DC: God of Momentum

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DaoistH7599X

İ don't find reading about a chubby, clumsy man drown in his miserible life and a subtle hero complex enjoyable, sorry and knowing the fact that things wil somehow work out for him in the end despite his lack of intelligence and wisdom as someone with a high importance in the world of gods is frustrating, so no i don't want to read his pathetic life somehow being elevated.

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GOD_OF_PATO

he keep saying that barry doesn't use the speed force at full potential but himself doesn't use it at full potential, he keeps training to overcome mental barriers that shouldn't even exist because he already knows how much power he can have, the power has always been the same, the only thing that limits him is the user's will

LV 14

AS9

Mediocre... The MC is really unlikable which is pretty huge since the MC can pretty much make or break a SI fic... He's kind of a weeb who saw some edgy anime for the first time and decided to mold his whole persona after the protagonist... The writing quality is better than 99% of garbage on this site but that's not that much of a compliment... Overall it's 3/5 with potential to be better...

LV 4

Retro_Plaid

Really like the story. I hope you don’t drop it like other DC stories. It shows how different a human being could really get with powers if they didn’t have the same hero morals as flags or Superman. Hope you continue this story.

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maxphantom

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MajimaMunancho24

ngl I love this take on the story and he does have a point throughout the flash tv series he could of taken out so many of them if he didn't keep stopping to have a chat instead of taking the opportunity to shut them down

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FadeKnight

A dense story. Can be a little cringe. But a real read. I already notice the cringe going away. So I am giving five stars for a hopeful story.

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Daooflaziness

One of the first decent DC fanfics I can read without dropping almost instantly. Keep doing what you're doing and please don't drop. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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ANANTA

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero. A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Arts( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne can't imagine. Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.

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ToasterBath

10/10 .

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God_of_hentai

is there romance.

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Eid_zack

hope you continue writing this, it's a great one ....,......................................................................mmmm.....mmmmmnmnnm........

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pervy_sloth

one of the best fanfics I've ever read would highly recommend reading 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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ProdigyOrion

So far so good, no real complaints or critiques, my only gripe is the fact that theres not more chapters but what can you do. I hope the author keeps at it and doesn't drop it. It would be a real let-down.

LV 5

Archonstine

This is frankly amazing. A flash fic which actually which actually focuses on character development and not just nerfing the mc before making him op is a breath of fresh air. The conversations flow naturally and do not seem to be forced at all. The technical stuff of the speed force is amazing. It's basically an info dump but at the same time not boring, which is a fine line to tread on. All in all, great job author.

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Majin_Vibez

ok wow I don't get how you aren't writing more man so many fans others have less and write more. the fic is delicious love the mcs way of thinking and his moral compass. hope to see more of it this has potential don't drop it.

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GustPigey

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Z3RG102077

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Hyper_FromDK

I love this story the overall character is funny and the feelings and understanding that you took to make up the speed force in this, I can say I wouldn't have been able to this. take ya time to make it so you feel good about it and dont listen to nonsense comments about your it's your work, and I would like to see you take this to the limit. ps. show them the and the world the true limit of speed.

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Daoist474206

A really good story, completely without the usual antics of the DC verse. I liked how it really destroyed the "talking is a free thing" and "Victimless Holocaust" tropes. Keep it up (or get even better).