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Antenz
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Hi everyone, author here! Updating my own review of Trickster as the story has progressed quite a lot since I wrote the first one. First of all, I think this story is really good, but it does not follow the traditional formula of stories on webnovel. This is not a story about someone becoming super strong and conquering the world, this is a story about people and their interactions with each other. Naturally, you will still get to see the MC getting strong as all heck, but that is not the primary focus. Secondly, due to how I write, and how I like to plan my outline and draft my chapters, the update schedule is all over the place. Although I could portion out the chapters, I dislike that concept a lot. I much more enjoy releasing small 'arcs' of the story rapidly, as to then return to the drawing board and work on the outline and drafts again. What this means is that there will be periods of time without updates, but there will also be periods where I will mass release a ton of chapters in a short period of time. If you do enjoy my work, please do check out my other work as well. As always, to the ones supporting me by reading my story, commenting and sending me power stones, I appreciate you a lot, and it makes writing this story so much more exciting knowing that I am sharing it with other people. Cheerios!

1yr
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Flipped_123

Unique story with good writing and character development. Not enough chapters. No matter who you are, this stroy will give you a good experience.

3mth
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Nutstain

This novel is such a hidden gem. The main character has genuinely interesting beginning arcs and character development that I’m hooked for every chapter and so do the supporting casts. Both the comedy and the action shine (even the serious character interactions hit). The power system is familiar yet unique and the power progression is paced expertly. Just a really good book tbh, glad to see it updated again

3mth
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Blazemegahot

tbh this is probably my favorite book on webnovel and the only issue I have is the upload speed but it's ok since the author releases entire arcs at once really love this one

10mth
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David_Johns_8995

This novel is heavily uunderrated! And it was also just what I was looking for

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1yr
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goldkage

Teg dark??!! ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

1yr
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Bobdrillan

Its only the second light novel i've ever read. However if this kind of level is standard, then I have the feeling that light novel are gonna become part of my life.

1yr
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Voidray
LV 11 Badge

I started this novel on 26th march and have completed till the updated chapters by the time I’m writing comment. The author’s writing style got me hooked he’s way of explaining complicated stuff is what I like about this novel. I highly recommend you guys to read this novel.

1yr
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SUSHANT

There always seem to be a girl and a drop dead gorgeous one at that, this time from the start. it irks me to no end. And God, oh god always a goofy one. Can't I find a novel that demand a little seriousness. I am already starting this novel with a bad taste; I don't know how this will turn up later on.

1yr
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Aymenn_Farrress

Good novel But mc is a shadow hiding his power losing in purpose let the Arthur shine let the World think he's weaker bla bla bla You know this cliché

1yr
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Hym1l
LV 15 Badge

Tis a lovely story, no long winded explanation on why you should read it hear. Been reading basically everytime new chapters come out, only wish it was a bit more consistent but is what it is.

1yr
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DaoistGuHIG6

i might be overestimating the story as I have just finished reading the latest chapter which is 256 or 253( i forgot while writing this) but this is one of the best story's i have read on webnovel, the way author writes this novel is akin to those who publish millions of books if not better, you can feel the creativity and passion, the characters are three dimensional, and although i wasn't the biggest fan of when zero first should up, he grew on me, the world development is fantastic, i like how he draws parallels between different characters, sure it might be a bit edgy, but i think everyone who has read this story are thankful Peter wasn't the main character.

