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You got me hooked up again with another novel my gawd😩 Honestly the beginning was quite cool and though I am a bit remaining on the end chapters, I can say I am totally into this plot. Your writing approach is def admirable. Imma surely ask a few of my friends to check this novel as well😭🖐
What's good that reading this novel?? I love harem the most, good plotline, it's really well executed and understandable, recommend it it's worth the time, hope to see more chapters
GREAT writing. This is worth a go! I hope you continue. chapter22 is what we need rn. But i would suggest improving your cover. Whatever, you think is good. Its still up to you. FIGHTING
What's better than a harem story? A succubus harem story! What's better than a succubus harem story? A succubus harem story with good grammar and easy-to-read writing! As you may have guessed, this story gives you all of it! Plus it's in a First-person writing style! I'm still in the early chapters so I don't know about the world much yet but I can see the author is foreshadowing a reincarnation. (What's better than a succubus harem story you asked? A succubus harem story with reincarnation!) The main character, although I had only read the first few chapters yet, was easy to connect with. The pace is good and by extension, development is good too, now let's see where this story goes. Keep it up Author Sama! 💪
Dang I thought it was an ecchi story but as I continue to read the first chapter it's was a story about saving the world I never thought I'd get surprised this much the writing quality is great world design I'll leave this for now I haven't read much of the story updating is stable story development is great never thought it was going to be a story that wasn't focused on ecchi
This book is a really good read! I love the premise, and the writing style! The grammar is quite good, the story is engaging and the characters are believable! This book just hooks you on before you even realize it!
A fantasy novel, fun to read, and fresh for everyone. The premise is spicy. The pacing is good, not rushed, not delayed, just smooth enough to seduce me to read more chapters. I recommend this novel to all readers who want something spicy to read.
This is a good novel, it could use a little editing here and there, other than that, a great story with good characters and the plot of the story is solid too, I look forward to more chapters from the author, keep up the good work and good luck.
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the author did great job in the first chaps, she clearly have an idea and she wants to make something big out of it , the writing style is good and the plot is spicy, the story is a page turner and i think it is going to be one of those big sories
You got me hooked up again with another novel my gawd😩 Honestly the beginning was quite cool and though I am a bit remaining on the end chapters, I can say I am totally into this plot. Your writing approach is def admirable. Imma surely ask a few of my friends to check this novel as well😭🖐
What's good that reading this novel?? I love harem the most, good plotline, it's really well executed and understandable, recommend it it's worth the time, hope to see more chapters
GREAT writing. This is worth a go! I hope you continue. chapter22 is what we need rn. But i would suggest improving your cover. Whatever, you think is good. Its still up to you. FIGHTING
What's better than a harem story? A succubus harem story! What's better than a succubus harem story? A succubus harem story with good grammar and easy-to-read writing! As you may have guessed, this story gives you all of it! Plus it's in a First-person writing style! I'm still in the early chapters so I don't know about the world much yet but I can see the author is foreshadowing a reincarnation. (What's better than a succubus harem story you asked? A succubus harem story with reincarnation!) The main character, although I had only read the first few chapters yet, was easy to connect with. The pace is good and by extension, development is good too, now let's see where this story goes. Keep it up Author Sama! 💪
Dang I thought it was an ecchi story but as I continue to read the first chapter it's was a story about saving the world I never thought I'd get surprised this much the writing quality is great world design I'll leave this for now I haven't read much of the story updating is stable story development is great never thought it was going to be a story that wasn't focused on ecchi
This book is a really good read! I love the premise, and the writing style! The grammar is quite good, the story is engaging and the characters are believable! This book just hooks you on before you even realize it!
A fantasy novel, fun to read, and fresh for everyone. The premise is spicy. The pacing is good, not rushed, not delayed, just smooth enough to seduce me to read more chapters. I recommend this novel to all readers who want something spicy to read.
This is a good novel, it could use a little editing here and there, other than that, a great story with good characters and the plot of the story is solid too, I look forward to more chapters from the author, keep up the good work and good luck.
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the author did great job in the first chaps, she clearly have an idea and she wants to make something big out of it , the writing style is good and the plot is spicy, the story is a page turner and i think it is going to be one of those big sories