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章 5: chap 5: unexpectedly meeting(part II)*

[Warning: some nude scene ahead]

"Damn, it's only my first day, and yet things are getting complicated already. But hey, it's still better than drinking water filled with Pokemon/animal piss, and bacteria of all kinds. And its night"

"Haha~", he laughed at his own sarcastic joke.

He was about to head out to find a clean water source when he heard someone's sound. it is a sweet voice in the distance up ahead in the stream.

'Someone here, human? ' Thinking that he can ask for their help if there are travelers.

He slowly walks there in a voice direction and makes sure to not make a sound. he looks at who was there from behind the tree like a pervert. well, here he is careful because of what happened earlier.

There was a girl casually swimming through the small lake. it was dark, but with clear moonlight, he can somewhat see her. blond hair tied as she wore a black one-piece swimsuit.

He doesn't know why she swimming at night. he does know that swimming at night does turn off your left-over energy and releases feel-good endorphins that reduce stress and provide a calming effect that helps you fall asleep and stay asleep.

Well, it was his hobby you can say surfing the internet and social app in his free time. where you can find many of these kinds of information. That is why he knew this.

But what baffled him is why is she doing this in the forest. Well, he might have overlooked this as this is none of his business what others do.

here he was going to ask for help but now he feels awkward. well, it's nothing to do with him having no experience with girls and all.

Think it's what a gentleman would do and not disturb the girl's bathing time, he can wait and see if when she finishes bathing.

so like the gentleman he waits and looked at her swimming in a lake. while he thinks it dangerous for a girl like her to swim in the lake at night.what if some pervert sees this and does something to her?

After said girl gives a good show to some pervert not knowing this. She starts the main part of the show that changing to her nightdress.

Come to her camping sight where her cloth and other things with a fire burning. There we can see her face, a blond-haired cute girl around age 15 or 16. in her black one-piece swimsuit, she looks sexy and cute.

The gentleman could not take his eyes off her and looked all over her.

'she is still in development but still goddess'.looking at the girl that was the first person he has seen after coming to this world.

'Are all people here this mush good looking?' thinking this he starts to go there to ask for help and come out of wood.

She bends down and takes her cloth from beg in process of this she offers him a look of her smooth open back that he can see as the swimsuit back is wide open.

He sees that and stops walking when he looks as she bends down as if offering him her ass. Her ass chick looks lively, smooth, white like cream. in the back of his mind, he wishes that he can use it as a pillow for sleep.

As her swimsuit is wet and sticking to her body which left very little to his imagination. that also includes her secret place between her leg. He does not know what to do, not that he can take off his eye. he stands still like a log with his voice struct in his throat.

Till now he knows that he has seen almost everything. As a former 19-year-old person he knows that he should be feeling lust right now.

But he can't feel the lust as he is in the body of a 10-year-old. If something that describes his feeling right then it's like looking at a fine erotic painting, there is no lust but admiration for the beauty.

'hah, If it was an old me then I would be holding back myself from touching that ass.'

As show continuous, she takes her first swimsuit from the shoulder. her whole wet back is visible. then she slides off her whole one-piece swimsuit from down her leg.

in the process, her wet secret place became visible that is dipping with water drops. as if to tease him she bend down to take the towel. now her whole pink hairless pussy is visible to him.

'NO! my first time seeing a naked girl and I can not fully admire him, it is not fair!'

He has seen his fair number of porn. looking at his erotic pussy and his lib little brother, he wished that he can be horny even if he know that he could possibly have sex with a girl in front of him.

'I should have asked my body to be a little older.' there is no point in regret now. I have to wait for some year.

She dried her body. he can see her wairing her black panty which were too sexy for him as she swings her ass right and left. The same can be said when she wears her night dress.

'She did not wear a bra? Well, she might not like it to wear at night.'

the girl in front of him is just too sexy to look at right now in her black night dress.

Or I am just a simp. Let's go ask her for help.

Just as the girl was about to go to sleep after taking her sleeping bag, she heard a voice from behind which startled her.

"Oneesan, can you give me some water to drink, please~ "

He used his appearance to the maximum as this would make him less suspicious.

'Who would be wary of an innocent kid ?'

