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This is a very good fanfic and I love it but the grammar in the early chapters is like someone was choking on something and couldn't see well while writing but other than that its great its a little sus how 90% of authors I see don't have English as their main language
this is the best fan fiction on the Hollywood i really like reading author writing is also very good keep updating. the character are also very good.
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kudos to the author for a terrific rework of the novel! All i can say is that the novel feels like it had a soul🌵🌵🦖
This is alot better than the previous one and without the system make the story have better development
well, my only negative comment about this novel is that there is no expression of words properly. How do you say it 🤔 its written, my noice writer, and just like me. don't know how to express my words
La idea en si esta buena, no es el tipico donde el mc renace en un cuerpo basura y toda esa chorrada, ciertamente para algunos puede que no les agrade por el hecho de que todo sucede de forma calmada, la verdad me gusto y me atrajo muchimo la idea. La cuestio y lo que me desanimo un poco fue la redacción, es una pesima redacción, además de eso mucha sveces si no pones cuidado no notaras que los personajes esten hablando lo cual aveces es molesto, pero en general si no te importa lo de la redacción esto puede un suspiro y es buena la idea en general, me gusta la personalidad del mc y de como este piensa en el futuro, asi que lo recomiendo, solo ten en cuenta la redacción
please continue bro I love the story I need more I need more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
It's actually good ngl, it's just that I have too much expectations in this novel that I rate it like this Your Writing Quality is not that bad tho I did not like it Story Development of yours is just OK Your Character Design Is what I really don't like in this ff, I can't really explain neither can I explain it but I just don't like it that's it
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I just want to say I love the fanfic and I hope you more success thanks for the novel. Fyi I'm not a choosey reader who like to rumble about a fanfic they are reading and act like a boss on a free fanfic.
Good story. Just the right thing to read before bed. A novel for fun, no drama or other boring stuff.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Awesome work man please continue its an amazing story a must read..................................................................................................................................................................................................
GREAT WORK MEN LOVING THE STORY JUST SPELLING MISTAKES BUT LOVE THE WORK AWESOME AND I RECOMMEND EVERYONE LOVE YOU BRO .......................................................
its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it
Reviewing it once again and I love it beside some grammar everything is awesome 👍 definitely recommend AWESOME GREAT! 😍😍😍😍😍😍💓💓💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💕💕😘😘👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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I like the story but the only problem is the grammar ......................................................................................................................................
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it's really a good story, I'm really enjoying it, don't drop this story,it would be really good if you could upload new chapters everyday 😊
this might not be a all rounder book like im really a superstar but it definitely something new i love it so far the ownly down side is that he does not do like everything like know technology and be a singer but everything else is great thanks
The story and character development with what can be seen is excellent, it has a great future. Besides that it has a stable rise of chapters.
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Story and plotline are amazing, will keep you interested for a long time. Updates are stable enough. The only downside is the Bad grammar but well the Author's mother tongue is not English so it's kinda expected. But well I have seen worse English in mtl sites and if you can read them destroying your brain cells just to satiate your Boredom then you should give this fanfic a try. I hope other's understand and don't underrate this Novel. Since Author is giving it for free and despite his bad English he is trying his level best. If too many negative comments come for Author then he might just abandon this Novel so it's better if you guys just ignore the grammar part. If anyone want's to be a translator for Author he/she can contact Author though he/she won't get paid so please keep that in my mind.
This is a very good fanfic and I love it but the grammar in the early chapters is like someone was choking on something and couldn't see well while writing but other than that its great its a little sus how 90% of authors I see don't have English as their main language
this is the best fan fiction on the Hollywood i really like reading author writing is also very good keep updating. the character are also very good.
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kudos to the author for a terrific rework of the novel! All i can say is that the novel feels like it had a soul🌵🌵🦖
This is alot better than the previous one and without the system make the story have better development
well, my only negative comment about this novel is that there is no expression of words properly. How do you say it 🤔 its written, my noice writer, and just like me. don't know how to express my words
La idea en si esta buena, no es el tipico donde el mc renace en un cuerpo basura y toda esa chorrada, ciertamente para algunos puede que no les agrade por el hecho de que todo sucede de forma calmada, la verdad me gusto y me atrajo muchimo la idea. La cuestio y lo que me desanimo un poco fue la redacción, es una pesima redacción, además de eso mucha sveces si no pones cuidado no notaras que los personajes esten hablando lo cual aveces es molesto, pero en general si no te importa lo de la redacción esto puede un suspiro y es buena la idea en general, me gusta la personalidad del mc y de como este piensa en el futuro, asi que lo recomiendo, solo ten en cuenta la redacción
please continue bro I love the story I need more I need more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
It's actually good ngl, it's just that I have too much expectations in this novel that I rate it like this Your Writing Quality is not that bad tho I did not like it Story Development of yours is just OK Your Character Design Is what I really don't like in this ff, I can't really explain neither can I explain it but I just don't like it that's it
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I just want to say I love the fanfic and I hope you more success thanks for the novel. Fyi I'm not a choosey reader who like to rumble about a fanfic they are reading and act like a boss on a free fanfic.
Good story. Just the right thing to read before bed. A novel for fun, no drama or other boring stuff.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Awesome work man please continue its an amazing story a must read..................................................................................................................................................................................................
GREAT WORK MEN LOVING THE STORY JUST SPELLING MISTAKES BUT LOVE THE WORK AWESOME AND I RECOMMEND EVERYONE LOVE YOU BRO .......................................................
its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it
Reviewing it once again and I love it beside some grammar everything is awesome 👍 definitely recommend AWESOME GREAT! 😍😍😍😍😍😍💓💓💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💕💕😘😘👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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I like the story but the only problem is the grammar ......................................................................................................................................
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😎Vamos,vamos no dejes de subir capitulos 🙏.....................................................................................................
it's really a good story, I'm really enjoying it, don't drop this story,it would be really good if you could upload new chapters everyday 😊
this might not be a all rounder book like im really a superstar but it definitely something new i love it so far the ownly down side is that he does not do like everything like know technology and be a singer but everything else is great thanks
The story and character development with what can be seen is excellent, it has a great future. Besides that it has a stable rise of chapters.
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Story and plotline are amazing, will keep you interested for a long time. Updates are stable enough. The only downside is the Bad grammar but well the Author's mother tongue is not English so it's kinda expected. But well I have seen worse English in mtl sites and if you can read them destroying your brain cells just to satiate your Boredom then you should give this fanfic a try. I hope other's understand and don't underrate this Novel. Since Author is giving it for free and despite his bad English he is trying his level best. If too many negative comments come for Author then he might just abandon this Novel so it's better if you guys just ignore the grammar part. If anyone want's to be a translator for Author he/she can contact Author though he/she won't get paid so please keep that in my mind.