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I'm not sure how people would feel but I think it's an improvement compared to the first fanfic? Maybe it's just me but I hope I've improved...
Not bad bit chaotic but otherwise good few grammar mistakes but not enough to cause problems nice story very fluffy slice of life fantasy romance keep up the good work 😎😎
updates going to be every 2 weeks or so because I let the chapters pile up before I upload here... and my updates become 1 chapter per 2 days which is pretty bad so chapters are a bit less than I expected
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I'm not sure how people would feel but I think it's an improvement compared to the first fanfic? Maybe it's just me but I hope I've improved...
Not bad bit chaotic but otherwise good few grammar mistakes but not enough to cause problems nice story very fluffy slice of life fantasy romance keep up the good work 😎😎
updates going to be every 2 weeks or so because I let the chapters pile up before I upload here... and my updates become 1 chapter per 2 days which is pretty bad so chapters are a bit less than I expected
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