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To be honest, when I saw "gradually lessen and evolved into romance", I assumed that "gradually" would take a little more than a couple of chapters... And I hoped this novel would be mode dark themed. But other than that, it's not bad so far.
What a good story, the writing, the characters, I always look forward to the chapters ............... .................... ............................ .................................... .......................................... ................................................. .......................................................... ................................................................
The book so far is excellent and I am really enjoying it! Unfortunately this kind of book doesn't get the recognition it wants, since it doesn't have System, Game elements, as well as the protagonists being women. I recommend you try going to Royal Road, and leave a note that your story is not 100% gendered, so they don't think wrong.
this book has been pretty good I've all most read the entire book I like three days or the chapters that is available please keep it up I'm actually enjoying the book your doing amazing
Okay I’ll be real, when I first picked up this book I didn’t know what to expect, BUT I was totally blown away. Writing Quality - the WQ on this ab is super spotty, but this novel has limited grammatical errors and it’s flow and pacing sare smooth and flow really well 5/5 Updating - it’s not everyday, but expect a few chapters a week na/5 Story - the plot does progress quickly, no useless fluff. However, it does feel too quick. 5/5 Character - all characters are unique and have their own purposes and motivations. Even the ‘antagonist’ was given a reason and to why they are they way they are 5/5 World - high fantasy setting, with a unique and styized world. The world building is a little slow, and matches the plot. It’s fantasy but I would not say generic. 5/5 Overall awesome start to the novel - I look forward to reading more!! And if you haven’t yet, give it a try. Chap 1 might has some graphic tones, but it gets better.
I'm giving this 5 stars for right now because I just picked it up and I like the premise so far so I'm going to read all the available chapters is like 14 of them right now and to another review after I've read all those chapters it might take me a day or two to do that but for the author write something like this I really like it because it changes things
When I first stumbled into this book I was so amazed, so hooked. This book kept me interested and help me since im having a terrible cold. The characters so relatable and the plot is fascinating! I can't wait for more!
To be honest, when I saw "gradually lessen and evolved into romance", I assumed that "gradually" would take a little more than a couple of chapters... And I hoped this novel would be mode dark themed. But other than that, it's not bad so far.
What a good story, the writing, the characters, I always look forward to the chapters ............... .................... ............................ .................................... .......................................... ................................................. .......................................................... ................................................................
The book so far is excellent and I am really enjoying it! Unfortunately this kind of book doesn't get the recognition it wants, since it doesn't have System, Game elements, as well as the protagonists being women. I recommend you try going to Royal Road, and leave a note that your story is not 100% gendered, so they don't think wrong.
this book has been pretty good I've all most read the entire book I like three days or the chapters that is available please keep it up I'm actually enjoying the book your doing amazing
Okay I’ll be real, when I first picked up this book I didn’t know what to expect, BUT I was totally blown away. Writing Quality - the WQ on this ab is super spotty, but this novel has limited grammatical errors and it’s flow and pacing sare smooth and flow really well 5/5 Updating - it’s not everyday, but expect a few chapters a week na/5 Story - the plot does progress quickly, no useless fluff. However, it does feel too quick. 5/5 Character - all characters are unique and have their own purposes and motivations. Even the ‘antagonist’ was given a reason and to why they are they way they are 5/5 World - high fantasy setting, with a unique and styized world. The world building is a little slow, and matches the plot. It’s fantasy but I would not say generic. 5/5 Overall awesome start to the novel - I look forward to reading more!! And if you haven’t yet, give it a try. Chap 1 might has some graphic tones, but it gets better.
I'm giving this 5 stars for right now because I just picked it up and I like the premise so far so I'm going to read all the available chapters is like 14 of them right now and to another review after I've read all those chapters it might take me a day or two to do that but for the author write something like this I really like it because it changes things
When I first stumbled into this book I was so amazed, so hooked. This book kept me interested and help me since im having a terrible cold. The characters so relatable and the plot is fascinating! I can't wait for more!