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I specifically like this story simply because of the action, the author has done a great job adapting that into this book, and my god what a first chapter that was, very compelling.
A beautifully written book with a unique storyline....and perfect defined character. The book is a must to read.......love the way you define the world background. Great work,,,
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 200 chapters
Interesting plot premise. Although I didn't read many chapters, I was easily drawn into the story from the moment it opened. There are a few minor grammatical errors that have been pointed out by a reader that are not many and can be easily corrected.
I read first few chapters and it isn't a typical transmigration story. So, that makes it even more interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
A very different kind of novel which actually understands and is self-aware about its own stereotypes and cliches, which is kinda refreshing. The subtle satire, and the world-building, along with the beautiful description of atmosphere and imagery of a lot of proceeding to the story. I was hyped a lot by the synopsis. And from the chapters I read, it seemed to be delivering what it promised. Cheers!
The story is very interesting and developing quite well. There are no dearth of events following events to grip the interest of the reader. It seems forgotten gods may very well rise in future. I am impressed
The story is getting better and better. Love this already. I should recommend this to everyone who loves fantasies and transmigrations. Good work author.Got you in my library. keep going.......
Attractive start, it has a captivating plot and being a fan of transmigration, I can say it's pretty good, I highly recommend, can't wait to read more. 💯
The author has a very satisfying way of describing small details. They do a great job at painting out the environment for the reader in not just painting a mental picture but creating a mood. The author is also great at describing how characters feel and putting you in their bodies. This also comes in handy when it comes to action scenes, the sheer violence of some of it really showing through in their descriptions. The attention to detail all works to make the protagonist feel small. The immersive descriptions of everything really just work for making this world feel real. Definitely worth the read.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. recommended:),
I'mnot that much into transmigration plots but your book got me, author 🤩🤩 [img=recommend][img=recommend] writing is very detailed and interesting... good luck author ... waiting for more 😍❤[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the fact that the story has fantasy and action. Great plot and story line, the story is progress from plot to plot. great work author.
We see the world through FL eyes. I like how it slowly unravels. But i still feel it’s typical transmigrant story with little bit twist that author has tried to put in place.
The writer's narration very well knows how to catch the reader's attention. The comedic effect is apparent in many scenes so there's enough guarantee that the comedy genre tag is not for nothing. Pretty unique storyline too. More updates will definitely refine the author's skills! Keep it up!!
The story is not like any other transmigration story I have read. It is action pack and can keep you glued to your screen. If you are Looking for a story full of adventure, this book is for you.
I like the descriptions of the fight scenes, and there are a few scenes that are funny. The love the creativity of the creatures. There quite a few grammar mistakes but not too bad. Keep up the good work author.
I really liked this unique piece of work. It's different from usual transmigration novels and we can see the mc development as the story progressed well. Good luck author
I love this work gleaned by author. The story line is amazing and easy to build up imagination. I admire the main character. It is one of the best works I came across this site. I really appreciate author's effort for this work
Hey all....Author here. Thanks to those who took their time to rate and review my first work :) I welcome all reader who come across this novel to leave their comments on what they like and what dislike about this work. All comments are valuable. A Big Heart to all Readers :)
The story is action-packed. It's not the typical transmigration stories you'll find here. If you like action and fantasy, you'll surely like this. There are minor grammar errors but it's not much of an issue. The writer is very good in giving detailed descriptions. It's like I am seeing a movie play in front of me. The details are really well-made! Keep it up. It's very good :)
i really like the way author has written the story. we can see so many emotions/reaction of the fl in first chapter and the way author had presented the MC's that was something I really like in this book Hope we can see more layers of other characters in the upcoming chapters
I've read a couple comics about transmigration, and figured I'd give a novel about it a try. This novel, like the synopsis says, is a little different than the typical transmigration story, but not in a bad way. Characters are ok so far, but they seem to have similar personalities. Some decisions are odd, but I think it's for comedic effect since it's a comedy. If you like transmigration and are familiar with cultivation themes, give it a try!
Overall its pretty a decent read, the writing should do more a bit of work and the grammar as well, charactwrs are kind dorky tho making dumb choices thats make me wonder why. updating daily is great key to gathering more readers, you already have 77 chapters and so try fix them editing them and cutting off some of not important scenes.
This world becomes more and more alive with all the complications of governance, underworld, and the differences between commoners and cultivators as the story progresses. The FL's growth from an ignorant and over-curious girl to a cultivator who is slowly grasping the intricacies of cultivation, as well as dealing with the laws of this world which contradict her value system are very impressionable. Want to read more chapters. Keep going [img=update]
I specifically like this story simply because of the action, the author has done a great job adapting that into this book, and my god what a first chapter that was, very compelling.
