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Welp, the story is so cringe for me and im sure the author is a 100% chuuni due to his writing style. The plot itself is also cliche and mc is typical Japanese protagonist
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The author exaggerated many things and added unnecessary ones like spiral power or exaggerating Daniel ability to copy but at least he actually researched the worlds he included.
a good story but after introducing the protagonist in his previous life he was a God to me That was a moment that ruined the story the introduction of the multiverse was very bad if it happened to be an ability of the system that allows him to travel through the multiverse I even I would like Since it's common But that wasn't the case man I would really like the self-portraits and put what I said here making the protagonist not be a God in his past life introducing the multiverse in the same way I said I think it would be much better
Just by reading reviews and :author: response and :small: harem even without reading I can say this :work: is worse than Ninja Collection
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I'm getting tired of this story. I'll explain how I feel about it. Let's take the last few chapters (First 20 chapters) : when I calculated the number of days in the week, unless I made a mistake I counted 8 days in a week. I found parts or paragraphs that were repeated as if copied and pasted into a chapter. I find it hard to understand what the author means, often as if the content has not been edited. There are numerous spelling errors. I made it to chapter 20, but the end of this chapter is incomprehensible. I want someone to explain to me : if it's Monday, why does Haruo say that the weekend is about to begin as if it were already Friday? I won't talk about how the characters of Rito and Kenichi are displayed in this story, they are slightly better treated than what I usually see in other fan-fics where they are vilified that it's annoying with the MC who is trash and a hypocrite. Now let's talk about what I liked about this story, I like the understanding between the MC and the original main characters (Rito and Kenichi), the MC's powers in particular the spiral energy.
Wow I read the review and feel very sad. People hate author just because he didn't choose to kill. like they can try again, true but can't they get punish like sent to jail or lost everything they have. That 1 way to punish them to make them unable to do it again. I for 1 against the killing, because killing didn't change chit. You just kill one group of people only to cause someone higher up to grudge again you and cycle keep continue over and over. Not to mention, they didn't really get punish for it. Many decided to kill themselves then be punish, it was a way to escape accountability. To punish someone they must know what/why they did wrong and suffer consequence for it, and that can only happen when they are alive. I won't argue against those who read story and didn't like MC for anything else though, they have their opinion and they give this a try and just don't like it. And while I agree that maybe calling character who kill other an anti-hero edgelord might be overexaggerate. But in this side where majority of MC is overly edgelorde overpower who has no care for the world aside from their harem, it might not be that overly exaggerate.
Interesting story but the biggest problem, especially since this is a fighting novel, is that the fight scenes don't flow and it's pretty erratic and hard to follow preventing anyone from enjoying the battles.
Pretty standard story for me maybe because I’m more use to “bloodly?” Story I guess,the story’s not bad can’t say for the definite future but I wanted to ask about the no killing thing is it under the mentality all life is precious or something else because I saw taimanin arc and pretty sure it’s the whole demon gapists thing going on so is he not gonna kill them to and btw is he enforcing his whole no kill rule on others ?
Overall the characters are extremely bland. I don't even feel like im reading a real persons thoights. Its all very robotic. Im half convinced this is an A.I. Story, the mc has bland motivations. Most of the characters are only ever talked about for a chapter or two then left alone for 10. Very pokemon gotta catch em all. A lot of the powers don't even fit the setting. A girl agrees to the harem then never seen again. over all had a decent start but it quickly goes downhill.
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Author, if your vision of the world is like this, please do not go out into the real world or you will die of depression. the world is not it is not black or white
ネタバレを明かす
Moment you see waifu catalog, its just time to go. terrible since this looks good. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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I love the blend of all the worlds. ..,................,.................keep it up :)...........................................................................................
Reading the Summary and then reading the chapters showed me that this is nothing more but a typical harem story. The MC is overall not really that interesting, nothing about him is uniqur having a really bland personality. The strength is just their to make him look good for the female characters.Overall, just a basic story. Nothing really impressive or noteworthy.
Simplemente me encanta como extrañaba tus historias gracias por regresar en serio me encanta y como espero que se encuentre con los otros personajes de los animes de ese mundo y más las peleas como la de yujiro
O never knew killing your enemies who want to kill you is Edgelord behaviour. Like tell me you are stupid without telling me you are stupid. XD.
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if killing someone who wants to kill you or your family makes you an antihero edgelord, then every soldier that fought on the frontline to protect their family is an edgelord?
since this mc doesnt kill his enemies does he atleast torture or cripple them, if not then yeah no i doubt this author can actually write something good with this.
