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Too many things that take away from ho world. Doesn't explain a lot of things and skip key conversations or info. Update schedule is bad when stops randomly. Doing this whole different dimension thing and taking away from hp. Not really a hp fic and should take tag off
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Real great like the critical role cross keep it up Skekemkenenekemkkekmdmdkdkdmdmkkekdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkkddkdldkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdk
Love this story a lot. please keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story! Great Idea! Great writing! This story is great and is absolutely full of potential. I just can't wait for more chapters to read and hope you don't drop it like it seems you did with some of your other stories.
Looks good so far! Keep it up mate! 👍😎 .........................sjbhscsvagsvshvavahavahhzbzhsvshsdjxnxhzbsbsnsnxjxkxmnsjshsjsjsmsnsvddvsixbdjdnsbdbdjdbzhsvsvshbxbdhdhshnsjdhdjdjsjnsnsjdhdhp
Too many things that take away from ho world. Doesn't explain a lot of things and skip key conversations or info. Update schedule is bad when stops randomly. Doing this whole different dimension thing and taking away from hp. Not really a hp fic and should take tag off
ネタバレを明かす Real great like the critical role cross keep it up Skekemkenenekemkkekmdmdkdkdmdmkkekdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkkddkdldkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdk
Love this story a lot. please keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story! Great Idea! Great writing! This story is great and is absolutely full of potential. I just can't wait for more chapters to read and hope you don't drop it like it seems you did with some of your other stories.
Looks good so far! Keep it up mate! 👍😎 .........................sjbhscsvagsvshvavahavahhzbzhsvshsdjxnxhzbsbsnsnxjxkxmnsjshsjsjsmsnsvddvsixbdjdnsbdbdjdbzhsvsvshbxbdhdhshnsjdhdjdjsjnsnsjdhdhp
loved the story, but hated the amount of haters in the coments