A beautifully written book with a unique storyline....and perfect defined character. The book is a must to read.......love the way you define the world background. Great work,,,
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 200 chapters
Interesting plot premise. Although I didn't read many chapters, I was easily drawn into the story from the moment it opened. There are a few minor grammatical errors that have been pointed out by a reader that are not many and can be easily corrected.
I read first few chapters and it isn't a typical transmigration story. So, that makes it even more interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
A very different kind of novel which actually understands and is self-aware about its own stereotypes and cliches, which is kinda refreshing. The subtle satire, and the world-building, along with the beautiful description of atmosphere and imagery of a lot of proceeding to the story. I was hyped a lot by the synopsis. And from the chapters I read, it seemed to be delivering what it promised. Cheers!
The story is very interesting and developing quite well. There are no dearth of events following events to grip the interest of the reader. It seems forgotten gods may very well rise in future. I am impressed
The story is getting better and better. Love this already. I should recommend this to everyone who loves fantasies and transmigrations. Good work author.Got you in my library. keep going.......
Attractive start, it has a captivating plot and being a fan of transmigration, I can say it's pretty good, I highly recommend, can't wait to read more. 💯
The author has a very satisfying way of describing small details. They do a great job at painting out the environment for the reader in not just painting a mental picture but creating a mood. The author is also great at describing how characters feel and putting you in their bodies. This also comes in handy when it comes to action scenes, the sheer violence of some of it really showing through in their descriptions. The attention to detail all works to make the protagonist feel small. The immersive descriptions of everything really just work for making this world feel real. Definitely worth the read.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. recommended:),
I'mnot that much into transmigration plots but your book got me, author 🤩🤩 [img=recommend][img=recommend] writing is very detailed and interesting... good luck author ... waiting for more 😍❤[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the fact that the story has fantasy and action. Great plot and story line, the story is progress from plot to plot. great work author.
We see the world through FL eyes. I like how it slowly unravels. But i still feel it’s typical transmigrant story with little bit twist that author has tried to put in place.
The writer's narration very well knows how to catch the reader's attention. The comedic effect is apparent in many scenes so there's enough guarantee that the comedy genre tag is not for nothing. Pretty unique storyline too. More updates will definitely refine the author's skills! Keep it up!!
The story is not like any other transmigration story I have read. It is action pack and can keep you glued to your screen. If you are Looking for a story full of adventure, this book is for you.
I like the descriptions of the fight scenes, and there are a few scenes that are funny. The love the creativity of the creatures. There quite a few grammar mistakes but not too bad. Keep up the good work author.
I really liked this unique piece of work. It's different from usual transmigration novels and we can see the mc development as the story progressed well. Good luck author
I love this work gleaned by author. The story line is amazing and easy to build up imagination. I admire the main character. It is one of the best works I came across this site. I really appreciate author's effort for this work
Hey all....Author here. Thanks to those who took their time to rate and review my first work :) I welcome all reader who come across this novel to leave their comments on what they like and what dislike about this work. All comments are valuable. A Big Heart to all Readers :)
The story is action-packed. It's not the typical transmigration stories you'll find here. If you like action and fantasy, you'll surely like this. There are minor grammar errors but it's not much of an issue. The writer is very good in giving detailed descriptions. It's like I am seeing a movie play in front of me. The details are really well-made! Keep it up. It's very good :)
i really like the way author has written the story. we can see so many emotions/reaction of the fl in first chapter and the way author had presented the MC's that was something I really like in this book Hope we can see more layers of other characters in the upcoming chapters
I've read a couple comics about transmigration, and figured I'd give a novel about it a try. This novel, like the synopsis says, is a little different than the typical transmigration story, but not in a bad way. Characters are ok so far, but they seem to have similar personalities. Some decisions are odd, but I think it's for comedic effect since it's a comedy. If you like transmigration and are familiar with cultivation themes, give it a try!
Overall its pretty a decent read, the writing should do more a bit of work and the grammar as well, charactwrs are kind dorky tho making dumb choices thats make me wonder why. updating daily is great key to gathering more readers, you already have 77 chapters and so try fix them editing them and cutting off some of not important scenes.
This world becomes more and more alive with all the complications of governance, underworld, and the differences between commoners and cultivators as the story progresses. The FL's growth from an ignorant and over-curious girl to a cultivator who is slowly grasping the intricacies of cultivation, as well as dealing with the laws of this world which contradict her value system are very impressionable. Want to read more chapters. Keep going [img=update]