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Can someone give me a spoiler of what happened that looked like NTR or which chapter this happens ----------------------------------------------------------
***POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT**so this book can be very entertaining but it's also very aggravating just be prepared The guy Is lied to and controlled by everyone throughout the book he doesnt cuck that many people in fact the title is mostly just a lie all the best and most anticipated dirty scenes are always cut and usually only shows the small ones most of which are shortened and rushed and the guy is a victim of everybody knows what's better for him than he does. all sorts of bad things happen too him and come to find out alot of the people closest to him knew it was all gonna happen all along time ago and pretty much planned it for his own good (if I had advice for the author it would be to lay off the everyone knows what's best for him routine alittle and make sure to really nail the most important love scenes)
on chapter 22 so far I am loving it might change opinion in the future , i find his system character unique , i recommend giving it a chance
So many things being hidden from the mc for idiotic reasons that could be talked about in a calm conversation, the author always forces the plot about the protagonist's women cheating on him, even though they aren't, it starts to get very annoying and unnecessary. Anyway, the story is very average and has some inconsistencies.
sorry I'm going to have to drop this for awhile it's a great story but to many screats form everyone form the mc I'm find that annoying
you are one of the best novel I love the novel symbiotic system please upload it...it would be better if you upload more chapters
Only on chapter 84 so far but if you’re a degenerate you’ll like this. The story is interesting and fun with alot of lemons. The writing quality is good imo and if there are mistakes they’re minor. Overall like I said you’ll enjoy it.😂✌️
It's a great Novel and the character development is stable and explained And must read for all man of culture
If your are looking for a mouth-watering meal then your at the right place. Go ahead and read fufuu😉
First Impression Review : I only read 10 chapters, I know. but... Although the world development and other staff are good, there are some incoherency with character's characteristics, like, some minutes ago Misty thinks of MC as a kid, but the next moment out of nowhere she starts feeling lovey-dovey towards MC like a lover. And this is the reason that made me lose my interest in this novel. I think, at least for Starting, "Bad Luck System" was better than this novel, although that novel was not perfect, i wanted more chapters of that novel.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
The author does not do justice to the title. MC has only cucked his friend's dad.
I am the bone of my sword Exp is my body and Exp is my blood I have created over a thousand Exp Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood pain to create many Exp Yet, those hands will never hold Exp So as I pray, Unlimited EXP Works.
I really love this novel I can't more chapters update and I can't wait to see the mc became stronger and I also like the mc and the system arguing
Hehe... hey Author and Others! Go read NTR crush you'll definitely like it. It will make your day fantastic, and exciting; and maybe, just maybe you can take a material or two and add it into your novel so that others can feel the true meaning of despa—*ahem* Vanilla, yup vanilla. Haha...😅😅😅
i just finished reading your novel "Reincarnated with bad luck system" and I liked it. I am dropping my review even before reading it because I trust you.
I'm really enjoying the new story found a few errors but not enough to complain about, the only concern I have is that I'm worried you'll neglect your other stories
For all the fellow cultured men out there, I strongly recommend this book! What can I say... It’s awesome from the very beginning. I expect some good stuff from this novel!
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While this novel is currently in it's beginning stages as I write this review, I only have one word I can use to describe it. Superb! The storyline is a great mix of what we know of in usual dungeon novels alongside new and fresh ideas concerning coexistence between humans and other races. The POV is also very interesting and refreshing to read. I can already see the cu*khold waiting to happen. Aurora is already my fav, though MC sis is a close second due to the... milk... hehe I'm sure there'll be good lemon with MC's girlfriend too. I can't wait! In any case, I look forward to this novel. Well done, author!
Hi, Author here... I'm writing an honest review here. This is my third work, and to be honest, I wrote this novel as just a fun and relaxing debauched vampire novel because of my liking for MVS. There's nothing much to expect from it for the plot maniacs. It's written in the first person pov, so it might be a little weird when reading it. furthermore, the plot progression is super sluggish (remember, I wrote it for fun.) And lastly, I can guarantee you good mid-tier grammar that won't make your brain steam.
