Tachyon: Rise to villainy

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StoryCraft

I normally don't this self review but it's my friend's fanfic story and not mine in the first place I think its fine if I rate his story. .

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Hentai_God56

This makes no sense what is the mc a hero a villain what cause if your gonna make him a hero change the name I came to read a villain story

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BoredCrow

This feels ai generated and so bland like how does anyone speak like that but still otherwise the world background is good so i guess a 3.8

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marcelll3214

Bruh... i do not even know ha to say. giving 2 stars just because it is cw fanfiction and i do not see them... like at all. Just be prepared before you read it.

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Paul_Rahul

what I don't like about most of the fan fic is that they don't even recreate the personality of the characters as they were supposed to be most of them becomes 3rd rate characters from cringe dialogue from Chinese novel,anime

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Miki_Marlo75

The villain or hero is not clear. Are you going to write about a supposed villain without being a villain? It doesn't make sense. It doesn't explain things. There are parts where things just happen one after the other without context.and rightly in my opinion it has a lot to improve to be considered a story as such

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AstralNinja420

If you had him reincarnated instead then we would not being seeing the primal force in the show if you based it on the show then at least give the progression of the story equal with the episodes but a little more details like what they would do in between episodes plus if the Mc is a flash fanboy then make him like cat woman as an example she does work with some heroes but also is a thief now in my opinion I would rob the mc with like 2-3 wishes no more no less then make him have the same thing as the example he steals but it’s stuff that is anything flash and his team and flash villains have but in reality he work with team flash as tachyon but at night he has a different suit and becomes Robin Hood if he comes across corrupt while taking dangerous stuff that is a “collectible” from the people that have them but he literally just steals from the villains for tech and fun but his first with is to become a speedster like Barry but his tachyon suit is like a dark metallic gray then his second wish could be I don’t know to have no emotions from his past life cause he keeps his memories but not the emotions if there is a third wish the just make him Barry older twin by like 10 minutes but tis your story so your choice but hopefully you’ll consider this idea because at this point I would not read it because I have read a lot of fanfics that have this stuff happened it’s bland[img=Mad]

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AuroraFlower30303

I don't really like the villain genre like this novel. but still this novel is very good for those who like villain genre novels, I give it 3 stars because it's not my cup of tea.

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The_Puffer

He is not a villain. He is a criminal. There is a huge difference. He kinda acts like cat woman. While robbing places, he also helps flash like he is a sidekick. He acts like a fanboy near flash. And dont get me started on how stupid flash is. I mean, he is even more stupid than cw flash. Flash somehow carries his wallet with him even in costume and mc steal it for a minute and gives it back. And then flash wonder why mc knows his secret identity

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Frizepize

the first chapters, sucks hard, some cringes me out and others just makes me mad for some reason. all in all you suck but in good way.... sightly... quarter

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Maser_monster_66

beep beep! *Road runner noises* I'm already starting to enjoy this story and quite frankly I hope it gets update sooner then later so I can see what shenanigans his Charater gets in, especially since it is in the CW arrowverse. (shenanigans away!)

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UnKnoWn12345678910

I don’ know if I already sent a review already but It can’t be helped I really like this FF it doesn’t really feel like a half baked story someone came up in there dreams but like someone put effort into it the only problem I have is that the updates are kinda slow but nune the less tis still good so here’s my op inion

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Creativityiskey

Will the main character meet zoom I haven’t gotten that far in the book??

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Jordan_AGS

This is one of the best arrow-verse fanfics on here

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Senaio

Who dare to give this novel a low rate. You Buffon headed monkeys. Writing quality is too. Better than 99% of all fanfics. Unsaying stability. On or off but makes it uk to us by realising 2 amazing chapters. Amazing story development went from 0 to hundred the first 10 chapters might be boring, but after a night because a masterpiece. Character design is Gaaaas, amazing character design

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KingPumpkin3

This is one of my favorite I have found