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It's really decent (for me at least) but I don't think the author updates it anymore. [img=update]
Author if you cant write OP character than dont give MC OP power to copy any anamoly he touches. You only ends up making him look stupid when he run around like a headless chicken and NOT stealing powers from any number of SCP. Dude could've literally copied that summoning keter class power but nah he is just gonna walk out and whine later he cant find any SCP.
I really liked the characters different personalities and always want to know how a life from a person from our world went into the SCP world.Thabk you for the story and I hope it will continue to have more interest and fun adventure in the story
NOTICE: I really like the protagonist Character and the others as well I see many potentials in this book I can't wait to see how it's gonna fold but can "William" interact more SCPs in the future like SCP-387(LEGO) SCP-4335(MINECRAFT) or SCP-053(THE YOUNG GIRL) waiting for a reply thank you:)
The reason i gave low rating to Story development and character design is Main character is naive this in of itself is not a bad thing he doesn't have any self preservation instincts and charges at anything blindly that involves danger to humanity again this is not a bad thing but the way it's done The second reason is loyalty to the SCP Foundation the reason i disagree is that while it is true that nature of SCP Foundation is to protect humanity they also get funding from somewhere and it's personnel are not excempt from corruption again this is a normal thing right? But the thing is to the SCP Foundation our MC is also an SCP That means he is an anomalous entity meaning he is dehumanized and kept in a cell against his will i can see that MC has no thoughts regarding this matter and even if this is okay One thing that is not is that MC is a cannon fodder not as in the story cannon fodder but to the SCP Foundation itself He can be sacrificed at any time or terminated if they deem him as a threat This obviously does not bode well with me and plus while it is true that SCP Foundation are the main character of the story so to speak the entire world does not exist for them There are a lot of different characters and organizations like Sanskrit cult -Yaldabaoth Worshippers Church Of The Machine God -Self explanatory Serpent Society -again self explanatory Chaos insurgency -basically mercenaries that are loyal to money It kinda destroys the feeling of wanting to sympathize and connect with the MC when he is blindly following a group of people for no reason and all the while being seen as an anomolous entity and kept in a cell
ネタバレを明かす
A really nice story that uses the lore of the scp to their best potential. Although the ability to copy is kinda busted I still like the fact that he still needs to train just so that he can use it properly so umm power growth is a 10/10 and for the story writing it's really good and the fact that the time line is so good this just elevates the story to a whole new level anyways 10/10
Everything about this story is overall great, however I can't stand the Main Character he makes no god d*mn sense. He's super loyal to the foundation for absolutely no fkin reason. He barely knows these people and is already saying how he's gonna be stronger to protect those closest to him like WHAT!!!
I wanna know if the protagonist of this novel will be aware of SCP 2718 cause i think it would be interesting to see how he would act against IT. I'm curious to know if MC would kill all of humanity when realizing the existence of "IT".
So its a oc insert into a SCP universe Some important things to know before reading. First MC is not smart, think dense anime protagonist. SCP Staff have also been dumbed down slightly. Slightly less dark than one would think of the universe. The grammar is readable but could use a bit of work. Dialogue is somewhat stilted and stale.
ネタバレを明かす
It’s amazing, the author has somehow managed to represent the s.c.p. Foundations goals accurately and make the story fun to read. Another thing to mention would be that even with the mc’s anomalous ability he seems to have a relatively satisfying power growth that dosn’t get in the way of his character growth. 5/5 - this review was made at the 29th chapter and is subject to change.
Its better than all the trash eco fanfics I have seen I hope this isn't dropped and if it is it would beat about 100-200 chaps ..............
