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Ok, i clearly don't belong to this genre but i have few things to say. The story sparks some intrigue. it has potential that readers should be aware of. there are some issues however. the tenses used keep switching that its almost jarring. also the perspective is thrown off a few times. if corrections are made then it will be a great read.
Ok, i clearly don't belong to this genre but i have few things to say. The story sparks some intrigue. it has potential that readers should be aware of. there are some issues however. the tenses used keep switching that its almost jarring. also the perspective is thrown off a few times. if corrections are made then it will be a great read.