Muy buena la historia deberías agregar la historia tenjou tenge y medaka le quedan bien en las historias etc pero me gusta la historia sigue asi
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 And #54334 if you know, you know 😋
The math is simple if you don’t like system don’t read it don’t go around negatively review the story for no apparent reason and ruin other people work so you can feel little important about your miserable life . Thank you for the story I like it
I really liked the story😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Welp, the story is so cringe for me and im sure the author is a 100% chuuni due to his writing style. The plot itself is also cliche and mc is typical Japanese protagonist
[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]
The author exaggerated many things and added unnecessary ones like spiral power or exaggerating Daniel ability to copy but at least he actually researched the worlds he included.
a good story but after introducing the protagonist in his previous life he was a God to me That was a moment that ruined the story the introduction of the multiverse was very bad if it happened to be an ability of the system that allows him to travel through the multiverse I even I would like Since it's common But that wasn't the case man I would really like the self-portraits and put what I said here making the protagonist not be a God in his past life introducing the multiverse in the same way I said I think it would be much better
Just by reading reviews and :author: response and :small: harem even without reading I can say this :work: is worse than Ninja Collection
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I'm getting tired of this story. I'll explain how I feel about it. Let's take the last few chapters (First 20 chapters) : when I calculated the number of days in the week, unless I made a mistake I counted 8 days in a week. I found parts or paragraphs that were repeated as if copied and pasted into a chapter. I find it hard to understand what the author means, often as if the content has not been edited. There are numerous spelling errors. I made it to chapter 20, but the end of this chapter is incomprehensible. I want someone to explain to me : if it's Monday, why does Haruo say that the weekend is about to begin as if it were already Friday? I won't talk about how the characters of Rito and Kenichi are displayed in this story, they are slightly better treated than what I usually see in other fan-fics where they are vilified that it's annoying with the MC who is trash and a hypocrite. Now let's talk about what I liked about this story, I like the understanding between the MC and the original main characters (Rito and Kenichi), the MC's powers in particular the spiral energy.
Wow I read the review and feel very sad. People hate author just because he didn't choose to kill. like they can try again, true but can't they get punish like sent to jail or lost everything they have. That 1 way to punish them to make them unable to do it again. I for 1 against the killing, because killing didn't change chit. You just kill one group of people only to cause someone higher up to grudge again you and cycle keep continue over and over. Not to mention, they didn't really get punish for it. Many decided to kill themselves then be punish, it was a way to escape accountability. To punish someone they must know what/why they did wrong and suffer consequence for it, and that can only happen when they are alive. I won't argue against those who read story and didn't like MC for anything else though, they have their opinion and they give this a try and just don't like it. And while I agree that maybe calling character who kill other an anti-hero edgelord might be overexaggerate. But in this side where majority of MC is overly edgelorde overpower who has no care for the world aside from their harem, it might not be that overly exaggerate.
Interesting story but the biggest problem, especially since this is a fighting novel, is that the fight scenes don't flow and it's pretty erratic and hard to follow preventing anyone from enjoying the battles.
Pretty standard story for me maybe because I’m more use to “bloodly?” Story I guess,the story’s not bad can’t say for the definite future but I wanted to ask about the no killing thing is it under the mentality all life is precious or something else because I saw taimanin arc and pretty sure it’s the whole demon gapists thing going on so is he not gonna kill them to and btw is he enforcing his whole no kill rule on others ?
Overall the characters are extremely bland. I don't even feel like im reading a real persons thoights. Its all very robotic. Im half convinced this is an A.I. Story, the mc has bland motivations. Most of the characters are only ever talked about for a chapter or two then left alone for 10. Very pokemon gotta catch em all. A lot of the powers don't even fit the setting. A girl agrees to the harem then never seen again. over all had a decent start but it quickly goes downhill.
. . ............ . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . ............................................................
Author, if your vision of the world is like this, please do not go out into the real world or you will die of depression. the world is not it is not black or white
ネタバレを明かす Moment you see waifu catalog, its just time to go. terrible since this looks good. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
............................................................................................... ................. ... .............................................................. . ......................................... ... ..........................................................................................
I love the blend of all the worlds. ..,................,.................keep it up :)...........................................................................................
Reading the Summary and then reading the chapters showed me that this is nothing more but a typical harem story. The MC is overall not really that interesting, nothing about him is uniqur having a really bland personality. The strength is just their to make him look good for the female characters.Overall, just a basic story. Nothing really impressive or noteworthy.
Simplemente me encanta como extrañaba tus historias gracias por regresar en serio me encanta y como espero que se encuentre con los otros personajes de los animes de ese mundo y más las peleas como la de yujiro
O never knew killing your enemies who want to kill you is Edgelord behaviour. Like tell me you are stupid without telling me you are stupid. XD.
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if killing someone who wants to kill you or your family makes you an antihero edgelord, then every soldier that fought on the frontline to protect their family is an edgelord?
since this mc doesnt kill his enemies does he atleast torture or cripple them, if not then yeah no i doubt this author can actually write something good with this.
Muy buena la historia deberías agregar la historia tenjou tenge y medaka le quedan bien en las historias etc pero me gusta la historia sigue asi
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 And #54334 if you know, you know 😋
The math is simple if you don’t like system don’t read it don’t go around negatively review the story for no apparent reason and ruin other people work so you can feel little important about your miserable life . Thank you for the story I like it
I really liked the story😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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