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Son of Thor - Marvel

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作者: takeoffyourbra

4.5 (21 レビュー結果)

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A boy was reborn in the marvel, but he was reborn as a son of Thor with a random girl, after his birth he was taken to the Hall of Heroes to awaken his divinity, unfortunately his deity is rain, Modi the rain god, what a weak deity for the grandson of odin and son of thor!, luckily at age 12 he gained the power of transmigrator, during dreams he can.... fish for things

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samtheking01

I feel like this story has a lot of potential but I personally feel that your bias against some characters I feel like if you wrote with someone editing and making some corrections it might actually be really good let me know if you want some help I’ m not the best but we could try.(I know this is a run on sentence😂)

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HangerBaby

dont include comics to much. your writing isnt the best and if you include the comics or xmen it will really screw you as its way to hard for new writers to keep track of all the different story lines. thats why there are barely any good marvel/dc fanfics

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lozny_wer

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yooooooooooo

This story has potential, however, the author's bias seeps through. Another and more prominent issue is writing quality. Reading this you can tell English is not the author's main language. And a part of me thinks this could be a Chinese fanfic, if it was that'd make more sense... a lot more sense.

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Oleg_Nikitin

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Taranjit_Singh_5027

good [img=strong][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]

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Danilo_Stefanini

Please back......we need you, the históry is one of most funny i ever find to read in web novel, not drop please you ARE a great autor and Thais is a great Idea

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Alef_Biersack

I think your story is very good, it needs a little something here and there but nothing too serious, the pace of the story is also good, not too slow and not too fast, it is obvious that you need to have some knowledge of the Marvel universe, which in my opinion opinion is normal you are under no obligation to give every little detail of how the Marvel universe works, if a person is interested in reading a fanfic on a certain subject it is obvious that they need to have prior knowledge at least of the basics of the universe in which is interested.

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isa_azman

I like this novel please continue. A novel with a lot of potential. The only problem is the slow partition speed. And don't mind other people's bad comments, keep it up.

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Fenrirzero999

This story as a lot of potential. I’m looking at is development [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Andres_Niebles

An interesting story.......... but the character's rise in power is a bit slow, there are few things in the writing that need to be changed and more important to me is that the author uses deity to refer to the domain of the character and it is not deity but divinity and the MC is not a God, he is a demi-god, that they do not have divinity or domain, they only have it when they are promoted to gods ..... but the rest is fine ..

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MAYANK_KUMAR_4300

It's 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

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Aku_Kamu_5341

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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Ezzaldien_s

More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More 🙏 ❤

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Emilio_Herrera

La idea es bastante buena, me gustaría que modi respondiera a las oraciones de los mortales y visite la tierra en el futuro. Bueno la historia tiene bastante potencial, sigue así.

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Jade_speed

I have enjoyed the first 6 chapters. we definitely need more chapters soon since I'm interested in seeing where you take this book. keep up the good work.

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KingBing96

This story has interesting concepts. I’m looking forward to more released chapters hopefully soon. I’m definitely interested to see how the story progresses further. Continue what you’re doing because it is actually very good.

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BeguilingIncubus

very good story, just needed some grammar corrections. I also hope it's not harem, or if it is harem I hope it's not forced.

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