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For what you wrote, there was no flaw worth mentioning, it is great and I hope you read my comment on 'chapter 3' for some ideas on how to continue with the story or at least with the world of The Boys, thanks for your hard work and I hope you continue it.
What if you made it so that the verse itself imposes a limit on how strong you could get, like the boys verse he can only get as strong as he is now but as he goes to more and more verses he gets steadily stronger?
This is a good read. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. ✍ This is a good read. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. ✍
Honestly, I think it's best to control Madelyn Stillwell, after all, she is a senior member of Vought and possibly the future CEO of the company. Controlling it is the same as controlling Vought, which would be very useful as it is one of the largest and most powerful companies in the world. so far, the novel is being amazing in my opinion, only the slow releases drive me crazy, but other than that, everything is perfect.
Finally a Homelander SI.......and its a good start ......keep up the good work and all the best .....will review after more chapters .....the first chapter is awesome[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice start keep up your great work . NOT many people choice the boys as base great choice[img=recommend] I hope and will enjoy your new chapters and wish you sone nice experience writing your story.
i really hope you don't drop this even if it is on an indefinite hiatus i would really like you to continue after some time ......
For what you wrote, there was no flaw worth mentioning, it is great and I hope you read my comment on 'chapter 3' for some ideas on how to continue with the story or at least with the world of The Boys, thanks for your hard work and I hope you continue it.
What if you made it so that the verse itself imposes a limit on how strong you could get, like the boys verse he can only get as strong as he is now but as he goes to more and more verses he gets steadily stronger?
This is a good read. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. ✍ This is a good read. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. Hope you will continue to write this. ✍
Honestly, I think it's best to control Madelyn Stillwell, after all, she is a senior member of Vought and possibly the future CEO of the company. Controlling it is the same as controlling Vought, which would be very useful as it is one of the largest and most powerful companies in the world. so far, the novel is being amazing in my opinion, only the slow releases drive me crazy, but other than that, everything is perfect.
Finally a Homelander SI.......and its a good start ......keep up the good work and all the best .....will review after more chapters .....the first chapter is awesome[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice start keep up your great work . NOT many people choice the boys as base great choice[img=recommend] I hope and will enjoy your new chapters and wish you sone nice experience writing your story.
i really hope you don't drop this even if it is on an indefinite hiatus i would really like you to continue after some time ......