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Ngl, this story is way better than I had first expected. The writing is good and the grammar for the most part is good, for a new author, the story is very very well done! Amazing work, author, I am quite impressed! 👏👏 Keep up the good work!
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This is a banging read. Obviously as an Itachi fan it's something I enjoy, but as a story it's really interesting and enjoyable. I definitely recommend it for anyone.
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I like how you make Itachi's personality in this book. I am not a big Itachi fan, so i don't really know how he acts in the canon. You did a great job author and i hope you still do in the future! I do hope you will not drop this book halfway, and will write until you find a suitable ending for it.
More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more.
I'm not picky about the quality of writing - 5 stars. the author updates often lately, so - 5 stars. In the development of the story, we are currently only 12 chapters in and the MC has only been alive in that world for a few days, so he has not done anything significant apart from killing the beast: 5 stars. the character design, well, in this part, it is basically Itachi in the body of a child that he failed to grow, but itachi's experiences and mindset allow him to seize opportunities and survive dangers - 5 stars. the world fund, at 12 chapters we didn't see almost anything of this, except the sect, the people, but since we are going 12 chapters it is understood, 5 stars. I'm not harsh with the review because it's a story that has just begun, while it progresses and more chapters are uploaded, I could edit this, I've read many Itachi FFs and most of them have disappointed me, expectations are present in this fanfic.
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Mostly fine, though Itachi is quite intelligent and wouldn't do certain things that he does in your novel. Also, some of the reactions are too strong for someone like Itachi to make.
its an interesting concept, will be appreciated if you don't drop it early.... Thanks for the good work.............👍✅👍✅👍✅👍✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .
Ohh here it is, btw author San do you plan like itachi going to the nether sect and taking over? Hope not, if he's in a sect hope he just makes one u know the 'UCHIHA SECT'?lol haha, Ohh lone cultivator sound good too.... Anyways author San hope u release some goodies soon...
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a good start. i can't wait for more. i love it. no harem pls and annoying girls. haha [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story has potential, do you have a release schedule? Good to have right away. Good luck with your fanfic, I will be looking forward to the next chapters.
more please ! it is really good and the grammars is great ! continue the good job , this fanfict has a lot of potential ! 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Hey guys, author here. If you are enjoying the novel please make sure to leave a review 🙏 Any and all feedback is appreciated. If you have any suggestions or ideas i can implement, please let me know from the reviews. Thanks and have a nice day!
Ngl, this story is way better than I had first expected. The writing is good and the grammar for the most part is good, for a new author, the story is very very well done! Amazing work, author, I am quite impressed! 👏👏 Keep up the good work!
....,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,......................,..................
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This is a banging read. Obviously as an Itachi fan it's something I enjoy, but as a story it's really interesting and enjoyable. I definitely recommend it for anyone.
👍 ......................................................................................................................................
I like how you make Itachi's personality in this book. I am not a big Itachi fan, so i don't really know how he acts in the canon. You did a great job author and i hope you still do in the future! I do hope you will not drop this book halfway, and will write until you find a suitable ending for it.
More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more. More more more more more.
I'm not picky about the quality of writing - 5 stars. the author updates often lately, so - 5 stars. In the development of the story, we are currently only 12 chapters in and the MC has only been alive in that world for a few days, so he has not done anything significant apart from killing the beast: 5 stars. the character design, well, in this part, it is basically Itachi in the body of a child that he failed to grow, but itachi's experiences and mindset allow him to seize opportunities and survive dangers - 5 stars. the world fund, at 12 chapters we didn't see almost anything of this, except the sect, the people, but since we are going 12 chapters it is understood, 5 stars. I'm not harsh with the review because it's a story that has just begun, while it progresses and more chapters are uploaded, I could edit this, I've read many Itachi FFs and most of them have disappointed me, expectations are present in this fanfic.
———————————//-/-///—————————/////-////——-/————————————-////—/—//-/-/—/-/—-//-///-///-/-/-/-//-//////-/-/-/-/-/—/-////////——-////-//—— i dont really write a whole review so I’m just going write a small sentence . the story is all around good and nice development to the story only thing is cultivation world really aren’t my thing but still pretty good
Mostly fine, though Itachi is quite intelligent and wouldn't do certain things that he does in your novel. Also, some of the reactions are too strong for someone like Itachi to make.
its an interesting concept, will be appreciated if you don't drop it early.... Thanks for the good work.............👍✅👍✅👍✅👍✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . Finally i found itachi ff. Thank you. Its very good .,................................... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .
Ohh here it is, btw author San do you plan like itachi going to the nether sect and taking over? Hope not, if he's in a sect hope he just makes one u know the 'UCHIHA SECT'?lol haha, Ohh lone cultivator sound good too.... Anyways author San hope u release some goodies soon...
ネタバレを明かす a good start. i can't wait for more. i love it. no harem pls and annoying girls. haha [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story has potential, do you have a release schedule? Good to have right away. Good luck with your fanfic, I will be looking forward to the next chapters.
more please ! it is really good and the grammars is great ! continue the good job , this fanfict has a lot of potential ! 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Hey guys, author here. If you are enjoying the novel please make sure to leave a review 🙏 Any and all feedback is appreciated. If you have any suggestions or ideas i can implement, please let me know from the reviews. Thanks and have a nice day!