Write faster please xD!!!! I keep forgetting you have a Auxiliary Volume so I saw your novel had 2 new chapters and was bumed out because it was only 1 new chapter.
there's was this book where a japanese kid started getting pics when he opens books and in the content of the pic was that blonde girl of the cover the one that can control things inside the image she takes with her camera, he asked his senpai of occultism and etc. at some point in one session he got pull in into the photo and he enters de scp universe he is interrogated and classified as an sub scp of that girl. is this similar to that one? I don't know because I ha don't read it anyway you can search Scp Foundation: Iris Through The Looking Glass Vol. 1 that's the one I'm talking about that books slaps. Do svidaniya
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the English is rough from the first paragraph, problems distinguishing plural and singular to name one. don't know if grammarly will help but I recommend to try
Great to see an scp fic they are few and far between. I've always loved scps since highschool expeially the scps with good test logs. like scp-261 "Pan-Dimensional Vending Machine" with it's thought provoking snacks. scp-1147 "Adaptive plum" a species of plum which seeds an be planted in any substance taking on its characteristics and scp 914 with iits interesting long tests logs. So all in all I love this fic a good amount.
I am giving 5 stars only because you have no concurrency right now. Chapters are short, logic is sometimes dum but i want to read more. I love scp setting.
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Good finally another good scp fan fix that hasn't been dropped that also isn't Chinese lol I have hope for the author's future potential and hope they don't quit
I love the SCP universe and I like this novel the novel is getting more chapters every day idk what else to say pls hug peanut and don't blink:) I love this novel pls more
Finally i found something good to read Here are 5 stars and all my stones I have Please do not drop it, I am more than happy to read every new chapter every day!
really great story and it focused on the scp universe, hoping it will keep continue updating and doesn't dropped midway the story [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story, great scp fanfic, please don't drop it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's really good, there isn't alot scp fanfic and i'm really hyped to see how it goes with the story, especially how the characters gonna go through stuff
This is as interesting as it gets. Author seemed to have planned it for a long one and had a consistent update. The story is as good as the usual SCP fanfic. Looking forward what's come next!
The story is really promising so far, had read few chapters ahead and pretty interesting regarding the conflicts and the character that were present in the story. The writing is pretty good and there isn't many SCP Fanfic that's good like this, def recommend for you guys to read it. All in all it's a good experience, the author seem to have planned it for a long running series with consistent update and I hope it will continue like that.
I like the story so far, and am very glad to find another SCP fanfic. ...................................................................................
It's really decent (for me at least) but I don't think the author updates it anymore. [img=update]
Author if you cant write OP character than dont give MC OP power to copy any anamoly he touches. You only ends up making him look stupid when he run around like a headless chicken and NOT stealing powers from any number of SCP. Dude could've literally copied that summoning keter class power but nah he is just gonna walk out and whine later he cant find any SCP.
I really liked the characters different personalities and always want to know how a life from a person from our world went into the SCP world.Thabk you for the story and I hope it will continue to have more interest and fun adventure in the story
NOTICE: I really like the protagonist Character and the others as well I see many potentials in this book I can't wait to see how it's gonna fold but can "William" interact more SCPs in the future like SCP-387(LEGO) SCP-4335(MINECRAFT) or SCP-053(THE YOUNG GIRL) waiting for a reply thank you:)
The reason i gave low rating to Story development and character design is Main character is naive this in of itself is not a bad thing he doesn't have any self preservation instincts and charges at anything blindly that involves danger to humanity again this is not a bad thing but the way it's done The second reason is loyalty to the SCP Foundation the reason i disagree is that while it is true that nature of SCP Foundation is to protect humanity they also get funding from somewhere and it's personnel are not excempt from corruption again this is a normal thing right? But the thing is to the SCP Foundation our MC is also an SCP That means he is an anomalous entity meaning he is dehumanized and kept in a cell against his will i can see that MC has no thoughts regarding this matter and even if this is okay One thing that is not is that MC is a cannon fodder not as in the story cannon fodder but to the SCP Foundation itself He can be sacrificed at any time or terminated if they deem him as a threat This obviously does not bode well with me and plus while it is true that SCP Foundation are the main character of the story so to speak the entire world does not exist for them There are a lot of different characters and organizations like Sanskrit cult -Yaldabaoth Worshippers Church Of The Machine God -Self explanatory Serpent Society -again self explanatory Chaos insurgency -basically mercenaries that are loyal to money It kinda destroys the feeling of wanting to sympathize and connect with the MC when he is blindly following a group of people for no reason and all the while being seen as an anomolous entity and kept in a cell
ネタバレを明かす A really nice story that uses the lore of the scp to their best potential. Although the ability to copy is kinda busted I still like the fact that he still needs to train just so that he can use it properly so umm power growth is a 10/10 and for the story writing it's really good and the fact that the time line is so good this just elevates the story to a whole new level anyways 10/10
Everything about this story is overall great, however I can't stand the Main Character he makes no god d*mn sense. He's super loyal to the foundation for absolutely no fkin reason. He barely knows these people and is already saying how he's gonna be stronger to protect those closest to him like WHAT!!!