Girl sees the small 10-year-old kid in dark, standing there with a pokemon egg in his hand.

"Huh, what are you doing in the forest alone kid, did you get lost?"

"Hum, I got lost and I am really thirsty.", he just decided to go with the flow.

The girl gives him water to drink as both set in front of a campfire. with water, she also gives him some snacks to eat.

"Thank you ! oneesan" he thanked her as he is very grateful for her helping him.

She also smiled at the polite boy who make her remember her little sister. "So why are you in the forest alone, how old are you? do you live nearby or do you come with someone? "

She knows that it is not like the old time when rules changed for kids. it happened 7 years ago, even if she don't like it. she could not do anything.

He could feel his sweat pouring down from his forehead.

He just reincarnated, he definitely didn't want to expose himself this quickly! Moreover, she was the first person he met since he arrived here, so it would be wiser to not lie to mush as that can be caught after some time.

"I am 10 years old and I got lost." he acted timidly, why? because that would kids do when they are caught doing wrong.

"What is your name? do you know the way to your home or address?"

"I am …"

He did not know what to say. he new to this world. does god that sends me here create my identity or did he have any previous identity? does this body is his? Or did he take over someone's body? Does anyone know him? Did he take over the body of someone who has family or friends? isn't it too selfish of him to take others' identities and life for himself to live as him?

He wishes it was not like that. otherwise, he can not face the friend and family of the previous owner of this body.

In overthinking and worry something in his mind snape. as if to answer the above question, some memory locked in his mind flooded in.

"AHHHHHAHH, it hurt !" he suddenly got a headache. it was as if his mind is broken into three pieces and it was overloaded with memory.

He passed out and fall to the ground with his face forward.

"What is happening, are you alright ?" she is worried as he suddenly started screaming loudly and pass out on the ground.

She see her backside which had a big wound on it. it was from the last attack from Rhydon. it is not a life-threatening wound but it would hurt like hell. she quickly took her medical kit out and give him some first aid on his wound.

She is impressed that boy can talk normally with him with his condition. if she did not see it then she might not know about it.

After that, she took him to his sleeping bag for him to sleep.

"He is heavy".her sleeping bag size is big as she previously shared with her little sister when she traveled with her. so both of them can sleep inside as she does not want either of them to sleep on the ground. plus he is a kid the same age as her little sister.

She also falls asleep in a quiet forest, looking at the starry night.

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author -

Well, everyone thanks for your support!

sorry for not updating for so long as it is hard for me to write and give time to the story.

but I will try to write and update this fanfic continuously.

So please Stick together with me.

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anyway, who is she? any guess?

what is the change I made to the world any idea or guess?

if you want to make any change or request me some change in the world of pokemon that would help the story or should be cool to do then comment to me.

change is not a must and the start of the story would be like cannon.

can you help me remember some good characters from anime, manga, or games that I can introduce in the story here and mix up? do remember the character should be in Sinnoh. the current timeline is 2 years before the canon.


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"... sorry man for being late."

章 6: Chap 6: God's Gift

"Hello there, I am your friendly neighborhood ROB, and right now I am talking to a rather interesting soul you can say."

{ [A/N - ""] is used to represent the author and readers' general thoughts to understand. It will help understand this ROB/God actions later on. because understanding god is not easy.

}

[A/N - '..., how can he break the fourth wall easily '

"Uhh, hello readers as you can see we are in a moment where MC is talking ROB."]

"Yes, you can call me god too, nyah!"

['did I see so much cat god meme that he looks like a cat']

"For those who can not remember or did not know that I can change my form to look and normally took the form of god or being that looking at me. Nya, by the way, this form is full of arrogance, laziness, and perfection. mwya~, I will stay in this form for now. nwya~"

['no, you look cute. Thank god this is just a dream !']

So next, Looking at a soul in front of me. I asked,

' Ok, from your behavior you want to those fictional, right? it just happens that there are some of those words, I am in charge of right now, here see this! '.

I sent him a screen window to choose the world.

