biar bisa dia sebagain dibunuh oleh mc dan berkurang, supaya nanti pas plot jenderal yg di bagikan ole sistem ke negara lainnya itu sedikit, biar ga tambah pusing nanti klo udh plot perang pas pemerintahan nya ei sei. semangat min, terimakasihh dan selalu updateee terusss ✨✨
Really like this story even if it's sometimes a little hard to read, the scenario is clever and the character quit interesting rrrrrrrrrrr
Thank you author for this novel. Good start on the novel . Great build up of the story even on the few chapters that been released .. I hope this story continues and be finished
Keep it up author good start.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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FINALLY A KINGDOM FF. I LIKE THE TWIST WITH THE 3 KINGDOM GENERALS IN IT. IT SHOULD BE A REALLY GOOD FF IF IT ISN'T DROPPED LIKE ALMOST ALL THE OTHER KINGDOM FF. SO PLEASE DON'T DROPPED THE BOOK AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
mandatory author 5 star review . Everyone's doing it, so I thought why not . After all, sometimes you need to pat your own back xD. So anyways, enjoy the story.
really like this syory because its about kingdom and i rarely see any novels about it so hioe you dont drop it i also like how you balanced it out
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Fucking good novel there is no other novel more good than this one the best kingdom fan fin that i ever read. I u looking for a kingdom type read fanfic then this one is the best one give it a chance!!!.
Me encanta la historia Estoy esperando impaciente más capitulos ✌️ Súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper súper
Absolute banger, i love kingdom and this fan fic gives a new cool spin to an already great story.
Great start to the story I love where it's going. I hope you keep going and complete the story it's going well. This is one of my favorite books on the site.
Best story I've read to date from all types of novel/fanfic I've seen so far. Keep up the fantastic work you've done so far.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
min updatee min udah jam 1 subuhh, updtae 2 chapterrr hahahaha, panjanginn bab nya minn, gasabarr, dari tadii teruss nge check blm updatee...................................................
I waltlng someting like this story.. I hope the author doesn't spoil the story or get bogged down in it. I give five star because I want to encourage the author so that s/he can continue her/his story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
one of the ones with the greatest potential that is being released in this bimester congratulations author san, please don't drop this novel, great congratulations on all
This fanfic is good pls don't drop it 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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take my five stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 don't drop . take my five stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 don't drop take my five stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 don't drop take my five stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 don't drop
This is about the only kingdom fanfic that I actually like or it might just be the only one left, seriously man don’ t stop this is really good.
lanjut author, menurutku ini bagus, malah langka, sekarang tidak ada banyak novel fanfiction kingdom ini, jangan dengarkan orang yang menulis ulasan buruk, masih banyak orang yang menyukai ceritamu min. oh dan juga min untuk saran saya, hadiah jenderal panggilan boleh nggak berkurang, soalnya makin banyak karakter jenderal yg gasesuai dengan era qin di sebagian negara lainnya, tapi kalau cuman hadiah pasukannya boleh juga min. misalkan hadiah 5000 pasukan, abistu karena si mc bingung siapa yg bisa memegang komando 5000 pasukannya ini, maka mc memilih yg paling mumpuni diantara 5000 pasukan yg dipanggil untuk memegang komandonya, kalau begitu buat oc aja yg memegang komando nya min, dan juga cepetinn min buat si mc untuk terus berperang atau berlatih dengan senjata utama (glaive) atau halberd, tp senjata sekunder nya jg seringin dilatih seperti busur. itu aja saran saya min semoga bisa membantu. dichapter2 slnjtunya timeskip aja min, ceritain dia gimana berlatih, pergi berperang, membangun kotanya, dan tambahkan dia juga pensiun didepan umum bagaimana tanggapannya, sehabis itu dia jg berbicafa tatap muka dngn ei sei. biar cepat sampe di plot nya hehehe. dan juga min selama dia berperang, dia itu musuhnya harusnya jenderal jenderal yng dipanggil oleh sistem aja min, biar bisa dia sebagain dibunuh oleh mc dan berkurang, supaya nanti pas plot jenderal yg di bagikan ole sistem ke negara lainnya itu sedikit, biar ga tambah pusing nanti klo udh plot perang pas pemerintahan nya ei sei. semangat min, terimakasihh dan selalu updateee terusss ✨✨
Really like this story even if it's sometimes a little hard to read, the scenario is clever and the character quit interesting rrrrrrrrrrr
Thank you author for this novel. Good start on the novel . Great build up of the story even on the few chapters that been released .. I hope this story continues and be finished
Keep it up author good start.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yeeee finaly something about this. Gshshshjsjshshshshsjsjshshhshshsjajjajajshdhdsjjshsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjejjsjsdhhshshshsjsjjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjjsjsjs
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FINALLY A KINGDOM FF. I LIKE THE TWIST WITH THE 3 KINGDOM GENERALS IN IT. IT SHOULD BE A REALLY GOOD FF IF IT ISN'T DROPPED LIKE ALMOST ALL THE OTHER KINGDOM FF. SO PLEASE DON'T DROPPED THE BOOK AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
mandatory author 5 star review . Everyone's doing it, so I thought why not . After all, sometimes you need to pat your own back xD. So anyways, enjoy the story.
really like this syory because its about kingdom and i rarely see any novels about it so hioe you dont drop it i also like how you balanced it out
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