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Grammar is very bad Character is useless Some of the characters name is very bad
at this point I don't know where to even begin. Please fix the grammar. its hard to read I'm even confused what's the oc's real name is. I regret reading this fanfic/novel. hurts my brain, it feels like I'm reading a math textbook since you'll have to decipher every sentence so you can get what the characters is talking about. I don't really care if the author is not particularly good at English since I'm not good at it too but atleast make it readable and pleasing to the eyes and brains of the readers
Great Fan-fic Could you send the raw link It could have been better with a more accurate grammer and naming the characters according to their original names
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ive read easier to read mlt but it is not the worst....the storys alright.....just cant understand most of whats being said do to bad translation
trash novel it's like arrogant Chinese moron in novels also his head is filled with delusional things couldn't even bother to read hopefully you stop this trash story
bad grammar. if you don't mind mtl you'll be fine. if you have any standards, you'll quit after the first few paragraphs. other aspects of the sory are irrelevant if i can't stand reading it.
i write 5★ everywhere but grammars because it was a bit hard to read but please continue while also reading again and correct your mistakes please
Noticed the story only had 9 reviews so here you go. This Story is 100% MTL. Do not read unless you are at least at the Ancestor level of the Dao of the MTL. The story itself is not bad and has some original parts, but attempting to read without an advanced mastery in MTL will cause yours eyes to bleed, your organs to rupture, and your spleen to come alive, escape your body, and take out three credit cards in your name.
Grammar is very bad Character is useless Some of the characters name is very bad
at this point I don't know where to even begin. Please fix the grammar. its hard to read I'm even confused what's the oc's real name is. I regret reading this fanfic/novel. hurts my brain, it feels like I'm reading a math textbook since you'll have to decipher every sentence so you can get what the characters is talking about. I don't really care if the author is not particularly good at English since I'm not good at it too but atleast make it readable and pleasing to the eyes and brains of the readers
Great Fan-fic Could you send the raw link It could have been better with a more accurate grammer and naming the characters according to their original names
Correct the grammar and learn pronouns 😭[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
ive read easier to read mlt but it is not the worst....the storys alright.....just cant understand most of whats being said do to bad translation
trash novel it's like arrogant Chinese moron in novels also his head is filled with delusional things couldn't even bother to read hopefully you stop this trash story
bad grammar. if you don't mind mtl you'll be fine. if you have any standards, you'll quit after the first few paragraphs. other aspects of the sory are irrelevant if i can't stand reading it.
i write 5★ everywhere but grammars because it was a bit hard to read but please continue while also reading again and correct your mistakes please
Noticed the story only had 9 reviews so here you go. This Story is 100% MTL. Do not read unless you are at least at the Ancestor level of the Dao of the MTL. The story itself is not bad and has some original parts, but attempting to read without an advanced mastery in MTL will cause yours eyes to bleed, your organs to rupture, and your spleen to come alive, escape your body, and take out three credit cards in your name.