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“Name and cause of death.” These were the first words Max heard when he found himself in an office where he was told he would transported to a world as one strongest beings in the realm: A Dragon Sage.
Thrown into a world full of malicious beasts, magic, and religious conflict, Max will have to use his wits and abilities to survive the harsh land he was transported to. Will he be able to save the world from damnation or will he be the one to destroy it. -W.T
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I haven't read the novel yet but I just wanted to point out that there are some work that needs to be done. First, the novel cover, it's really plain and I think that's an insect on the wall(?) Not that I've any problems with it, but if the cover could be more interesting then it might help you gather new readers easily. Next's the synopsis, again it's too plain and short.(i mean literally). A bit more elaborated synopsis would look better. Not to mention, there are some spelling mistakes in that too as well. Later I scrolled just to check your chapter length, which were slightly long as well, in addition there were many dialogues which included nothing but (--~`,etc) like symbols. Maybe I'll understand it better once when I've read it but still, seeing so many lines like this doesn't give the vibes of a novel. (If you know what I mean?)
Interesting plot as the MC doesn't know his death but was reborn. Some parts are complex as I don't know what they mean. Concentration is required, if word or sentence missed out not gonna understand the story. Helps to have patience. Keep going on author.
Alright! Max was really fun, the first chapter was amazing but the credits you put in the middle of the chapter... that ruined tge fun and the novel’s flow. The novel is butsting with potential due to Max but if you keep doing similar things like that, quite a few people won’t bother reading more even though the story is fun! Also, even if you do have to give credits, you can do it and the end like the other things you were explaining at last. There are a few things difficult to process and understand, so i believe some proof-reading would do the novel some good! And the issue with the incomprehensible parts can’t be given a nice name as typos but the good thing is that there are only 1 or 2 of then so nothing too much to worry about! Anyways, well done author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]