1yr
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FransizSef

Novel is great but man Zero is super annoying. I don't like it and while i can see some reasons i can say this could have gone different and get the same results without needing Zero. Some may like it but i don't. I don't think we needed to come back to academy or school whatever you call it. Btw I'm on 192 rn

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1yr
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JailGoo
LV 15 Badge

Truly a really engaging story with very well developed charcters. This story has been a really enjoyable read that is really unique in how it has really focused on the emotional and character development side of the story rather than just on plot. I really appeciate that the author has not put a price on any of the chapters and it’s clear that they are writing this story because they are passionate about it. If you have a method of donation that takes less of a cut, I would totally be open to donate to you! (Unless you do actually want us to donate through gifts in WN) From all the web novels I have read so far, this story is one of my favourites in that I really enjoy how much personality all the characters have and I like that this story is willing on focusing on the emotional challenges and developments of all the characters. For example, many other novels gloss over how it might feel to actually kill someone or sentient being or only mention it for a few paragraphs but I like that this story actually shows James’ development for better or for worse in a manner that feels realistic and human like. Another aspect that I really enjoy about this novel is the very frequent perspective changes that occur. I think this really helps flesh out each of the characters and continue developing the background in addition to making it feel like every character is living out their own lives while the story continues progressing. Trickster’s Apostle really utilizes writing through different perspectives more than any other web novel I have read and I find it very enjoyable. To the author, thank you for also having artwork made which wasn’t something you needed to do but I appreciate that you put the effort to do so anyways. To potential readers, while it is not something I am expecting from the author, it should be noted that the release schedule of this novel is pretty loose and not very consistent. Of course there is no point in rushing an author to release anything, I think you should just keep that in mind. Now to discuss areas that could be further improved: While I feel that the characters are very well developed, the background does not. While areas are mentioned and I have a general understanding of how this world is set up, I feel that there is still more room to develop the actual world and how it is like. Outside of the school and some specific locations, many areas of the world have each only really been described in a few paragraphs. At the same time, unlike other novels I don’t feel like this lack of detail is particularly detrimental to the story because the plot/events we are focusing on aren’t very reliant on it? (Even I don’t fully understand why I don’t find this to be that big of an issue for this story in particular) In general, I think this story is really engaging and unique in its focus on the characters which I find really enjoyable. I look forward to following this story and I think I will edit this review with any feedback I would have as the story continues. This is one of my favourite web novels and I really want to see how it will develop!

1yr
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Ieatbooks

a truly wonderful experience the protagonist is not some cut and paste archetype of I'm a hero so the world moves with me or yes the odds are against me but somehow everything turns out fine .

1yr
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andrewscooby

Very good writing quality. Posts a lot! Has 3-dimensional characters. And very good world-building. AND IT'S FREE! Well done author.[img=recommend]

1yr
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Tim_Benco

This is my favorite Novel right now and i love the Character development. I'm still not finished, but i lobed it so far

2yr
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HOV215
LV 14 Badge

I am on chapter 78 but so far I am liking what I am seeing and not only is this one of the very few webnovel novels that is clear with grammar and story telling its free so to give thanks to this beautiful author I am giving him a very good review as he is sacrificing a contract and this novel definitely deserves it to

2yr
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JesterNouvel

Heyho 🙋🏿‍♂️, it's me a random reader that has been reading over 169 Chapter of this gem. I can just tell you that I loved nearly every part of it! The characters are well written and unique in a type of way I won't forget them even after 40+chapters. The World in itself has a lot of lore and within it a lot of mystery around it and just like the story itself shows us everything in a detailed well written manner! [ READ IT U WONT REGRET IT ] 🤸🏿‍♂️🕺🏿

2yr
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3ddy
LV 4 Badge

amazing story ...............

2yr
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Lordous
LV 15 Badge

A author I respect. Epic World Building.

2yr
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Tee_hee

Impressed, did not expect something that reads smoothly in web novel. The story contains all the tropes I hate and I still pretty much enjoyed it so I have to give the author props. James with his social anxiety and quirks (before growth) was a perfect character. The other side cast was likeable and acted logically I did not particularly hate any of them. The magic system and crafting could be developed more and interactive with less time skips and more in-depth, I did not particularly get excited or enamoured with more thoughts about his power albeit its improved upon latter chapter.

2yr
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B0mba
LV 14 Badge

Okay first off, this novel is amazing. I love the way the plot has developed and everything. Second, there is animated video called the court jester animated by Alpas[The 7th end] and it's scarily similar to this in the story it tells, and its really cool.

