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I still don't understand who the main character-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
bruh this is literally my vampire system there was almost zero changes the only thing that was change was that they added a brother changing the main character from Quinn to rayen or whatever
La escritura es bastante mala y aunque no es una necesidad, pero sería bueno un poco más de claridad para aquellos que no se han leído la novela original, además la historia parece girar más entorno a quinn que al MC, de todas formas le doy una calificación regular
it's started very nicely but after that nightmare arc the fic started going down hill. specially power, in the fic it's shows at first that it takes half of mc hp to use a little of blood energy but in another chap suddenly he started using like he has over a thousand hp and have a massive blood energy however again in another chap he got tired which didn't happen in any previous chap after coming back from nightmare place. also the team members at first put mc as weak and suddenly when fighting in another planet they became canon fodder characters and mc became strong without even showing them his abilities.
mc is a ghost to the story who only shows up at plot points changes nothing then returns to ghost hood. then the main cast randomly forgets thing they learned or just talked about the mc in the next chapter causing much frustration.
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The writing is great. Never read My Vampire System but i am liking this one the character interaction everything is good. Wanted to read more of it.
This fanfic is a great read and well thought out. It has great grammar and character development, It dosen't necessarily follow the plot to a tee but branches out to give us a sense of adventure. The Mc interaction with the main cast feels real. it's well integrated with the novel and makes you wanting to read more. It is a bit slow paced but that's to be expected as the Author shows how detailed he's making his fanfic and world development around the Mc. Great stability in releases and worth reading.
I've never read My Vampire System, but this is interesting enough. I was not a fan of that dream chapter though. I skimmed it till he woke up. Lol
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I am reviewing my own book, which I believe is of good quality despite some minor errors. English is not my first language, so I am open to any constructive criticism or feedback. If you enjoy the book, please consider leaving a review that expresses your positive opinion, such as "Wow, it's really good! Keep up the great work." I appreciate any support and encouragement as I continue to work on my writing.
I love My Vampire System. I hope you can continue writing it. So far, the story is decent, and I look forward to seeing improvement in the future.
Amazing love My Vampire System and live you ideas for this novel can't wait for more and hope you continue doing this and long and better chapters. Love you and your Work
the beginning was really good but fell off a bit, now id say its decent but i stopped reading at around 46 chapters...............................
I still don't understand who the main character-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
bruh this is literally my vampire system there was almost zero changes the only thing that was change was that they added a brother changing the main character from Quinn to rayen or whatever
La escritura es bastante mala y aunque no es una necesidad, pero sería bueno un poco más de claridad para aquellos que no se han leído la novela original, además la historia parece girar más entorno a quinn que al MC, de todas formas le doy una calificación regular
it's started very nicely but after that nightmare arc the fic started going down hill. specially power, in the fic it's shows at first that it takes half of mc hp to use a little of blood energy but in another chap suddenly he started using like he has over a thousand hp and have a massive blood energy however again in another chap he got tired which didn't happen in any previous chap after coming back from nightmare place. also the team members at first put mc as weak and suddenly when fighting in another planet they became canon fodder characters and mc became strong without even showing them his abilities.
mc is a ghost to the story who only shows up at plot points changes nothing then returns to ghost hood. then the main cast randomly forgets thing they learned or just talked about the mc in the next chapter causing much frustration.
ネタバレを明かす The writing is great. Never read My Vampire System but i am liking this one the character interaction everything is good. Wanted to read more of it.
This fanfic is a great read and well thought out. It has great grammar and character development, It dosen't necessarily follow the plot to a tee but branches out to give us a sense of adventure. The Mc interaction with the main cast feels real. it's well integrated with the novel and makes you wanting to read more. It is a bit slow paced but that's to be expected as the Author shows how detailed he's making his fanfic and world development around the Mc. Great stability in releases and worth reading.
I've never read My Vampire System, but this is interesting enough. I was not a fan of that dream chapter though. I skimmed it till he woke up. Lol
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I am reviewing my own book, which I believe is of good quality despite some minor errors. English is not my first language, so I am open to any constructive criticism or feedback. If you enjoy the book, please consider leaving a review that expresses your positive opinion, such as "Wow, it's really good! Keep up the great work." I appreciate any support and encouragement as I continue to work on my writing.
I love My Vampire System. I hope you can continue writing it. So far, the story is decent, and I look forward to seeing improvement in the future.
Amazing love My Vampire System and live you ideas for this novel can't wait for more and hope you continue doing this and long and better chapters. Love you and your Work
the beginning was really good but fell off a bit, now id say its decent but i stopped reading at around 46 chapters...............................