Hot Romance With The Vampire

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RomanceFanatic028

I only read few chapters, but i am really invested in the storyline. All the characters are awesome and the world building is awesome. So good job author. i hope you keep writing.

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Nightsummer20

A pretty unique plot that I have come across recently. The author's doing a great job in putting the story into words. The pace of the story is just according to my taste and I'm looking forward to seeing what more this story has in store. Good luck, author!

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Loctovia

It deserves all 5 points!!! Simply amazing. The author really has a way with words and the story pulls you in from the very start. I'm totally with this story till the end. Good job author!!!

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Pixiepiu

Very interesting read and not a gory book. The way the vamp emerged was interesting. Everything is perfect. However, you need to do a little editing on tenses and verbs. I am sure your story will be very good in the coming days. keep up. Best wishes

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thefirespeaks

The story has such an appeal from it, that it would make you read more. I've read through it from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3. It's interesting, having female lead meet a vampire waking up from its hibernation. With the story description per se, it really piqued. Apart from the grammatical issues such as but not limited improper punctuation marks or verb tenses. Nonetheless, I'm looking forward to more!

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Ankita_Agrawal_6103

beautiful story so far...so mant twist....n how beautifully author has compiled everything❣❣❣waiting for more n more chapters n twist🙂🙂all the best dear author...i always admire ur writing skills👌👌👌

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Troublemak3r

Enjoyed it. Lots of suspense but we’ll done!👌

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Kessy1

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Ankita_Agrawal_6103

this book was superb...i always admire...author's writing skill...she is very talented....all the best...my dear author...keep it up...n waiting for more n more books from ur side

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Gaburieru

Very impressed with the authors captivating choice of words. Well done. An amazing story with an even more amazing author! Congrats on an amazing story!

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Jgewriter

I have read up to Chapter 6, and I've found the experience to be quite enjoyable. The novel knows how to put in dialogue that is well put together. My only minor criticism was the lack of exposition in chapter 1-3 (I think...). However, even then you knew when to add detail and when to leave some out. I trust that you that my criticism will be invalid as you gain more experience. I'm confident in your ability to properly use Cliffhangers too! The cliffhanger at chapter 5 made me swipe down as fast I could, if it wasn't for the fact that chapter 6 was already published I would have felt impatient to read more. (Not saying I'm not interested to read more) In conclusion, Your writing quality is superb with minor if not no flaws, even with your frequent publishing schedule. The story has tugged me along nicely, making me excited for future publishes. Character design was solid, nothing to really nitpick about it. IMO you have great potential with your novel. I'm definitely putting this Novel on my Library.

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AMonarch

I am usually very kind when it comes to reviews because I try to point out the pros in every novel so that it can give authors motivation to keep going but for this novel, it wouldn't matter if I was kind since if I was ratting it sincerely, I would give it a 5/5. Although I don't know if the world background is deserving of a 5/5, the writing quality more than makes up for that which is why I would still give this novel a 5 star rating.

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McCrunch

Nothing much to say. Bravo to the author. although I would say some parts were a little boring, but that's just me as this usually isn't the type of genre I read. regardless of my nitpicking, loved it. I'm actually rooting for mr vampire.

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WorthyAdversary

Pretty good novel so far. The writing quality is not as bad as most on the website, but isn't exceptional either. The story is pretty good so far, makes me want more chapters. The characters are pretty generic, waiting for if the characters will have some peculiarities to them or not. Overall, good book.

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Aeirana

Notes to self: when finding a strange ring in the basement that whispers things to you. PUT IT ON because you may summon a hot vampire XD In all seriousness though, I like the pacing so far. The writing is good, a lot of descriptions though some can be a little long. Her motives at the beginning are clear and I think the character work is well done. This has a lot of potential! Great job!

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Enchanted_HPS

I read a few chapters and I'm hooked. what a great story line. Super excited to read more! great job author. Your writing is fantastic! I was hooked at the first couple paragraphs!!

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MayDreamer

Amazing storyline! The book started with a clear understanding of the situation the female lead is on and the way the ML was introduced was very smooth. Vampire romance is my cup of tea so I really enjoyed reading this one. Good work author!!

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mswordsworth

One thing I always look for when reading a novel is how the author utilizes imagery. Imagery is very important because it gives the readers a visualization about the story. As for this novel, I highly commend the author for incorporating imagery into her work. Not only that, her choice of words is wonderful and follows basic grammatical rules. I can't waitt to read more of this novel. Good job, author!

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WinterTimeCrime

Interesting premise and the characters are introduced in a coat of myster and intrigue. The vampire seems willingly to take their relationship in stead but the female protag may resist!~ Super exciting!

awesome story 🔥❤️ never wanted to put it down ❤️