2yr
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VoidUzumaki

An absolutely great novel, there are basically no spelling/grammar/wording errors, I can remember maybe 5 in nearly 200 chapters. The characters themselves are all rather complex and there are barely any true 'mob' characters, though the amount of characters that are actually important is somewhat high, they are still a manageable amount and are all given character, not always completely unique, but that is natural as humans have character traits in common as well. There is no typical 'forced plot' like someone the MC is avoiding being in the same city by chance, if something like that happens then it is for a valid reason and not a random event, most of the time, the author has to introduce new characters somehow after all. The worldbuilding itself is quite good as well, it is going quite slowly, partly probably because the novel is progressing relatively slowly, but it is happening and done quite well. And while the story is progressing slowly one isn't getting bored of it(or at least I didn't get bored anyway). I would definitely recommend you to at least give it a try if you like the general premise of such stories, of course.

2yr
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Lives954

I love the story So far i honestly think everyone should give it a try

2yr
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rawthentic

this novel is deffinetly a gem. while the premise is certainly not new and the world background is not fully explored, the amazing writing quality, how alive the characters feel and their interactions makes me want to keep reading on. i cant help but keep giggling at the interactions between the main characters and am excited to see how the MC will find unique ways to get stronger evolve further as a person.

2yr
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Purevessel_User

I enjoy this story. The different perspectives and how careful the MC is .

2yr
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A1den
LV 4 Badge

All I can say is that this book is so amazing, astonishing, astounding, surprising, bewildering, stunning staggering, shocking, startling, stupefying, breathtaking, perplexing, and awe-inspiring.

2yr
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Saint_fourty_seven

this is good novel, the story is intriguing and makes me want to keep reading it. at first, its kinda annoying because the pov keep switching between james (the mc) and sophie. but i bear with it and continue to read

2yr
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NeofireX

Great novel and the best part is its free. The power system is very good. And the world building is great. overall its a good read.________________

2yr
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Antenz
LV 13 Badge

Hi everyone, author here! Updating my own review of Trickster as the story has progressed quite a lot since I wrote the first one. First of all, I think this story is really good, but it does not follow the traditional formula of stories on webnovel. This is not a story about someone becoming super strong and conquering the world, this is a story about people and their interactions with each other. Naturally, you will still get to see the MC getting strong as all heck, but that is not the primary focus. Secondly, due to how I write, and how I like to plan my outline and draft my chapters, the update schedule is all over the place. Although I could portion out the chapters, I dislike that concept a lot. I much more enjoy releasing small 'arcs' of the story rapidly, as to then return to the drawing board and work on the outline and drafts again. What this means is that there will be periods of time without updates, but there will also be periods where I will mass release a ton of chapters in a short period of time. If you do enjoy my work, please do check out my other work as well. As always, to the ones supporting me by reading my story, commenting and sending me power stones, I appreciate you a lot, and it makes writing this story so much more exciting knowing that I am sharing it with other people. Cheerios!

1yr
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Flipped_123

Unique story with good writing and character development. Not enough chapters. No matter who you are, this stroy will give you a good experience.

3mth
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Nutstain

This novel is such a hidden gem. The main character has genuinely interesting beginning arcs and character development that I’m hooked for every chapter and so do the supporting casts. Both the comedy and the action shine (even the serious character interactions hit). The power system is familiar yet unique and the power progression is paced expertly. Just a really good book tbh, glad to see it updated again

3mth
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Blazemegahot

tbh this is probably my favorite book on webnovel and the only issue I have is the upload speed but it's ok since the author releases entire arcs at once really love this one

10mth
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David_Johns_8995

This novel is heavily uunderrated! And it was also just what I was looking for

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1yr
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goldkage

Teg dark??!! ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

1yr
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Bobdrillan

Its only the second light novel i've ever read. However if this kind of level is standard, then I have the feeling that light novel are gonna become part of my life.