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1. Beyblade

2. The Seven Deadly Sins

3. Yu-Gi-Oh

4. Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba

5. Dragon Ball

6. Pokemon

7. Tokyo Ghoul

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While soul-Kun is deciding on which world he should go to. I just make preparation for his transition to the pokemon world.

how can I know his choice? Well because I am God. looking at his future is not big deal. Nwyaha nwaha~

[A/N - 'cute~'

"Uh, you know that Cats can't physically laugh, right? And I also know his choice, after all this is pokemon fanfic "

]

" Don't go sweat over the detail, after all, I am the god,nwah~, come with me, let make a change according to detail"

[A/N - "you sure are fire up, huh."]

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Celestic Town, the Sinnoh region.

It is a tiny town that preserves the history of Sinnoh and the old ways of life. The center of town has a small shrine that dates back to ancient times. this district or neighborhood has a significant number of preserved buildings from a bygone era.

around this, human settlement continues to increase as the town will also grow. On the north side of this has the second most old district where many houses and different shops are located.

Above One house in this area, someone appears out of thin air. Instead of falling down, it flote here without any worry and look down on a house.

The style of this traditional house is similar to Minka. It is characterized by a basic internal wooden structure and a high, slanted roof with Chimney.

The Minka roof is steeply peaked on purpose, with the extreme slant allowing rain and snow to fall straight off, preventing water from getting into the house and stopping pooling water and rot.

[A/N - "so where are we? "]

"Caroline family house in Celestic Town. around 50 years in the past before that soul will be transmigrated.nyah~"

[A/N - "why are we here?"]

"What else, We are here to fulfill his wish. Nyaha ha~" the floating cat said while laughing. Then out of nowhere, a bottle of liquor appears. it has a red gift ribbon for decoration.

[A/N - "what are you going to do with it ?"]

"Today is Christmas and they are such a good family. so as a generous god I am going to gift them this which will increase their happiness. they should be happy. Nyah~"

[A/N - "what are you planning ?" 'he is becoming more arrogant in this form.' ]

"For to give this gift to them without suspicion. I will do this. nyah," again one penguin appears that looked like Santa.

Delibird is a red, bird pokemon with a white, hollow tail. Its face and chest are covered in white feathers with two, three-pointed crests above its eyes. Black markings surround its circular eyes, and it has a light yellow beak and feet. There is a single white spot on its stomach. Its feet have two digits each.

"go deliver this gift. you birdie or I will eat you.nya~ ", the cat ordered while showing his teeth.

Delibird shivered as he took the liquor bottle and left.

[A/N - "..."

"That was just an illusion. You know you can't eat it. right"

]

"I am just having some fun, now let's change the scene.nyah~"

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Inside caroline's household, as today is Christmas night they were celebrating with family and friends. for the Christmas party, a big feast is prepared. Everyone is laughing and eating together.

After the party ended. every guest left after saying their farewell.

Mr.caroline and Mrs.caroline with their daughter cath also walked out as guests and said goodbye.

"Cath dear, go to bed, it's already late", Mr.caroline said to her 8 years daughter.

"But I want to see Santa, daddy~", half sleepy she argues.

"No, dear. If don't go to bed early like a good kid then Santa won't give you a gift."Mrs.Caroline said to her daughter.

"Hmm, I will go"

"Let me help you," then she pulled her into her arm and carry her to bed.

When his wife go up to the floor, suddenly a bell rang so he opened door to see who is there at this time.

When he opened the door, he saw the pokemon standing there with a gift in hand, which is likely for them.

"What good delibird, thank you for delivering this. Wait here if you want to eat some .." before he can say anything, delibird left the place after handing things in his hand.

"dee-leebird~"

"Bye, ha... He sure is in rush," he did know as a pokemon doctor, he also uses a fast delivery service as sometimes he needs medicine and potions as soon as possible. in the snowy season, delibird is one of the best pokemon for help.

"Who would send a liquor bottle as a gift in fast delivery ?"

"Dear, who was at door this late ?" Mrs. Caroline asked after coming into the hall.

"Someone just sent me a gift. here is a tag on it saying 'thank you doctor caroline for saving my partner. here please enjoy this drink.' so do you want to drink with me? " asked the doctor.

"No, I still have some cleaning to do." Mrs. Caroline refuses as go to the kitchen.

"Okay, let me help you today and then drink this together."dr. caroline followed her and asked, "did cath fall asleep? I need to put her gift in her room. Do you think she will like it ?"

