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Quit good I suppose ? Hazbin hotel is a vast world to portrate so adding OC is understandable. But the MC is (quite some time) a spectator of it's own story. Not dumb nor useless per se. But viewed as a background character. The story being at it's begining, changes and improvement are still possible. That is just my humble opinion. But nether less, I still quite enjoy the story. Please continue, and do not depresed, You have potential and improvement are visible.
Mc is garbage, dumb and pathetic. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hazbin Hotel has only been released for over a week and it already has a fanfic? VERY GOOD!!!! ULTRA GOOOD! I APPLAUD YOU AUTHOR-SAN!
Quit good I suppose ? Hazbin hotel is a vast world to portrate so adding OC is understandable. But the MC is (quite some time) a spectator of it's own story. Not dumb nor useless per se. But viewed as a background character. The story being at it's begining, changes and improvement are still possible. That is just my humble opinion. But nether less, I still quite enjoy the story. Please continue, and do not depresed, You have potential and improvement are visible.
Mc is garbage, dumb and pathetic. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hazbin Hotel has only been released for over a week and it already has a fanfic? VERY GOOD!!!! ULTRA GOOOD! I APPLAUD YOU AUTHOR-SAN!