1yr
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Voidray
LV 11 Badge

I started this novel on 26th march and have completed till the updated chapters by the time I’m writing comment. The author’s writing style got me hooked he’s way of explaining complicated stuff is what I like about this novel. I highly recommend you guys to read this novel.

1yr
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SUSHANT

There always seem to be a girl and a drop dead gorgeous one at that, this time from the start. it irks me to no end. And God, oh god always a goofy one. Can't I find a novel that demand a little seriousness. I am already starting this novel with a bad taste; I don't know how this will turn up later on.

1yr
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Aymenn_Farrress

Good novel But mc is a shadow hiding his power losing in purpose let the Arthur shine let the World think he's weaker bla bla bla You know this cliché

1yr
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Hym1l
LV 15 Badge

Tis a lovely story, no long winded explanation on why you should read it hear. Been reading basically everytime new chapters come out, only wish it was a bit more consistent but is what it is.

1yr
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DaoistGuHIG6

i might be overestimating the story as I have just finished reading the latest chapter which is 256 or 253( i forgot while writing this) but this is one of the best story's i have read on webnovel, the way author writes this novel is akin to those who publish millions of books if not better, you can feel the creativity and passion, the characters are three dimensional, and although i wasn't the biggest fan of when zero first should up, he grew on me, the world development is fantastic, i like how he draws parallels between different characters, sure it might be a bit edgy, but i think everyone who has read this story are thankful Peter wasn't the main character.

1yr
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FransizSef

Novel is great but man Zero is super annoying. I don't like it and while i can see some reasons i can say this could have gone different and get the same results without needing Zero. Some may like it but i don't. I don't think we needed to come back to academy or school whatever you call it. Btw I'm on 192 rn

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1yr
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JailGoo
LV 15 Badge

Truly a really engaging story with very well developed charcters. This story has been a really enjoyable read that is really unique in how it has really focused on the emotional and character development side of the story rather than just on plot. I really appeciate that the author has not put a price on any of the chapters and it’s clear that they are writing this story because they are passionate about it. If you have a method of donation that takes less of a cut, I would totally be open to donate to you! (Unless you do actually want us to donate through gifts in WN) From all the web novels I have read so far, this story is one of my favourites in that I really enjoy how much personality all the characters have and I like that this story is willing on focusing on the emotional challenges and developments of all the characters. For example, many other novels gloss over how it might feel to actually kill someone or sentient being or only mention it for a few paragraphs but I like that this story actually shows James’ development for better or for worse in a manner that feels realistic and human like. Another aspect that I really enjoy about this novel is the very frequent perspective changes that occur. I think this really helps flesh out each of the characters and continue developing the background in addition to making it feel like every character is living out their own lives while the story continues progressing. Trickster’s Apostle really utilizes writing through different perspectives more than any other web novel I have read and I find it very enjoyable. To the author, thank you for also having artwork made which wasn’t something you needed to do but I appreciate that you put the effort to do so anyways. To potential readers, while it is not something I am expecting from the author, it should be noted that the release schedule of this novel is pretty loose and not very consistent. Of course there is no point in rushing an author to release anything, I think you should just keep that in mind. Now to discuss areas that could be further improved: While I feel that the characters are very well developed, the background does not. While areas are mentioned and I have a general understanding of how this world is set up, I feel that there is still more room to develop the actual world and how it is like. Outside of the school and some specific locations, many areas of the world have each only really been described in a few paragraphs. At the same time, unlike other novels I don’t feel like this lack of detail is particularly detrimental to the story because the plot/events we are focusing on aren’t very reliant on it? (Even I don’t fully understand why I don’t find this to be that big of an issue for this story in particular) In general, I think this story is really engaging and unique in its focus on the characters which I find really enjoyable. I look forward to following this story and I think I will edit this review with any feedback I would have as the story continues. This is one of my favourite web novels and I really want to see how it will develop!

