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Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.
The story development is okay and I like the how the novel doesn't follow the conventional beginning. Really unique and shows the author is being original. However, I hope the author would start updating more frequently other than that, this is a really good novel I recommend people should read😁😁
Love the characters, the voice of writing, and the fast-paced tempo. Or MC is funny, jolly, and someone I can't wait to see growing up and maturing as he ages! This world is quite new to me, but I'm certainly following this story to the end.
Ok, so far the writing quality is pretty decent (rated 4 stars), but needs to be polished up, due to frequent grammar and punctuation mistakes. This includes uses of speech marks (' ' and " "), which should be consistent and not swap between them. I recommend using " " for speech and then using ' ' these ones to name things inside the quotation marks (" "). In addition, you should either proofread your work or use something like Grammarly to help correct wrong uses of tenses or just incorrect sentences in general. I've kept a 3 star rating for stability of updates, since this is a recently published novel with only four chapters, so I can't comment too much on that. Next up is the story development, which I gave five stars. The story includes many unique aspects; such as transmigration and systems in a cultivation world. This gives the novel a lot of potential to be developed. In addition, this is just my own opinion, but looking at the overpowered MC styled plot, it seems that it will be fast-paced with minor to little adversities to go along with the OP genre. I have rated character design with four stars, which has been developed decently. The story has only illustrated minor details to the physical appearance of the characters so far, but the author's writing has conveyed their personality pretty well (for example: greedy, passionate or loving). Once again, I have rated world background as three stars, due to the current lack of content (world, continent, terrain, clans and sects etc), but this could just be due to the small number of chapters released so far. FYI, this is my first review, so the author and the readers should know that my statements may or may not be correct nor satisfactory for a novel review. Regardless, good luck to the author's writing journey and I recommend this book to readers who are looking for a weak-to-strong MC with an OP growth potential, thrilling content and a minuscule hint of comedy. Enjoy! [img=recommend]
it's good author-san👌❤️........................................................................................................................
Although parts of the story was really dragged out (the first fight), I think so far through 20 chapters the story is pretty good. I like how the mc actuslly has a personality and isn’ t dull like some other novels. I just need more updates😫
Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.
The story development is okay and I like the how the novel doesn't follow the conventional beginning. Really unique and shows the author is being original. However, I hope the author would start updating more frequently other than that, this is a really good novel I recommend people should read😁😁
Love the characters, the voice of writing, and the fast-paced tempo. Or MC is funny, jolly, and someone I can't wait to see growing up and maturing as he ages! This world is quite new to me, but I'm certainly following this story to the end.
Ok, so far the writing quality is pretty decent (rated 4 stars), but needs to be polished up, due to frequent grammar and punctuation mistakes. This includes uses of speech marks (' ' and " "), which should be consistent and not swap between them. I recommend using " " for speech and then using ' ' these ones to name things inside the quotation marks (" "). In addition, you should either proofread your work or use something like Grammarly to help correct wrong uses of tenses or just incorrect sentences in general. I've kept a 3 star rating for stability of updates, since this is a recently published novel with only four chapters, so I can't comment too much on that. Next up is the story development, which I gave five stars. The story includes many unique aspects; such as transmigration and systems in a cultivation world. This gives the novel a lot of potential to be developed. In addition, this is just my own opinion, but looking at the overpowered MC styled plot, it seems that it will be fast-paced with minor to little adversities to go along with the OP genre. I have rated character design with four stars, which has been developed decently. The story has only illustrated minor details to the physical appearance of the characters so far, but the author's writing has conveyed their personality pretty well (for example: greedy, passionate or loving). Once again, I have rated world background as three stars, due to the current lack of content (world, continent, terrain, clans and sects etc), but this could just be due to the small number of chapters released so far. FYI, this is my first review, so the author and the readers should know that my statements may or may not be correct nor satisfactory for a novel review. Regardless, good luck to the author's writing journey and I recommend this book to readers who are looking for a weak-to-strong MC with an OP growth potential, thrilling content and a minuscule hint of comedy. Enjoy! [img=recommend]
it's good author-san👌❤️........................................................................................................................
Although parts of the story was really dragged out (the first fight), I think so far through 20 chapters the story is pretty good. I like how the mc actuslly has a personality and isn’ t dull like some other novels. I just need more updates😫