"Yes, she will love it", Mrs.caroline said while working. As both worked together while talking about random things.

Soon both finished cleaning and set on the sofa. Mr.caroline opened the bottle and poured it into two glasses. Then he gives it to her. both raised their glass.

"Uh... I am really grateful to share another wonderful Christmas with you.", he said embarrassingly as both cheered for this wonderful Christmas night.

"Cheershhh!!" X 2

"Hmm, this drink is good. make me happy just as looking at your expression while you confess to me."

Hearing her wife's word, the doctor just purred more drink for both and drank it.

"It's not the confession, I am just expressing my gratitude~ huh"

To his refusal, she said with a smile, "you don't need to be embarrassed about it, so it was not a confession, huh, maybe I am old and you don't love me~"

"NOO!! I ..", he wanted to say that he love her but looking at her wife's smiling expression, he knew he got played and her wife is teasing her. what more terrifying is it just starting?

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Outside the house,

"dame, the First round goes to Mrs.caroline, Nyha~," a flying cat said Asif hosting a pokemon battle.

[A/N- "it's not even a fight, do you mix anything in a bottle or what ?"]

"What are questioning me for? It just gives them some energy and become truthful to each other. I am better than you to give them a Christmas present. Not like you? nyah"

[A/N- "I think I know where this is going because of you. let's get out of here and give them privacy. And for a gift from me, well they will have the best privacy. their detail will not be mentioned anywhere. "]

"Bye~, see you in the next chapter. Nyah~". And it becomes quiet outside as if nothing happened.

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Inside house,

A particular lady is not holding back and attacking her husband whose head is down in embarrassment. if any teasing master shows this then she would also like to try some trick on her husband.

Normally Mrs.caroline would hold back when she teased her husband but today she just wants to assess her dominance over him. in return his said husband is trying to fight back but he could not.

He normally thought that in their teasing game, both were at the same level. but today he learned the truth. First, he did not believe. but it really depressed him.

But over a fight, he also started to like her wife's ruthless teasing. as the bottle become empty. both were drunk.

"Let's go to the bedroom," he said to gate away from this teasing.

"Huh, but I don't want to sleep." her lust can't contain now. form early teasing, most of her skin is exposed.

"First to the bedroom, otherwise cath will wake up," he said to her as the last of his will.

"What are you going to do in there ?" as both are supporting each other, the pair staggered inside the bedroom. outside the bedroom, he did not talk on the way.

Seeing him quiet, she teased him more, "are you going to attack me? wow, I can't wait for it ~".

As both inside the bedroom. He closed the door. And stopped her talking by putting his leaps on her. she didn't stop him but helped him by kissing him back. Both of her hands were roaming on each other bodies.

"Uh.. haha~ dear I want to give little brother to cath. Please I can't wait."

*ba-dump* *ba-dump* *ba-dump*

He stopped after hearing this and stopped the foreplay and start the main part right away.

"Uhh .. uhggh.. Uhhmmm~"

For the whole night, loud moans, the sound of flesh slapping, and crazy cries of lust and love echoed inside the house. Both where lost their mind so much in lust that they stopped caring about sound and forget about their daughter cath upstairs.

If not for someone's gift to give them privacy, the whole neighborhood would have known their doing. but they did not disturb anyone and their daughter also got to sleep soundly.

But the specific doctor did forget about something very important.

"Eahhh !, mom… Dad, wahh~", the sound of cries of their 8-year daughter comes from upstairs in next morning.

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author -

Well, everyone thanks for your support!

do you like that kind of fourth wall breaking or not?

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The flying cat appears again.

"for my hard work and magnificent appearance worship me, nyah~"

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what is the change I made to the world any idea or guess?

if you want to make any change or request me some change in the world of pokemon that would help the story or should be cool to do then comment to me.

change is not a must and the start of the story would be like cannon.

can you help me remember some good characters from anime, manga, or games that I can introduce in the story here and mix up? do remember the character should be in Sinnoh. the current timeline is 2 years before the canon.


クリエイターの想い
Sun_And_Soul Sun_And_Soul

last night I had a dream of a cat. and this chapter appears here.

someone commented to me about what should I do.

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