1yr
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Ieatbooks

a truly wonderful experience the protagonist is not some cut and paste archetype of I'm a hero so the world moves with me or yes the odds are against me but somehow everything turns out fine .

1yr
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andrewscooby

Very good writing quality. Posts a lot! Has 3-dimensional characters. And very good world-building. AND IT'S FREE! Well done author.[img=recommend]

1yr
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Tim_Benco

This is my favorite Novel right now and i love the Character development. I'm still not finished, but i lobed it so far

2yr
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HOV215
LV 14 Badge

I am on chapter 78 but so far I am liking what I am seeing and not only is this one of the very few webnovel novels that is clear with grammar and story telling its free so to give thanks to this beautiful author I am giving him a very good review as he is sacrificing a contract and this novel definitely deserves it to

2yr
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JesterNouvel

Heyho 🙋🏿‍♂️, it's me a random reader that has been reading over 169 Chapter of this gem. I can just tell you that I loved nearly every part of it! The characters are well written and unique in a type of way I won't forget them even after 40+chapters. The World in itself has a lot of lore and within it a lot of mystery around it and just like the story itself shows us everything in a detailed well written manner! [ READ IT U WONT REGRET IT ] 🤸🏿‍♂️🕺🏿

2yr
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3ddy
LV 4 Badge

amazing story ...............

2yr
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Lordous
LV 15 Badge

A author I respect. Epic World Building.

2yr
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Tee_hee

Impressed, did not expect something that reads smoothly in web novel. The story contains all the tropes I hate and I still pretty much enjoyed it so I have to give the author props. James with his social anxiety and quirks (before growth) was a perfect character. The other side cast was likeable and acted logically I did not particularly hate any of them. The magic system and crafting could be developed more and interactive with less time skips and more in-depth, I did not particularly get excited or enamoured with more thoughts about his power albeit its improved upon latter chapter.

2yr
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B0mba
LV 14 Badge

Okay first off, this novel is amazing. I love the way the plot has developed and everything. Second, there is animated video called the court jester animated by Alpas[The 7th end] and it's scarily similar to this in the story it tells, and its really cool.

2yr
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VoidUzumaki

An absolutely great novel, there are basically no spelling/grammar/wording errors, I can remember maybe 5 in nearly 200 chapters. The characters themselves are all rather complex and there are barely any true 'mob' characters, though the amount of characters that are actually important is somewhat high, they are still a manageable amount and are all given character, not always completely unique, but that is natural as humans have character traits in common as well. There is no typical 'forced plot' like someone the MC is avoiding being in the same city by chance, if something like that happens then it is for a valid reason and not a random event, most of the time, the author has to introduce new characters somehow after all. The worldbuilding itself is quite good as well, it is going quite slowly, partly probably because the novel is progressing relatively slowly, but it is happening and done quite well. And while the story is progressing slowly one isn't getting bored of it(or at least I didn't get bored anyway). I would definitely recommend you to at least give it a try if you like the general premise of such stories, of course.

2yr
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Lives954

I love the story So far i honestly think everyone should give it a try

2yr
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rawthentic

this novel is deffinetly a gem. while the premise is certainly not new and the world background is not fully explored, the amazing writing quality, how alive the characters feel and their interactions makes me want to keep reading on. i cant help but keep giggling at the interactions between the main characters and am excited to see how the MC will find unique ways to get stronger evolve further as a person.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Purevessel_User

I enjoy this story. The different perspectives and how careful the MC is .

2yr
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A1den
LV 4 Badge

All I can say is that this book is so amazing, astonishing, astounding, surprising, bewildering, stunning staggering, shocking, startling, stupefying, breathtaking, perplexing, and awe-inspiring.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Saint_fourty_seven

this is good novel, the story is intriguing and makes me want to keep reading it. at first, its kinda annoying because the pov keep switching between james (the mc) and sophie. but i bear with it and continue to read

2yr
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NeofireX

Great novel and the best part is its free. The power system is very good. And the world building is great. overall its a good read.________________

2yr
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