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I'm aware that this is a new novel at the time I am writing this, but I just have a couple of critiques that I had. Reading the first few chapters mostly with the pacing and lack of seen development between the MC and what seems to be the romance interests for this story. As well as the chapters being written in a very short and concise way, which isn't bad, but there should be a little more details even if it feels like fluff to extend chapters. That's all this has potential, and I see way too many authors not gain a good following in the beginning and get demoralized from it, and I don't want to see that happen here😄
I'm aware that this is a new novel at the time I am writing this, but I just have a couple of critiques that I had. Reading the first few chapters mostly with the pacing and lack of seen development between the MC and what seems to be the romance interests for this story. As well as the chapters being written in a very short and concise way, which isn't bad, but there should be a little more details even if it feels like fluff to extend chapters. That's all this has potential, and I see way too many authors not gain a good following in the beginning and get demoralized from it, and I don't want to see that happen here😄