I wanna know if the protagonist of this novel will be aware of SCP 2718 cause i think it would be interesting to see how he would act against IT. I'm curious to know if MC would kill all of humanity when realizing the existence of "IT".
So its a oc insert into a SCP universe Some important things to know before reading. First MC is not smart, think dense anime protagonist. SCP Staff have also been dumbed down slightly. Slightly less dark than one would think of the universe. The grammar is readable but could use a bit of work. Dialogue is somewhat stilted and stale.
ネタバレを明かす It’s amazing, the author has somehow managed to represent the s.c.p. Foundations goals accurately and make the story fun to read. Another thing to mention would be that even with the mc’s anomalous ability he seems to have a relatively satisfying power growth that dosn’t get in the way of his character growth. 5/5 - this review was made at the 29th chapter and is subject to change.
Its better than all the trash eco fanfics I have seen I hope this isn't dropped and if it is it would beat about 100-200 chaps ..............
Write faster please xD!!!! I keep forgetting you have a Auxiliary Volume so I saw your novel had 2 new chapters and was bumed out because it was only 1 new chapter.
there's was this book where a japanese kid started getting pics when he opens books and in the content of the pic was that blonde girl of the cover the one that can control things inside the image she takes with her camera, he asked his senpai of occultism and etc. at some point in one session he got pull in into the photo and he enters de scp universe he is interrogated and classified as an sub scp of that girl. is this similar to that one? I don't know because I ha don't read it anyway you can search Scp Foundation: Iris Through The Looking Glass Vol. 1 that's the one I'm talking about that books slaps. Do svidaniya
ネタバレを明かす the English is rough from the first paragraph, problems distinguishing plural and singular to name one. don't know if grammarly will help but I recommend to try
Great to see an scp fic they are few and far between. I've always loved scps since highschool expeially the scps with good test logs. like scp-261 "Pan-Dimensional Vending Machine" with it's thought provoking snacks. scp-1147 "Adaptive plum" a species of plum which seeds an be planted in any substance taking on its characteristics and scp 914 with iits interesting long tests logs. So all in all I love this fic a good amount.
I am giving 5 stars only because you have no concurrency right now. Chapters are short, logic is sometimes dum but i want to read more. I love scp setting.
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Good finally another good scp fan fix that hasn't been dropped that also isn't Chinese lol I have hope for the author's future potential and hope they don't quit
I love the SCP universe and I like this novel the novel is getting more chapters every day idk what else to say pls hug peanut and don't blink:) I love this novel pls more
Finally i found something good to read Here are 5 stars and all my stones I have Please do not drop it, I am more than happy to read every new chapter every day!
really great story and it focused on the scp universe, hoping it will keep continue updating and doesn't dropped midway the story [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story, great scp fanfic, please don't drop it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's really good, there isn't alot scp fanfic and i'm really hyped to see how it goes with the story, especially how the characters gonna go through stuff
This is as interesting as it gets. Author seemed to have planned it for a long one and had a consistent update. The story is as good as the usual SCP fanfic. Looking forward what's come next!
The story is really promising so far, had read few chapters ahead and pretty interesting regarding the conflicts and the character that were present in the story. The writing is pretty good and there isn't many SCP Fanfic that's good like this, def recommend for you guys to read it. All in all it's a good experience, the author seem to have planned it for a long running series with consistent update and I hope it will continue like that.
I like the story so far, and am very glad to find another SCP fanfic. ...................................................................................
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