Can someone give me a spoiler of what happened that looked like NTR or which chapter this happens ----------------------------------------------------------
***POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT**so this book can be very entertaining but it's also very aggravating just be prepared The guy Is lied to and controlled by everyone throughout the book he doesnt cuck that many people in fact the title is mostly just a lie all the best and most anticipated dirty scenes are always cut and usually only shows the small ones most of which are shortened and rushed and the guy is a victim of everybody knows what's better for him than he does. all sorts of bad things happen too him and come to find out alot of the people closest to him knew it was all gonna happen all along time ago and pretty much planned it for his own good (if I had advice for the author it would be to lay off the everyone knows what's best for him routine alittle and make sure to really nail the most important love scenes)
on chapter 22 so far I am loving it might change opinion in the future , i find his system character unique , i recommend giving it a chance
So many things being hidden from the mc for idiotic reasons that could be talked about in a calm conversation, the author always forces the plot about the protagonist's women cheating on him, even though they aren't, it starts to get very annoying and unnecessary. Anyway, the story is very average and has some inconsistencies.
sorry I'm going to have to drop this for awhile it's a great story but to many screats form everyone form the mc I'm find that annoying
you are one of the best novel I love the novel symbiotic system please upload it...it would be better if you upload more chapters
Only on chapter 84 so far but if you’re a degenerate you’ll like this. The story is interesting and fun with alot of lemons. The writing quality is good imo and if there are mistakes they’re minor. Overall like I said you’ll enjoy it.😂✌️
It's a great Novel and the character development is stable and explained And must read for all man of culture
If your are looking for a mouth-watering meal then your at the right place. Go ahead and read fufuu😉
First Impression Review : I only read 10 chapters, I know. but... Although the world development and other staff are good, there are some incoherency with character's characteristics, like, some minutes ago Misty thinks of MC as a kid, but the next moment out of nowhere she starts feeling lovey-dovey towards MC like a lover. And this is the reason that made me lose my interest in this novel. I think, at least for Starting, "Bad Luck System" was better than this novel, although that novel was not perfect, i wanted more chapters of that novel.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
The author does not do justice to the title. MC has only cucked his friend's dad.
I am the bone of my sword Exp is my body and Exp is my blood I have created over a thousand Exp Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood pain to create many Exp Yet, those hands will never hold Exp So as I pray, Unlimited EXP Works.
I really love this novel I can't more chapters update and I can't wait to see the mc became stronger and I also like the mc and the system arguing
Hehe... hey Author and Others! Go read NTR crush you'll definitely like it. It will make your day fantastic, and exciting; and maybe, just maybe you can take a material or two and add it into your novel so that others can feel the true meaning of despa—*ahem* Vanilla, yup vanilla. Haha...😅😅😅
i just finished reading your novel "Reincarnated with bad luck system" and I liked it. I am dropping my review even before reading it because I trust you.
I'm really enjoying the new story found a few errors but not enough to complain about, the only concern I have is that I'm worried you'll neglect your other stories
For all the fellow cultured men out there, I strongly recommend this book! What can I say... It’s awesome from the very beginning. I expect some good stuff from this novel!
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update !!¡¡!!!¡!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
While this novel is currently in it's beginning stages as I write this review, I only have one word I can use to describe it. Superb! The storyline is a great mix of what we know of in usual dungeon novels alongside new and fresh ideas concerning coexistence between humans and other races. The POV is also very interesting and refreshing to read. I can already see the cu*khold waiting to happen. Aurora is already my fav, though MC sis is a close second due to the... milk... hehe I'm sure there'll be good lemon with MC's girlfriend too. I can't wait! In any case, I look forward to this novel. Well done, author!
Hi, Author here... I'm writing an honest review here. This is my third work, and to be honest, I wrote this novel as just a fun and relaxing debauched vampire novel because of my liking for MVS. There's nothing much to expect from it for the plot maniacs. It's written in the first person pov, so it might be a little weird when reading it. furthermore, the plot progression is super sluggish (remember, I wrote it for fun.) And lastly, I can guarantee you good mid-tier grammar that won't make your brain steam.