Vampire System- The Last Mystic Swordsman

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GREAT

Ok, here I am, with my 4th book down the line. It's shameless, but If I don't give my book 5 stars who will? I'm writing this review after 9 chapters uploaded. Ok, this book is unlike the ones I've written previously. I can confidently beat my chest and say that this is my best book by far, and I guess that means a lot. First, the mc is likeable but he's not the one who has everything placed before him at a silver platter, he is a genius who works hard. In my opinion, the world background and power system is meticulous and fairly simple, I'll pat myself for that. Yes, I think I did a good job. For the characters, I'll try my best to make them as fleshed out and realistic as possible. The story is interesting, mc doesn't become a vampire immediately because I want to properly introduce and build the world and power system first. Overall, I think I did a fairly good job. I can't wait to see you read it to see your opinion, and I believe you won't regret reading it too. I'm open to constructive criticism.

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Nilo_A

Great! So far the book is great! Pretty nice concept, and the building up in chapter one and two was nice. The grammar and writing quality is great, the MC seems dynamic and understandable. Overall, it's earned its five stars from me![img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 12

GREAT

Hey guys, I decided to write another review. Well, the book didn't live up to expectations like I expected in it's first 3 months. I'm at fault for that, I dragged the system reveal for far too long and for that I'm sorry. Ok, here's the proper review Writing Quality: It's not perfect but I tried my best to make it as smooth as possible Story Development: I think I at least did above average in this aspect, I paid a lot of attention to the story, storyline, and power ranking before starting it. Character Design: Not perfect but I tried to make each character as unique as possible. Updating Stability: Pretty stable, as of now, 16 chapters per week. World Background: I tried my best to make it not too complicated while still trying hard to restrain myself from hitting. Well, that's my review. No matter what though, deciding to read this book is your choice, I hope you do though and as for my readers, thanks for reading.

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Jasper_Deason

First time doing a review but I gotta say this book is very interesting. Loved the world building so far and I'm already shipping the MC with the female childhood friend. All and all what I wanted to say is keep it up!~

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Glezeri

Right of the bat we start off with a tournament that took 40+ chapters, skipp...............................................................

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kumar_vishwas

The novel lacks the plot/story. it's not appealing at all even though I have read 70 chapters. the author clearly wants to make it interesting but when the overall story lacks it can't be helped. no wonder even after almost 200 chapters this novel is 300k views. just very very average and boring novel. author don't feel bad and delete the review cuz it's the truth. I hope I'm the future you can write some interesting novels if you can overcome your current capabilities.

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TPrime

Nice read so far. The writing quality is good, the world background and power system seems pretty solid also, the only shortcoming I think is the problem of the system reveal. I'm gonna believe the author though, I believe that the reveal will be epic, I recommend this guys. Also, please don't drop the book author.

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Jayden222

it's a nice story I must commend,the writing and character development is superb🥰🥰. A nice story that would be loved by everyone,keep up the good work author💚.

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Twilight_Lord

Hey Author! The story was excellent, a MC who was tired of life getting a hope to survive in the cruel world! The grammar was good too, there isn't anything much except that I personally felt the World background explanation was a bit lacking. Well I don't know for sure since you may have plan to explain it in future chapters. anyway It was a good read, I will come back when the novel would have more chapters.

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Carbon_6597

The 50 free chapters have no plot development with it ending like the mc is behind where he started. the book is super super heavily focused on describing fight scenes in way to much depth way to often. the free chapters give no incentive to buy chapters as there feels like there is not plot to push forwards. good idea just way to little development

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Hassasen1

You've joined my #Top 3 author group. The story is developed better than I can comprehend

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Dumb_Desert_Goat

Author I only have one question, and that is if the MC will have a romantic interest or not? 😬

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Devst

Sadly I am but a broke child so I couldn't afford to go beyond chapater 56 however I still believe this was 100% worth the read! I'm not going to try to be technical since I know nothing about writing, I highly reccomend this novel

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shawn_nebar

Nice book, it's not perfect but enjoyable. Most of the characters are well written and fleshed out, the system is kinda cliche after the reveal but it's expected. Overall, it's a nice read to while away time.

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